• Story: Nopony Can Resist 'Em

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    [Shipping] It's short, sweet, and wonderfully cheesy, and it knows it.-Pre-reader #15

    Author: N.K.
    Description: It's said that the fastest way to a colt's heart is through his stomach. When Soarin's sweet tooth begins to arise while visiting Rainbow Dash, he's advised to pay a visit to Sweet Apple Acres. Will he recognise the mare who made the pie of his dreams when out of dress?
    Nopony Can Resist 'Em

    Additional Tags: Short, Sweet, Light-Hearted, Cuddly, Pies
    Tuesday, May 31, 2011 op
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    37 comments:

    1. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:12 PM

      Yep, pre-reader 15 pretty much hit the nail on the head. A pretty well-written story, and I found it really cute!

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    2. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:19 PM

      Bow chika wow woooow

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    3. DaveMay 31, 2011 at 6:19 PM

      Eeyup. Twas amusing. I liked it.

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    4. BobcatMay 31, 2011 at 6:20 PM

      So, what happens when a drunken Big Mac comes home to find his sister in bed with some stranger?

      I say Pitchfork Wedding.

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    5. mbulshtMay 31, 2011 at 6:22 PM

      Haha, this one was pretty good. I'd like to see more of this ship.

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    6. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:25 PM

      They did or did not have sex?

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    7. ToonNinjaMay 31, 2011 at 6:26 PM

      Well that progressed... quickly. Very interesting read, and apparently a new pairing to keep on my radar...

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    8. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:26 PM

      @Bobcat

      I say sequel.

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    9. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:28 PM

      @Anonymous

      I agree.

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    10. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:42 PM

      @Anonymous
      I agree with your agreement.

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    11. Brett TurnerMay 31, 2011 at 6:51 PM

      andthentheyallfucked.gif

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    12. BobcatMay 31, 2011 at 6:55 PM

      @Brett Turner Now now, only one or two bases were crossed.

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    13. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 6:57 PM

      @Anonymous

      Sounds like they did not go all the way.

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    14. neoswordmasterMay 31, 2011 at 7:13 PM

      That was so cheesy I think my arteries are clogged.

      And I mean this in the best way possible.

      Fun little read.

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    15. ZettaLuxMay 31, 2011 at 7:38 PM

      As said before, fun little read. But I found the progression to be a little too fast, to at least be realistic. Nonetheless, nicely done.

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    16. TenchiFreak5May 31, 2011 at 7:57 PM

      Got a good laugh out of this one. Pre-reader #15 was right on the money.

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    17. KyleMay 31, 2011 at 8:31 PM

      That was a cute, funny little story. Nothing really game-changing or revolutionary, but a solid little piece of work, and quite amusing.

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    18. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 8:40 PM

      And then Applebloom was an auntie.

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    19. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 8:47 PM

      @supervanman64

      My thoughts exactly. ;)

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    20. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 9:10 PM

      Yeah...it did progress a little quickly...

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    21. HayatecooperMay 31, 2011 at 9:22 PM

      I like it, we need more of this pairing. It makes so much sense.

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    22. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 9:24 PM

      You drag us right up to the bed chamber and don't even give us a peak inside. Lame.

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    23. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 10:19 PM

      I enjoyed this TOO much... oh Celestia... WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME?

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    24. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 10:37 PM

      I agree with Kyle, and also, I think the last line is the best one.

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    25. AnonymousJune 1, 2011 at 2:22 AM

      Could've used a bit more of a build-up, either between the pie and the kissing, or between them kissing and going to bed, but otherwise solid.

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    26. NyokoJune 1, 2011 at 2:45 AM

      Author here - thank you for all the comments and feedback, it's much appreciated. :)

      Major problem point seems to be the rush - I think you're probably all right, though I kind of set myself the goal of doing a quick story as my first ever piece - 3000 words in 2 hours was the goal, and I didn't want to try and go NSFW on my first ever MLP story - hence why the naughty is only implied, and not fully at that. AJ strikes me as the kind of girl to not go the absolute full hog at the very first. Of course, you're free to imagine how the night went otherwise. ;)

      Anyway, thank you for the comments and reviews, and I shall be submitting and writing a few more fics before the month is out.

      -N.K.

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    27. justsomeponyJune 1, 2011 at 2:58 AM

      That was really cute! Great job Nyoko!!

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    28. ratinha DeyJune 1, 2011 at 8:57 AM

      That was a cutie and lovely story!! and I imagined all that, it was an amazing story so well written and so charming!

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    29. AnonymousJune 1, 2011 at 2:07 PM

      I hate Google docs. it's slow on my comp (which is outdated sooo lol)
      but.
      I had.
      to read this.

      FHEJKFJADSKLAFJDKSJEWOIA
      INTRO PIC WAS ADORABLE
      AND I HAD THE DASH FACE THE ENTIRE TIME I WAS READING THIS!!!!!
      SO.... CUTE....! /)>3<(\
      I even found the implied sex adorable. is that weird? O.o
      anyway, yeah, i agree that it was a bit rushed too, and the ending was confusing; was it Spitfire or RD outside the window? or both? that needed to be a bit more clear.
      GRRR, FIRST APPLEDASH
      THEN BIG MACXFLUTTERSHY
      NOW SOARIN X APPLEJACK
      CRACK PAIRINGS FTW.jpg

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    30. TwentyPercentCoolerJune 20, 2011 at 8:06 PM

      Not bad, not bad at all.

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    31. Muff_Muff94July 5, 2011 at 6:04 PM

      It needs a sequal, It was amusing, but ending did not amuse, and the rush part should be less rushy

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    32. Colt.45July 28, 2011 at 2:13 AM

      Ha, that was adorable! Even considering how easy Applejack was, I couldn't help but smile the whole time. It's definitely sexual in implication, but as well, it was just so cute and playful that it almost seemed...innocent? Not the word i'm looking for, but close enough. Very enjoyable read.

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    33. AnonymousJuly 30, 2011 at 11:33 PM

      @supervanman64 Tucker shut up!

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    34. von BoomslangSeptember 10, 2011 at 2:18 PM

      I, for one, disagree with the complaints of it feeling "rushed". If it was treated like a discovery of the 'one true love' between strangers, then maybe, but here it seems more, well, a one night stand (hold the sex) between two company-hungry ponies, who just might develop into something more down the line.

      I mean, hell. Complete strangers do more over less.

      Oh and yes. Loved it.

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    35. statooseNovember 13, 2011 at 2:36 PM

      Goodness, how I wish this would be continued :)

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    36. Marcelo TorricoJuly 9, 2012 at 7:50 PM

      Although SoarinDash is my favorite shipping, im goign to read this one...

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    37. Present PerfectSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:20 PM

      Just listened to a reading of this on Youtube. It's fast, like others have said, yet the setup rings true for the start of a relationship between them. I'm glad you left it open as to what they did in bed (I don't see AJ jumping straight to sex, but I can see her just spending the night with a colt like that). Frankly, I just can't resist this ship.

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