• Story: Photo Shoot

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    [Grimdark] "Like a sharp needle applied to the skin, Photo Shoot is an interesting little instrument filled with insanity and intrigue."-Pre Reader #23 (Showoff)


    Author: ItsTheWhinyGuys
    Description: She shall pay. She shall pay dearly for snubbing Rarity and her fashions...
    Photo Shoot Docs
    Photo Shoot DA

    Additional Tags: Anger, revenge, murder, dark humor, Photo Finish
    esmaspäev, 23. mai 2011 op
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    19 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 14:05

      Aw hell, Photo Finish is screwed.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 14:11

      Ok, the ending to the first part is kinda funny in how it counters the first chunk. That ending paragraph is just cute :D

      VastaKustuta
    3. Shadow Phoenix23. mai 2011, kell 14:14

      Since Rarity and Photo Finish are my 2 favourites, I didn't think that I'd like this very much. It was actually quite well-written and made the most of Rarity's perspective.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Hikuro1423. mai 2011, kell 14:16

      It was a good story. Kinda short though.

      Got my heart racing at some parts.

      VastaKustuta
    5. T.O. Brony23. mai 2011, kell 14:17

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    6. T.O. Brony23. mai 2011, kell 14:18

      Fluttershy would probably have a more cunning plan, such as say...leaving a 'special order' for Pinkie...

      VastaKustuta
    7. RedCore23. mai 2011, kell 14:28

      Pretty good, just felt too short.
      I would gladly read a chapter 2 of this.

      VastaKustuta
    8. sponsz23. mai 2011, kell 14:29

      >Anger, revenge, murder

      mfw i saw the header image

      VastaKustuta
    9. Ninestempest23. mai 2011, kell 14:38

      Heh, that was fun for what it was. A tad short.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Fluttershy23. mai 2011, kell 14:41

      But, but it needs more. The ending just well....

      VastaKustuta
    11. Baree23. mai 2011, kell 14:43

      I never ever read Grimdark. Ever. Except for the fallout crossover, but that one doesn't count.

      Somehow though, I knew I wouldn't mind this story. And I was right. Anyway, yeah, its ok I guess. Written well enough, but it doesn't really stump the reader. Kept me occupied for a few minutes anyway.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 15:36

      Lol.
      This was great. It'd like a second chapter,though.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 15:58

      I am now envisioning Rarity dressed as agent 47.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Epona23. mai 2011, kell 17:01

      yayy! I loved it! REVENGEEEE MUAHAHHAHAHA

      VastaKustuta
    15. ItsTheWhinyGuys23. mai 2011, kell 17:42

      To all those saying this should be longer/needs a continuation: it is quite possible I will extend this a bit, seeing how there were a few parts I had wanted to expand on here and there, but I really did envision this more as a one-shot; I don't think I'll be doing a sequel, to be honest.

      Anyways, thanks for the critique and support!

      VastaKustuta
    16. La Barata2. juuni 2011, kell 14:02

      GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

      VastaKustuta
    17. Anonüümne5. juuni 2011, kell 12:53

      Rarity + Grimdark = Perfect Combo
      Nice story!

      VastaKustuta
    18. A G.16. juuli 2011, kell 03:18

      And then rather than either of them or any of the major-minor characters, it shall be her assistant herself who pulls the trigger.

      For the mistreat that she had done, thou shall pay its price.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Roxor7. august 2011, kell 06:40

      Pretty good. As obvious as the ending was, I think it works.

      VastaKustuta

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