• Story: Minus the Sun (Update Part 3!)

    [Crossover] I really need more awesome everypony images.  Maybe I'll start recycling them.


    Author: Melionos
    Description: An impenetrable dark cloud has fallen over parts of Ponyville, withering trees and turning animals and ponies alike into stone. The mane six bond together once again to conquer evil, but will the Elements of Harmony be enough to prevail this time?
    Minus the Sun Part 1

    Minus the Sun Part 2
    Minus the Sun Part 3 (New!)

    Additional Tags: Needed

    17 kommentaari:

    1. Wait, what is this a crossover of?

      VastaKustuta
    2. I didn't really want to just give it away, you lose a bit of mystery when it's just handed to you. Anyone who's played the game will probably know by the first chapter, and even people who haven't will probably figure it out by the second.

      VastaKustuta
    3. mfw I was listening to music from Okami while reading this.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Hmm... Very clever. I don't there's been a crossover story about this yet. Very well done.

      VastaKustuta
    5. I'm interested in seeing exactly how Equestria and its monarchs fit into the scheme of things here. Such as if Celestia and Luna are acquainted with our returning goddess.

      A touch repetitive in some places and a certain "bug" is a bit long winded and awkward with his explanation. Especially since, in regards to the conversation, that little history report came out of nowhere.

      But overall, an enjoyable story and I look forward to more.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Ahahaha, nice.

      I wont' spoil what the crossover is, but it's revealed quickly.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Yeah I really meant for the bug to be just as long winded as he was in the game, I know he got on a lot of people's nerves because he talks so much and goes on tangents a bit too often. I did want him to seem developed from his previous appearances somewhat, so I tried to tone down his use of a few of the various informal names he had for his companion.

      VastaKustuta
    8. confound these ponies, they drive me to replay the final boss battle!

      VastaKustuta
    9. weird, it's not allowing me to view the first one because apparently I need "permission"

      VastaKustuta
    10. I wish you had posted the crossover, that way I would have known that I wouldn't care about the story.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Oohh a cross over with one of my three favourate wolves (I'll admit I guessed the wrong one first). I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Unless you happen to be familiar with the game, guessing what crossover this is takes the second part. Initially I guessed Amnesia: The Dark Descent (light-eating darkness? Storage) but that was quickly ruled out.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Ponies + my #1 most loved game ever?
      GO ON!

      btw. As far as I remember, there was a nice image of a ponified Amaterasu in a Drawfriend 1 or 2 months ago, but I don't find it right now...

      VastaKustuta
    14. ^ Found it!

      http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_8XlorG6n_cI/TU5dcOd7igI/AAAAAAAABG4/75Oju7KbxDA/s1600/1296932188128.png

      VastaKustuta
    15. Or maybe this one?

      http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-b0LBUbGTj4Q/TZ7F2DEuSbI/AAAAAAAADOI/g9dEqMrcJzg/s1600/my_little_shiranui_by_naira_wolf_satyr-d3dc1cd.jpg

      Confound these ponies, they drive me to look at the entire drawfriend archive!

      VastaKustuta
    16. please continue the series :D

      VastaKustuta
    17. This is abandoned. Author's new version:
      http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-tails-from-two-worlds.html
      New version also possibly abandoned.

      VastaKustuta