• Story: MLP The School Years (Update Part 3!)

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    [Normal] Humanized poni! Oh lawdy

    Author: Aether Ouranos
    Description: We've all been through some schooling, but what happens when the ponies have to go through it? Tori (Twilight) is new to the School of Equestria, will she be able to fit into a group that's known each other for most of their lives?
    MLP The School Years Part 1
    MLP The School Years Part 2
    MLP The School Years Part 3 (New!)

    Additional Tags: Humanized
    kolmapäev, 20. juuli 2011 op
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    1. Muffinsforever23. mai 2011, kell 09:00

      First!

      And looks weird, but I'll try it.

      VastaKustuta
    2. LOLZorzs23. mai 2011, kell 09:05

      +1Million views in just a week And now it's 7Million you really should let us view the stats so which was the fastest million or is gonna be>_>

      Anyways put up the new banner or comic or whatever

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 09:10

      Humanized?
      That's the pony stuff I like the least :/

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 09:15

      I thought you were doing daily updates, Seth...

      VastaKustuta
    5. Walter4423. mai 2011, kell 09:22

      I liked that one. In fact, I'd really like to read more of that story. Humanized versions of some of the episodes don't sound too bad, in my humble opinion...

      VastaKustuta
    6. 2007excalibur200723. mai 2011, kell 09:23

      Needs more pony. :|

      VastaKustuta
    7. Tosxychor23. mai 2011, kell 09:30

      @Anonymous
      The daily updates are for just that, the updates (of already posted content). New stuff entirely gets a new post, like the rest.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 09:34

      @Tosxychor
      Ohhhh. Crap, and here I thought my F5 button would get a rest.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 09:44

      This was really good!you have to make more!

      VastaKustuta
    10. Not A Clever Pony23. mai 2011, kell 09:48

      I think I'm deranged.

      As soon as I read the words "Professor Luna", I expected her to make the use of abacuses mandatory.

      Damn you, Luna vs Microwave.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Aether_Ouranos23. mai 2011, kell 10:05

      Thanks for the support...I'm working on part II as we speak...maybe there will be abacuses in the future. Let's hope that Luna doesn't incur the wraith of "Cassandra" again.

      VastaKustuta
    12. MikauSchekzen23. mai 2011, kell 10:06

      I really love this story. Unlike most others(apparently), I do like humanized versions of ponies.

      The ending was heart-warming, which was nice. I don't suppose there will be more of this?

      VastaKustuta
    13. cloud23. mai 2011, kell 10:34

      I have a character sheet made for this kind of school story also, but my English is terrible to write fanfic, so I just leave them alone.

      here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iXCxAaUerIyU2mWSJqa9_h96_ynZRdBtMUt6yU0QNUY/edit?hl=en_US&pli=1#

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 10:51

      I want to see that dream comic incorporated into the story.
      http://ponibooru.413chan.net/_images/01720b94ea231d77e64f3315db1e02fe/5521%20-%20applejack%20dream%20fluttershy%20human%20madmax%20rainbow_dash%20rarity%20twilight_sparkle.jpg

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 10:52

      http://csimadmax.deviantart.com/art/weird-dreams-204943141

      VastaKustuta
    16. Lachlan23. mai 2011, kell 11:41

      @Cloud Why does it have to be in english? Write in your native language for your [Native language here] Bronies! Do it!

      VastaKustuta
    17. Aether_Ouranos23. mai 2011, kell 11:44

      @Cloud: I like your ideas and would love to see your take on the matter! Go ahead and write in whatever language you have to!

      @Anon: That was kinda an inspiration point for me, along with a couple other photos I found.

      VastaKustuta
    18. hawkysu23. mai 2011, kell 11:57

      @cloudWhat's your native language? If you write it in your native tongue, I'm sure someone will help translate.

      In fact, we should start translating more fics.
      Except ones that are intended to remain untranslated.
      ----
      Also, I loved this fic

      VastaKustuta
    19. cloud23. mai 2011, kell 12:07

      @ Lachlan: dammit, stop exposing me.

      @ Aether and Hawkysu: lol.
      @ Aether: thanks.
      @ Hawkysu: if you want, I can write in both language to save the effort of translation.
      Or, if I really write in just Chinese, then I may ask the translator to let me see the translated version, to prevent my fanfic from being too off.
      My native language is Chinese and prefers talking in Chinese, but I prefer writing in English, however.

      Anyway, don't get your hope too high.

      VastaKustuta
    20. cloud23. mai 2011, kell 12:13

      But, if there are some Chinese(nationality) bronies, I can consider writing in both Chinese and English.

      In case you are confused, I have to emphasize here: I am Chinese(race/ethnicity), not Chinese(nationality).

      but, I am in lack of proficiency and depth in both language.

      VastaKustuta
    21. hawkysu23. mai 2011, kell 12:15

      @cloud
      Unfortunately, I only know simplified but: 我说中文.
      And I have a friend who can help me with (traditional) Chinese. But if you wanna write both versions, that's cool. I can help edit the English grammar and such, and maybe prevent a loss of meaning.

      Let me know: [email protected]

      VastaKustuta
    22. cloud23. mai 2011, kell 12:50

      okay, then I will write in Traditional Chinese.

      可是我很好奇。
      我弱弱地問一下：中國/台灣有很多bronies嗎？

      VastaKustuta
    23. Lurks-no-More23. mai 2011, kell 13:32

      This is probably the only Alternate Universe High School fic that I've seen that actually works. :D

      (If I ever do a humanized pony fic, I'm so going to make them college-aged, though. Not want to push my luck.)

      VastaKustuta
    24. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 13:33

      I really liked this first chapter :) Everyone was decently in character even with the humanisation, especially Pinkie Pie with the incessant questioning and extremely fast development of monologue-y things. You know what I mean. Interesting, I'll look forwards to seeing more!

      VastaKustuta
    25. T.O. Brony23. mai 2011, kell 13:40

      Professor Luna should watch herself, because Prince- Principal Cassandra WILL put her on probation...ON THE MOON!

      VastaKustuta
    26. WeirdRaptor23. mai 2011, kell 14:18

      I liked. Dear author, don't pay any attention to the neighsayers concerning the humanization. Just write as you see fit and please continue.

      VastaKustuta
    27. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 15:04

      this made me happy, I wish this didn't have the complete tag. because I could see taking this several episodes to the prom/gala episode and being able to close it proper.

      VastaKustuta
    28. Markeith23. mai 2011, kell 15:06

      I've never been one for humanized pony stuff, but this story is pretty good.Professor Luna reminds me of my English teacher from my senior year of high school..under that gruff and stern exterior though I'm pretty sure she's a genuinely nice person who cares about her students.I also like how you nailed the characters of the main six...it'd be a pleasure to see more!

      VastaKustuta
    29. hawkysu23. mai 2011, kell 16:04

      Seriously Aether, write more or I'll be forced to take drastic measures

      VastaKustuta
    30. Anonüümne23. mai 2011, kell 17:18

      THIS. IS. INCREDIBLE.

      MOAR PLOX.

      VastaKustuta
    31. SomeGuy23. mai 2011, kell 19:22

      This was a great story. You did a good job of translating the ponies into humans. Hope to see more stuff from you.

      VastaKustuta
    32. Aether_Ouranos23. mai 2011, kell 20:12

      To all who are worrying, don't! I'm hard at work on part II...Thanks for all the positive support!

      VastaKustuta
    33. Anonüümne24. mai 2011, kell 01:43

      This is awesome! Especially that AJ is Audrey, 'cause that's my name! :O Can't wait to read more!

      VastaKustuta
    34. Abalidoth24. mai 2011, kell 15:03

      I really liked it, but I was a little disoriented by Rarity being named Rachel. Whenever I would idly speculate on what the mane cast's "human" names would be, I always figured on Rachel for Rainbow Dash. Then again, the name Rachel is associated with action girls for me because I read a lot of Animorphs as a kid...

      VastaKustuta
    35. reynard619. juuli 2011, kell 21:59

      "Zecora: Don’t have any plans for her yet.  With my setting and all it’s kinda hard to work her character in."

      Perhaps she could be a transfer or exchange student? Possibly studying Botany or Herbal medicine?

      VastaKustuta
    36. Dave9. juuli 2011, kell 22:43

      Just a small typo that irked me. You have it as Principle Cassandra. Should be Principal. Grammar freak like that. :P

      Other than that, I enjoyed this alot. Now, I suppose it makes sense in the show that we don't really see any of Spike's friends, as he's only Twilight's employee. What kind of friend's do you plan on giving him? I'm assuming the bullies are gonna be a pain in the ass for everyone, but I think it'd be a hilarious twist to have an overarching plot with Spike befriending them and seeing how it works from there.

      VastaKustuta
    37. Patricia9. juuli 2011, kell 23:57

      Hopefully a Trixie is being written in here somewhere right?

      VastaKustuta
    38. Anonüümne10. juuli 2011, kell 00:25

      You're putting Derpy in, right?

      VastaKustuta
    39. Anonüümne10. juuli 2011, kell 00:55

      @Dave

      >grammar freak

      >says "alot"

      >mfw

      VastaKustuta
    40. Aether_Ouranos10. juuli 2011, kell 05:01

      @Patricia and @Anon:

      The Great and Powerful Twixie will be showing up, I just need to figure out how to properly do it :P.

      And as for Derpy (Diana)...let's just say that there are plans for her.

      VastaKustuta
    41. Theta the Sheep10. juuli 2011, kell 13:56

      Yay! I'm glad to see that you have some light shipping with Dash prepared. I was gonna suggest it if you hadn't said anything about it. As a suggestion, this is if you hadn't already had this idea yourself, you should write a chapter (or two) about the group during Spring Break. They can all go visit somewhere or something or the sort. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Keep up the good work. Oh, and I loved Dash punching that guy in the face in the first chapter. That made me happy. :D

      VastaKustuta
    42. Beige Monkfish10. juuli 2011, kell 15:12

      Just to let the author know, I think part 2 is currently publicly editable. You might want to change that.

      VastaKustuta
    43. lmaozorzz10. juuli 2011, kell 21:36

      Hey i just finished reading it and its really good! One thing that maybe you could put in, is introduce a guy into the story, now i dont mean to have him ship with any of the mane 6, dear lord no, but have him as a friend of the girls, so i there could be at least one non-ass guy character. :

      VastaKustuta
    44. Aether_Ouranos10. juuli 2011, kell 22:54

      @lmaozorzz Hmm...an OC. Didn't think about that one lol. I'll consider throwing in members of the opposite gender...

      VastaKustuta
    45. Anonüümne10. juuli 2011, kell 23:33

      Isn't Derpy the one who walks around absent-mindedly humming to herself and collecting pieces of tinfoil which look like famous playwrights?

      VastaKustuta
    46. Anonüümne12. juuli 2011, kell 02:16

      Update on how far along you are with part 3?

      I just can't wait!

      VastaKustuta
    47. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 03:15

      My little ponies, except they're not ponies. And not in Equestria, or ponyville, and they don't have magic or fly or....
      What the hell is the point?

      VastaKustuta
    48. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 06:15

      @Anonymous

      Characters ?

      VastaKustuta
    49. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 07:28

      http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/114/2/9/my_little_michelle_by_ttotheaffy-d3er7ww.png

      This is my character, Ambient Lullaby but his human name is Michelle, he is a male to female crossdresser but despite this he acts quite manly and has a deep voice.

      He is a musician, plays guitar in a band and works as a producer in a studio and as a salesman in a music store.

      He's a nice, open and down to earth guy.

      VastaKustuta
    50. Dave20. juuli 2011, kell 09:58

      @Anonymous

      ...touché.

      VastaKustuta
    51. James Bodine20. juuli 2011, kell 10:06

      This works. I'm thankful that you made this. I like the characters, I like the setting, and I like the situations. This is just a fun read.

      I do have one question:
      "Sweetie Bell = Serenity, Scootaloo = Summer", are you a fan of the TV show "Firefly"?

      VastaKustuta
    52. Melodia20. juuli 2011, kell 12:18

      I liked the first two chapters of this story...but the third? It was just episode 5. What was the point? Very little different actually happened, especially when killing any pony-human differences. It doesn't add anything to the story either.
      Honestly, the whole chapter should be entirely rewritten, or just tossed....it really wouldn't matter.

      VastaKustuta
    53. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 12:33

      “Wait…if Dash was already dating someone…why did she try and hit on me?" You aren't the only one who wants an answer to that question Tori.

      The third chapter wasn't that great. It’s just "Griffon the Brush Off" with humans instead of ponies. The only noticeable difference is that Gilda and Dash are a couple. But in the end there’s nothing unexpected, no twists and no plot changes. Everything happens like in the original episode. I think you should come up with your own plots like you did in the first two chapters. That’s certainly more interesting than reading stories I already know.

      VastaKustuta
    54. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 13:12

      well hmmm... I don't know if there is a point to this but meh... I read the authors notes and it asked for a male oc... well... here is mine:

      http://klevkin.deviantart.com/art/My-OC-pony-Ratchet-214049710

      yeah... the des cription of the pic explains why it's just a picture of a drawing taken with an ipod but anyway...

      Il just start with his looks, he has light brown fur and burgundy (dont blame be for any mistakes, I'm french..well mostly anyway I go to a french school my english has suffered greatly) for his mane and tail.

      well euh... his name is ratchet(pony) and for a human name... hmmm ricky... I guess is the most similar name I can find but if you find a better one well... yeah... go ahead.

      He hates it when people touch his stuff (he is very protective of everything that he believes belongs to him (his love life suffers thanks to this) and with his name and cutie mark he likes to fix things... also he is bling in his right eye... well thats all I have to say with that.

      VastaKustuta
    55. Ace20. juuli 2011, kell 14:39

      OCs, you say... Here are mine! (I would throw in pictures but the pony images are on my phone.)

      The first one is Harvey. (Pony Name: Honey Apple. Originally he was a girl.) Harvey has a similar personality to Penelope, he's usually happy, playful, and social. He doesn't have the sweet tooth, though. He loves noodles. He has orange blonde hair with a green hat. He has blue eyes. He wears a white t-shirt with a yellow hoodie and jeans and white sneakers.

      The next one is Abby. (Pony Name: Ace.) Abby is a quiet one, who doesn't really approve of most people. She likes dark colors. She loves card games and is an entirely different person in game. She has pale skin with dark red and black striped hair, with a small section of it in the back tied with a big black bow. She has brown eyes. She wears a light grey button dress with a white collar, with a black ace sewn onto the left pocket. She always has a deck of cards on her person. She has black boots.

      VastaKustuta
    56. Aether_Ouranos20. juuli 2011, kell 15:05

      @Anonymous Yea...this episode was kinda necessary to set up plot points for the next part. It wasn't my favorite to write, but I promise that next episode will be much, much better.

      And on a related note, thanks everyone for the OC's and keep 'em coming. They are all really good.

      VastaKustuta
    57. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 15:11

      @Big_Mac
      I forgot to add his personality, well here we go: if you know him you will almost never see him smile, happy or sad he will always have the same look on his face... simple indifference is what he looks like, he will still talk and have good conversations... he only looks like he has no emotions... but he is nothing different other then his emotionless face

      VastaKustuta
    58. Anonüümne21. juuli 2011, kell 00:16

      I know that a humanized Doctor Whoof is David Tennant, but imagine that fantastic/psychotic man as a teenager. Hilarity will ensue, whether it is through his abstract imagination or his habit of finding adventure. Just a small suggestion.

      VastaKustuta
    59. Patricia21. juuli 2011, kell 01:22

      -The Great and Powerful TWIXIE will be showing up.
      A simple typo or is her name going to be Twixie? Or is it possible a hint to the shipping that will ensue...regardless
      I'm liking this idea!

      VastaKustuta
    60. Anonüümne21. juuli 2011, kell 07:01

      @Patricia
      OR she could just be a chubby magician who is addicted to twix bars...

      VastaKustuta
    61. Anonüümne21. juuli 2011, kell 07:01

      @Patricia
      OR she could just be a chubby magician who is addicted to twix bars...

      VastaKustuta
    62. Lucas Mercep29. juuli 2011, kell 12:01

      we need chapter 4! now!

      VastaKustuta
    63. Anonüümne1. oktoober 2011, kell 08:24

      Why is this taking so long to update... it's been like 2 months...

      VastaKustuta
    64. DJ-Pinkamina11. detsember 2011, kell 21:19

      I remember reading chapter 3 :P I was in Florida visiting friends XD I also read the final instalment to "The Vinyl Scratch Tapes" on that trip

      VastaKustuta
    65. Anonüümne6. jaanuar 2012, kell 20:57

      well... this is most likely dead...

      VastaKustuta
    66. Lucas Mercep3. juuni 2012, kell 17:56

      well, seems as though we'll have to kill 'im...

      VastaKustuta
    67. Víctor Y.23. mai 2013, kell 20:00

      Oh Celestia!! This guy called equestria girls!

      VastaKustuta

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