• Story: Let the Old God Lie

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    [Crossover] Ponychan Collab Time! Dr.Whoof style.

    Author: Clarity, CmdrBrony, Ebrona, Polecat, Serge. Lexie
    Description: With Celestia gone Princess Luna and Dr. Whooves face a powerful being from Equestria's past that threatens to destroy the world as they know it. Will they be able to overcome the challenges ahead and reunite Luna with her sister?
    Let the Old God Lie 


    Additional Tags: Adventure, Power, Divinity, Collaboration, Dr. Whooves
    Sunday, May 22, 2011 op
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    10 comments:

    1. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 9:44 AM

      I approve of ALL doctor who crossovers.

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    2. MuffinsforeverMay 22, 2011 at 9:48 AM

      I approve!, though there was a lack of weirdness.

      Also, that ending...hmmm...interesting...

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    3. Mysterious, Disembodied VoiceMay 22, 2011 at 9:51 AM

      I approve of being a key role in the future of Equestria.
      I disapprove of bringing sis back.

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    4. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 10:44 AM

      Great story, my friend!


      ...though perhaps in the future I should refrain from reading Doctor Whoof fics. For some reason the character annoys me to no end...

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    5. AndrewMay 22, 2011 at 12:37 PM

      This fic had some interesting ideas but it felt disjointed and poorly thought out. It didn't flow properly and your use of imagery wasn't significant enough to allow me to picture the scenes without a great deal of difficulty, it felt like everypony was floating in space.

      Not a bad idea, again, just bad execution.

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    6. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 4:36 PM

      That was great! I would love to read more, especially with that cliffhanger/sequel bait at the end there.
      Only complaint is that is feels like it starts and ends really abruptly.

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    7. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 6:35 PM

      I don't normally like Doctor Who, especially since the 11th doctor, but this was very well done.

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    8. Jordan WrightMay 22, 2011 at 9:47 PM

      Although I enjoyed the story, I am curious as to which Doctor this is based on. 10 is my default mindset for any Doctor Whoof story but the description of a bow tie and the set up of the dialogue feels closer to 11 than 10. Not that I'm complaining, I love Smith's interpretation, I just want to know if I'm reading it right.

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    9. MorrisseyMay 24, 2011 at 12:50 AM

      Loved this story, and I can't wait to see more Dr. Whoof crossovers in the future! But I agree with the Doctor ambiguity. Sometimes he acted like 10, then switched to 11. I wasn't sure which one he was supposed to be...

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    10. AnonymousMay 30, 2011 at 11:36 AM

      listened to the doctor who theme on a loop while reading this. then re-read it with requiem for a dream playing. both songs made it 20% cooler

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