• Story: MLP The School Years (Update Part 3!)

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    [Normal] Humanized poni! Oh lawdy

    Author: Aether Ouranos
    Description: We've all been through some schooling, but what happens when the ponies have to go through it? Tori (Twilight) is new to the School of Equestria, will she be able to fit into a group that's known each other for most of their lives?
    MLP The School Years Part 1
    MLP The School Years Part 2
    MLP The School Years Part 3 (New!)

    Additional Tags: Humanized
    Wednesday, July 20, 2011 op
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    67 comments:

    1. MuffinsforeverMay 23, 2011 at 9:00 AM

      First!

      And looks weird, but I'll try it.

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    2. LOLZorzsMay 23, 2011 at 9:05 AM

      +1Million views in just a week And now it's 7Million you really should let us view the stats so which was the fastest million or is gonna be>_>

      Anyways put up the new banner or comic or whatever

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    3. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 9:10 AM

      Humanized?
      That's the pony stuff I like the least :/

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    4. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 9:15 AM

      I thought you were doing daily updates, Seth...

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    5. Walter44May 23, 2011 at 9:22 AM

      I liked that one. In fact, I'd really like to read more of that story. Humanized versions of some of the episodes don't sound too bad, in my humble opinion...

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    6. 2007excalibur2007May 23, 2011 at 9:23 AM

      Needs more pony. :|

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    7. TosxychorMay 23, 2011 at 9:30 AM

      @Anonymous
      The daily updates are for just that, the updates (of already posted content). New stuff entirely gets a new post, like the rest.

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    8. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 9:34 AM

      @Tosxychor
      Ohhhh. Crap, and here I thought my F5 button would get a rest.

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    9. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 9:44 AM

      This was really good!you have to make more!

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    10. Not A Clever PonyMay 23, 2011 at 9:48 AM

      I think I'm deranged.

      As soon as I read the words "Professor Luna", I expected her to make the use of abacuses mandatory.

      Damn you, Luna vs Microwave.

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    11. Aether_OuranosMay 23, 2011 at 10:05 AM

      Thanks for the support...I'm working on part II as we speak...maybe there will be abacuses in the future. Let's hope that Luna doesn't incur the wraith of "Cassandra" again.

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    12. MikauSchekzenMay 23, 2011 at 10:06 AM

      I really love this story. Unlike most others(apparently), I do like humanized versions of ponies.

      The ending was heart-warming, which was nice. I don't suppose there will be more of this?

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    13. cloudMay 23, 2011 at 10:34 AM

      I have a character sheet made for this kind of school story also, but my English is terrible to write fanfic, so I just leave them alone.

      here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iXCxAaUerIyU2mWSJqa9_h96_ynZRdBtMUt6yU0QNUY/edit?hl=en_US&pli=1#

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    14. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 10:51 AM

      I want to see that dream comic incorporated into the story.
      http://ponibooru.413chan.net/_images/01720b94ea231d77e64f3315db1e02fe/5521%20-%20applejack%20dream%20fluttershy%20human%20madmax%20rainbow_dash%20rarity%20twilight_sparkle.jpg

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    15. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 10:52 AM

      http://csimadmax.deviantart.com/art/weird-dreams-204943141

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    16. LachlanMay 23, 2011 at 11:41 AM

      @Cloud Why does it have to be in english? Write in your native language for your [Native language here] Bronies! Do it!

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    17. Aether_OuranosMay 23, 2011 at 11:44 AM

      @Cloud: I like your ideas and would love to see your take on the matter! Go ahead and write in whatever language you have to!

      @Anon: That was kinda an inspiration point for me, along with a couple other photos I found.

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    18. hawkysuMay 23, 2011 at 11:57 AM

      @cloudWhat's your native language? If you write it in your native tongue, I'm sure someone will help translate.

      In fact, we should start translating more fics.
      Except ones that are intended to remain untranslated.
      ----
      Also, I loved this fic

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    19. cloudMay 23, 2011 at 12:07 PM

      @ Lachlan: dammit, stop exposing me.

      @ Aether and Hawkysu: lol.
      @ Aether: thanks.
      @ Hawkysu: if you want, I can write in both language to save the effort of translation.
      Or, if I really write in just Chinese, then I may ask the translator to let me see the translated version, to prevent my fanfic from being too off.
      My native language is Chinese and prefers talking in Chinese, but I prefer writing in English, however.

      Anyway, don't get your hope too high.

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    20. cloudMay 23, 2011 at 12:13 PM

      But, if there are some Chinese(nationality) bronies, I can consider writing in both Chinese and English.

      In case you are confused, I have to emphasize here: I am Chinese(race/ethnicity), not Chinese(nationality).

      but, I am in lack of proficiency and depth in both language.

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    21. hawkysuMay 23, 2011 at 12:15 PM

      @cloud
      Unfortunately, I only know simplified but: 我说中文.
      And I have a friend who can help me with (traditional) Chinese. But if you wanna write both versions, that's cool. I can help edit the English grammar and such, and maybe prevent a loss of meaning.

      Let me know: [email protected]

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    22. cloudMay 23, 2011 at 12:50 PM

      okay, then I will write in Traditional Chinese.

      可是我很好奇。
      我弱弱地問一下：中國/台灣有很多bronies嗎？

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    23. Lurks-no-MoreMay 23, 2011 at 1:32 PM

      This is probably the only Alternate Universe High School fic that I've seen that actually works. :D

      (If I ever do a humanized pony fic, I'm so going to make them college-aged, though. Not want to push my luck.)

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    24. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 1:33 PM

      I really liked this first chapter :) Everyone was decently in character even with the humanisation, especially Pinkie Pie with the incessant questioning and extremely fast development of monologue-y things. You know what I mean. Interesting, I'll look forwards to seeing more!

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    25. T.O. BronyMay 23, 2011 at 1:40 PM

      Professor Luna should watch herself, because Prince- Principal Cassandra WILL put her on probation...ON THE MOON!

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    26. WeirdRaptorMay 23, 2011 at 2:18 PM

      I liked. Dear author, don't pay any attention to the neighsayers concerning the humanization. Just write as you see fit and please continue.

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    27. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 3:04 PM

      this made me happy, I wish this didn't have the complete tag. because I could see taking this several episodes to the prom/gala episode and being able to close it proper.

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    28. MarkeithMay 23, 2011 at 3:06 PM

      I've never been one for humanized pony stuff, but this story is pretty good.Professor Luna reminds me of my English teacher from my senior year of high school..under that gruff and stern exterior though I'm pretty sure she's a genuinely nice person who cares about her students.I also like how you nailed the characters of the main six...it'd be a pleasure to see more!

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    29. hawkysuMay 23, 2011 at 4:04 PM

      Seriously Aether, write more or I'll be forced to take drastic measures

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    30. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 5:18 PM

      THIS. IS. INCREDIBLE.

      MOAR PLOX.

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    31. SomeGuyMay 23, 2011 at 7:22 PM

      This was a great story. You did a good job of translating the ponies into humans. Hope to see more stuff from you.

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    32. Aether_OuranosMay 23, 2011 at 8:12 PM

      To all who are worrying, don't! I'm hard at work on part II...Thanks for all the positive support!

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    33. AnonymousMay 24, 2011 at 1:43 AM

      This is awesome! Especially that AJ is Audrey, 'cause that's my name! :O Can't wait to read more!

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    34. AbalidothMay 24, 2011 at 3:03 PM

      I really liked it, but I was a little disoriented by Rarity being named Rachel. Whenever I would idly speculate on what the mane cast's "human" names would be, I always figured on Rachel for Rainbow Dash. Then again, the name Rachel is associated with action girls for me because I read a lot of Animorphs as a kid...

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    35. reynard61July 9, 2011 at 9:59 PM

      "Zecora: Don’t have any plans for her yet.  With my setting and all it’s kinda hard to work her character in."

      Perhaps she could be a transfer or exchange student? Possibly studying Botany or Herbal medicine?

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    36. DaveJuly 9, 2011 at 10:43 PM

      Just a small typo that irked me. You have it as Principle Cassandra. Should be Principal. Grammar freak like that. :P

      Other than that, I enjoyed this alot. Now, I suppose it makes sense in the show that we don't really see any of Spike's friends, as he's only Twilight's employee. What kind of friend's do you plan on giving him? I'm assuming the bullies are gonna be a pain in the ass for everyone, but I think it'd be a hilarious twist to have an overarching plot with Spike befriending them and seeing how it works from there.

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    37. PatriciaJuly 9, 2011 at 11:57 PM

      Hopefully a Trixie is being written in here somewhere right?

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    38. AnonymousJuly 10, 2011 at 12:25 AM

      You're putting Derpy in, right?

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    39. AnonymousJuly 10, 2011 at 12:55 AM

      @Dave

      >grammar freak

      >says "alot"

      >mfw

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    40. Aether_OuranosJuly 10, 2011 at 5:01 AM

      @Patricia and @Anon:

      The Great and Powerful Twixie will be showing up, I just need to figure out how to properly do it :P.

      And as for Derpy (Diana)...let's just say that there are plans for her.

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    41. Theta the SheepJuly 10, 2011 at 1:56 PM

      Yay! I'm glad to see that you have some light shipping with Dash prepared. I was gonna suggest it if you hadn't said anything about it. As a suggestion, this is if you hadn't already had this idea yourself, you should write a chapter (or two) about the group during Spring Break. They can all go visit somewhere or something or the sort. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Keep up the good work. Oh, and I loved Dash punching that guy in the face in the first chapter. That made me happy. :D

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    42. Beige MonkfishJuly 10, 2011 at 3:12 PM

      Just to let the author know, I think part 2 is currently publicly editable. You might want to change that.

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    43. lmaozorzzJuly 10, 2011 at 9:36 PM

      Hey i just finished reading it and its really good! One thing that maybe you could put in, is introduce a guy into the story, now i dont mean to have him ship with any of the mane 6, dear lord no, but have him as a friend of the girls, so i there could be at least one non-ass guy character. :

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    44. Aether_OuranosJuly 10, 2011 at 10:54 PM

      @lmaozorzz Hmm...an OC. Didn't think about that one lol. I'll consider throwing in members of the opposite gender...

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    45. AnonymousJuly 10, 2011 at 11:33 PM

      Isn't Derpy the one who walks around absent-mindedly humming to herself and collecting pieces of tinfoil which look like famous playwrights?

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    46. AnonymousJuly 12, 2011 at 2:16 AM

      Update on how far along you are with part 3?

      I just can't wait!

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    47. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 3:15 AM

      My little ponies, except they're not ponies. And not in Equestria, or ponyville, and they don't have magic or fly or....
      What the hell is the point?

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    48. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 6:15 AM

      @Anonymous

      Characters ?

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    49. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 7:28 AM

      http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/114/2/9/my_little_michelle_by_ttotheaffy-d3er7ww.png

      This is my character, Ambient Lullaby but his human name is Michelle, he is a male to female crossdresser but despite this he acts quite manly and has a deep voice.

      He is a musician, plays guitar in a band and works as a producer in a studio and as a salesman in a music store.

      He's a nice, open and down to earth guy.

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    50. DaveJuly 20, 2011 at 9:58 AM

      @Anonymous

      ...touché.

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    51. James BodineJuly 20, 2011 at 10:06 AM

      This works. I'm thankful that you made this. I like the characters, I like the setting, and I like the situations. This is just a fun read.

      I do have one question:
      "Sweetie Bell = Serenity, Scootaloo = Summer", are you a fan of the TV show "Firefly"?

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    52. MelodiaJuly 20, 2011 at 12:18 PM

      I liked the first two chapters of this story...but the third? It was just episode 5. What was the point? Very little different actually happened, especially when killing any pony-human differences. It doesn't add anything to the story either.
      Honestly, the whole chapter should be entirely rewritten, or just tossed....it really wouldn't matter.

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    53. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 12:33 PM

      “Wait…if Dash was already dating someone…why did she try and hit on me?" You aren't the only one who wants an answer to that question Tori.

      The third chapter wasn't that great. It’s just "Griffon the Brush Off" with humans instead of ponies. The only noticeable difference is that Gilda and Dash are a couple. But in the end there’s nothing unexpected, no twists and no plot changes. Everything happens like in the original episode. I think you should come up with your own plots like you did in the first two chapters. That’s certainly more interesting than reading stories I already know.

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    54. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 1:12 PM

      well hmmm... I don't know if there is a point to this but meh... I read the authors notes and it asked for a male oc... well... here is mine:

      http://klevkin.deviantart.com/art/My-OC-pony-Ratchet-214049710

      yeah... the des cription of the pic explains why it's just a picture of a drawing taken with an ipod but anyway...

      Il just start with his looks, he has light brown fur and burgundy (dont blame be for any mistakes, I'm french..well mostly anyway I go to a french school my english has suffered greatly) for his mane and tail.

      well euh... his name is ratchet(pony) and for a human name... hmmm ricky... I guess is the most similar name I can find but if you find a better one well... yeah... go ahead.

      He hates it when people touch his stuff (he is very protective of everything that he believes belongs to him (his love life suffers thanks to this) and with his name and cutie mark he likes to fix things... also he is bling in his right eye... well thats all I have to say with that.

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    55. AceJuly 20, 2011 at 2:39 PM

      OCs, you say... Here are mine! (I would throw in pictures but the pony images are on my phone.)

      The first one is Harvey. (Pony Name: Honey Apple. Originally he was a girl.) Harvey has a similar personality to Penelope, he's usually happy, playful, and social. He doesn't have the sweet tooth, though. He loves noodles. He has orange blonde hair with a green hat. He has blue eyes. He wears a white t-shirt with a yellow hoodie and jeans and white sneakers.

      The next one is Abby. (Pony Name: Ace.) Abby is a quiet one, who doesn't really approve of most people. She likes dark colors. She loves card games and is an entirely different person in game. She has pale skin with dark red and black striped hair, with a small section of it in the back tied with a big black bow. She has brown eyes. She wears a light grey button dress with a white collar, with a black ace sewn onto the left pocket. She always has a deck of cards on her person. She has black boots.

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    56. Aether_OuranosJuly 20, 2011 at 3:05 PM

      @Anonymous Yea...this episode was kinda necessary to set up plot points for the next part. It wasn't my favorite to write, but I promise that next episode will be much, much better.

      And on a related note, thanks everyone for the OC's and keep 'em coming. They are all really good.

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    57. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 3:11 PM

      @Big_Mac
      I forgot to add his personality, well here we go: if you know him you will almost never see him smile, happy or sad he will always have the same look on his face... simple indifference is what he looks like, he will still talk and have good conversations... he only looks like he has no emotions... but he is nothing different other then his emotionless face

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    58. AnonymousJuly 21, 2011 at 12:16 AM

      I know that a humanized Doctor Whoof is David Tennant, but imagine that fantastic/psychotic man as a teenager. Hilarity will ensue, whether it is through his abstract imagination or his habit of finding adventure. Just a small suggestion.

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    59. PatriciaJuly 21, 2011 at 1:22 AM

      -The Great and Powerful TWIXIE will be showing up.
      A simple typo or is her name going to be Twixie? Or is it possible a hint to the shipping that will ensue...regardless
      I'm liking this idea!

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    60. AnonymousJuly 21, 2011 at 7:01 AM

      @Patricia
      OR she could just be a chubby magician who is addicted to twix bars...

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    61. AnonymousJuly 21, 2011 at 7:01 AM

      @Patricia
      OR she could just be a chubby magician who is addicted to twix bars...

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    62. Lucas MercepJuly 29, 2011 at 12:01 PM

      we need chapter 4! now!

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    63. AnonymousOctober 1, 2011 at 8:24 AM

      Why is this taking so long to update... it's been like 2 months...

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    64. DJ-PinkaminaDecember 11, 2011 at 9:19 PM

      I remember reading chapter 3 :P I was in Florida visiting friends XD I also read the final instalment to "The Vinyl Scratch Tapes" on that trip

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    65. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2012 at 8:57 PM

      well... this is most likely dead...

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    66. Lucas MercepJune 3, 2012 at 5:56 PM

      well, seems as though we'll have to kill 'im...

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    67. Víctor Y.May 23, 2013 at 8:00 PM

      Oh Celestia!! This guy called equestria girls!

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