• Story: Let the Old God Lie


    [Crossover] Ponychan Collab Time! Dr.Whoof style.

    Author: Clarity, CmdrBrony, Ebrona, Polecat, Serge. Lexie
    Description: With Celestia gone Princess Luna and Dr. Whooves face a powerful being from Equestria's past that threatens to destroy the world as they know it. Will they be able to overcome the challenges ahead and reunite Luna with her sister?
    Let the Old God Lie 


    Additional Tags: Adventure, Power, Divinity, Collaboration, Dr. Whooves

    10 kommentaari:

    1. I approve of ALL doctor who crossovers.

      VastaKustuta
    2. I approve!, though there was a lack of weirdness.

      Also, that ending...hmmm...interesting...

      VastaKustuta
    3. I approve of being a key role in the future of Equestria.
      I disapprove of bringing sis back.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Great story, my friend!


      ...though perhaps in the future I should refrain from reading Doctor Whoof fics. For some reason the character annoys me to no end...

      VastaKustuta
    5. This fic had some interesting ideas but it felt disjointed and poorly thought out. It didn't flow properly and your use of imagery wasn't significant enough to allow me to picture the scenes without a great deal of difficulty, it felt like everypony was floating in space.

      Not a bad idea, again, just bad execution.

      VastaKustuta
    6. That was great! I would love to read more, especially with that cliffhanger/sequel bait at the end there.
      Only complaint is that is feels like it starts and ends really abruptly.

      VastaKustuta
    7. I don't normally like Doctor Who, especially since the 11th doctor, but this was very well done.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Although I enjoyed the story, I am curious as to which Doctor this is based on. 10 is my default mindset for any Doctor Whoof story but the description of a bow tie and the set up of the dialogue feels closer to 11 than 10. Not that I'm complaining, I love Smith's interpretation, I just want to know if I'm reading it right.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Loved this story, and I can't wait to see more Dr. Whoof crossovers in the future! But I agree with the Doctor ambiguity. Sometimes he acted like 10, then switched to 11. I wasn't sure which one he was supposed to be...

      VastaKustuta
    10. listened to the doctor who theme on a loop while reading this. then re-read it with requiem for a dream playing. both songs made it 20% cooler

      VastaKustuta