• Story: Photo Shoot

    [Grimdark] "Like a sharp needle applied to the skin, Photo Shoot is an interesting little instrument filled with insanity and intrigue."-Pre Reader #23 (Showoff)


    Author: ItsTheWhinyGuys
    Description: She shall pay. She shall pay dearly for snubbing Rarity and her fashions...
    Photo Shoot Docs
    Photo Shoot DA

    Additional Tags: Anger, revenge, murder, dark humor, Photo Finish

    19 comments:

    1. Aw hell, Photo Finish is screwed.

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    2. Ok, the ending to the first part is kinda funny in how it counters the first chunk. That ending paragraph is just cute :D

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    3. Since Rarity and Photo Finish are my 2 favourites, I didn't think that I'd like this very much. It was actually quite well-written and made the most of Rarity's perspective.

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    4. It was a good story. Kinda short though.

      Got my heart racing at some parts.

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    6. Fluttershy would probably have a more cunning plan, such as say...leaving a 'special order' for Pinkie...

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    7. Pretty good, just felt too short.
      I would gladly read a chapter 2 of this.

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    8. >Anger, revenge, murder

      mfw i saw the header image

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    9. Heh, that was fun for what it was. A tad short.

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    10. But, but it needs more. The ending just well....

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    11. I never ever read Grimdark. Ever. Except for the fallout crossover, but that one doesn't count.

      Somehow though, I knew I wouldn't mind this story. And I was right. Anyway, yeah, its ok I guess. Written well enough, but it doesn't really stump the reader. Kept me occupied for a few minutes anyway.

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    12. Lol.
      This was great. It'd like a second chapter,though.

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    13. I am now envisioning Rarity dressed as agent 47.

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    14. yayy! I loved it! REVENGEEEE MUAHAHHAHAHA

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    15. To all those saying this should be longer/needs a continuation: it is quite possible I will extend this a bit, seeing how there were a few parts I had wanted to expand on here and there, but I really did envision this more as a one-shot; I don't think I'll be doing a sequel, to be honest.

      Anyways, thanks for the critique and support!

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    16. Rarity + Grimdark = Perfect Combo
      Nice story!

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    17. And then rather than either of them or any of the major-minor characters, it shall be her assistant herself who pulls the trigger.

      For the mistreat that she had done, thou shall pay its price.

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    18. Pretty good. As obvious as the ending was, I think it works.

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