• Story: Learning Curves

    [Shipping]  Rarijack? Appleity? I wish their names combined better.

    Author: Tumbleweed
    Description: Before the Grand Galloping Gala, Applejack makes a very...personal request of Rarity. How could the Pony of Generosity refuse?
    Learning Curves

    Additional Tags: Short. Sweet. Saucy

    35 kommentaari:

    1. Rare Apples? Elegant Cider? Darling Sugarcube?
      Diggin' in.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Jackity? Applerare?

      VastaKustuta
    3. "Additional Tags: Short. Sweet. Saucy"

      Am i the only one who gets hungry from reading that?

      VastaKustuta
    4. Rare Apple? Apple Jewel? This is hard.

      @Netkev I just want to know why Saucy is highlighted in yellow as if that's the main reason to read the fic because it's saucy.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Not even close to Saucy, to be honest. I like the writing, I VERY like the characters - Rarity is SO much Rarity, as only Rarity Could Get, and this is enough for me to love it.

      And because of that, I feel that even short tag is not enough to inform, how SHORT this was, and HOW much more I need to clo... to READ.

      ;)

      VastaKustuta
    6. Oh wow lol, i just read this on FanFiction.net, and when I click back to Equestria Daily there it is!

      Anyways, it's a pretty nice story, maybe a little short but what's in there rocks. I swear, being a brony is slowly turning me furry...

      VastaKustuta
    7. I'm confused.

      But I like it. And I want more.

      VastaKustuta
    8. A cute little story! I love suggestive stories that turn out to be somewhat innocuous, it's always good for a laugh in my book.

      VastaKustuta
    9. I felt it was of appropriate length. Pretty well-made.

      VastaKustuta
    10. This is a good one. The writing is ambiguous enough that you could read it as just Rarity teaching Applejack to dance... or read it as something a bit more X-rated.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Oh god that was, I think unintentionally, hilarious.

      Saucy is an optional tag I think, just becuase it's SO ambiguous.

      Kudos to the author.

      VastaKustuta
    12. First MLP fanfic I've read and it's actually good. Really actually good. Was not expecting it.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Very enjoyable, albeit the ambiguity was both fantastic and slightly comical. Characters were accurately portrayed, Rarity was awesome. Has anypony else ever noticed that any shipping involving Rarity almost always has her take the lead?

      VastaKustuta
    14. I suppose it speaks volumes of me that I instantly assumed they were just dancing and was wondering why it had been tagged as shipping. And somehow overlooked all the suggestive bits.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Rarejack? Jackity?

      VastaKustuta
    16. Short, yes. Very short. But also sweet!

      I'm very much hoping for sequels or expansions.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Rajack? Apity? R. Jack the 3rd?

      I don't know.

      This was good though, little short, but good.

      VastaKustuta
    18. The pairing is refered to as AppleRare.

      Gosh guys.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Decent, but predictable and generic as hell.

      VastaKustuta
    20. It wasn't bad...
      It wasn't too good either, unfortunately. Kind of just the "same old same old" if you ask me. You did well author but, I would have liked a better story than "come to my barn so we can make out". Ya know?

      VastaKustuta
    21. My Little Pony: Dancing is Sensual?

      VastaKustuta
    22. @Anonymous: Probably because she fits the Older Woman stereotype a little bit, while the rest of them basically act like teenagers.

      This was short and sweet, though. Write more! :)

      VastaKustuta
    23. I did rather see the twist coming from when the music started, but it was very cute none the less.

      VastaKustuta
    24. @Anonymous
      You really think Rarity would let anyone else lead?

      VastaKustuta
    25. Rapplety. Jaritack. Rari-apples-for-mah-brain. Hmmm... Well, Apple Jack is orange, and Rarity is white... So why not dreamsickle?

      VastaKustuta
    26. > Darling Sugarcube

      Works for me.

      VastaKustuta
    27. Applejarity.

      (ohmigosh more than 3 syllables)

      VastaKustuta
    28. @Anonymous
      Applerare just sounds tghe best, I think.

      That or Rareapple... Bit Applerare writes better too.

      VastaKustuta
    29. Oh this was a little piece of wonderful. Short, but beautiful; both Applejack and Rarity were perfectly in-character.

      VastaKustuta
    30. That rocked on a very hilarious level. Cleverly designed so you can (almost) read it both ways.
      Keep it up.

      VastaKustuta
    31. ...

      Am I the only one who figured out they were dancing?

      VastaKustuta
    32. That was awesome! I loved it very much! <D

      VastaKustuta
    33. Wow. um. well.
      Eeyup.
      That's all i can say, really.
      Eeyup. 5/5.
      i think. i don't even know.
      5/5.

      VastaKustuta