• Story: Hell Hath No Fury

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    [Random][Comedy-Black]  Inb4 my entire front page is Flutterage


    Author: Aquaman52
    Description: The quiet ones are always the ones closest to the edge.
    Hell Hath No Fury


    Additional Tags: Flutterage knows no boundaries.  None.
    laupäev, 7. mai 2011 op
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    45 kommentaari:

    1. Tiroth7. mai 2011, kell 16:07

      That...should I be laughing this much? xD

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:08

      No, Fluttershy, NO!!

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:08

      Woah.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Andrew7. mai 2011, kell 16:12

      Bluh this seemed either out of character because it was either not off the edge enough or because it was too off the edge, I'm not sure which. I see many ways it could have been worse. I see Fluttershy as being more of the, once she's lost her sanity and self-control, the type to torture someone, not just be an arsonist.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Ricky7. mai 2011, kell 16:13

      This is suprisingly fitting for Fluttershy.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:13

      Note to self: NEVER cross Fluttershy. She makes Trollestia seem merciful.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:15

      I loved the dialogue in this soooo much. You did a really great job writing Twilight, especially.

      I think yandere Fluttershy is my new favorite thing ever.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:15

      It's funny, but I hope we don't see a thousand more Yandere Fluttershy fics because of this.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:17

      "ill have you yet my pretties...."
      "if any if you birds, or monkeys, or bears walk on this net you will be mine! MINE!!!!"


      Sometimes these ponies make Heath Ledgers joker seem like pleasang company

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:18

      YOU GONNA GET LOVED

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:19

      Seemed a tad short for a story bump. It was pretty decent although it could've used a bit more foremath/aftermath, if only to pad things out a bit more.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:21

      Was this written before or after "The Best Night Ever"?

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:24

      @Anonymous

      Ha, you wish, people are going to milk crazy Fluttershy to the bone.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:24

      Why do people mislabel so? This is obviously grim and dark. Plus it isn't random like alien bunnies abducting Fluttershy, this is a thought out and coherent plot by the evil enchantress herself.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Ud the Imp7. mai 2011, kell 16:27

      Mislabeled. Should be grimdark. Still awesome though!

      VastaKustuta
    16. Hikuro147. mai 2011, kell 16:31

      oh





      man

      VastaKustuta
    17. smx7. mai 2011, kell 16:48

      everupony in this town is CRAZY

      VastaKustuta
    18. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 16:53

      Why did this get featured? It's not particularly entertaining or unique.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 17:12

      That was insane. Awesome, yet insane.

      VastaKustuta
    20. Aquaman527. mai 2011, kell 17:14

      @Everyone saying I should've labeled it "grimdark": The tag was really just a matter of personal opinion. I almost asked Seth to add a grimdark tag as well, but I consider true grimdark to be more graphic than this...as in, involving a non-ambiguous portrayal of death/warfare/lots of violence/etc. The story's dark, but it's dark because I was going for black humor. Considering the fact that the humor was intended to come from the immense exaggeration of Flutterage, I decided it was more "random" than "grimdark".

      Just in case anyone was interested in my thought process.

      VastaKustuta
    21. T.O. Brony7. mai 2011, kell 17:15

      Now I see...the way she treated the dragon and the cockatrice was only the tip of the iceberg.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 17:32

      She knows NO boundaries! NONE!

      She raped my dog right on the front lawn then hit me over the head with a brick when I tried to stop her. She woke me up by peeing in my hair and then set my house on fire and ran. Then while we struggled to put it out, she came back and stole my mail.

      NO BOUNDARIES!

      VastaKustuta
    23. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 17:48

      Personally, I want more crazy Fluttershy stories because half the humor comes from them being so out of character(or maybe IN character?).

      Sure, some people won't like it, but sometimes I like something completely opposite of the norm to liven things up.

      Funny story by the way :D

      VastaKustuta
    24. McGack7. mai 2011, kell 18:31

      someone needs to make one of those its (insert something) time!! for fluttershy you know like the pinkie one, because its funny

      VastaKustuta
    25. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 18:47

      LOVE ME, MOTHER****ERS!

      VastaKustuta
    26. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 19:14

      ...kerosene cans are blue...

      VastaKustuta
    27. DarkJester7. mai 2011, kell 19:25

      A good attempt but far too short and OOC. :(

      VastaKustuta
    28. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 19:29

      Fires are red,
      Can's can be blue.
      Fluttershy you scary;
      I'm running from you.

      VastaKustuta
    29. supervanman647. mai 2011, kell 19:35

      Haha that was awesome XD

      VastaKustuta
    30. Landon Kemp7. mai 2011, kell 19:42

      Fluttershy... You're really starting to scare me... That was out of character for you to do, Fluttershy... Hehehe... Setting that pony's house on fire... Maybe I should scare you back... hehe... to make up for what you did to me... you have any idea what they do with animals in my world?
      Fluttershy: No...
      They hunt creatures down... AND MOUNT THEIR HEADS ON A WALL!!! (begins cackling maniacally, clearly insane by this point)
      Fluttershy: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

      VastaKustuta
    31. Aquaman527. mai 2011, kell 19:47

      @Anonymous

      I may have been thinking of a gasoline canister.

      That's what slamming out a thousand words in forty-five minutes at 11:30 gets me, I suppose. Off to edit! XD

      @DarkJester

      I can't really argue with that...this wasn't really an attempt to portray a realistic reaction that Fluttershy might have as much as it was a "worst possible scenario" bit of randomness that took over my brain last night and demanded to be written down. The short length was definitely intentional, though; any longer, and I probably would've had no choice but to make it grimdark, which I was hoping to be able to avoid. It was supposed to be more darkly funny than truly frightening.

      VastaKustuta
    32. Jesse7. mai 2011, kell 20:02

      I liked it ^_^

      VastaKustuta
    33. Yuri7. mai 2011, kell 20:28

      No setup. Besides even considering the last episode this is highly out of character. She just wanted to catch the critters not burn them.

      VastaKustuta
    34. aclockwerkponi7. mai 2011, kell 21:27

      Yuri, the critters didn't cheat on her with another mare, either.

      It's an enjoyable fic and I had fun reading it. Is it OOC? Definitely. Is it explained? Yes. It's not like Aquaman just wrote a story about Fluttershy gleefully setting ponies' houses of fire for no reason. The colt cheated on her and Fluttershy snapped. It's a cautionary tale about why you don't fuck around with Fluttershy.

      VastaKustuta
    35. Aquaman527. mai 2011, kell 22:10

      @aclockwerkponi

      That, plus I never intended for this to be serious at all. XD

      VastaKustuta
    36. StreakTheFox7. mai 2011, kell 23:45

      @Anonymous
      It's grim, yes, but it isn't Grimdark. Grimdark includes violence, murder, torture, ect. This is Arsen, also bad, but not grimdark. Crazy yes, but not grimdark... sorry, lol.
      It's also random because it has no real plot line. Yes there is a situation and a small story behind it that can be derived from the dialogue, but no real plot. Just a filly gonna go do some crazy things.


      -SPOILER-


      So who's house was she burning? Cherry's or Could Kicker's? I was guessing cherry's but idk...

      VastaKustuta
    37. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 23:51

      ok, wait. Time out. When did this fandom take a right turn into crazy town? I mean I know the episodes themselves hold the seeds to stuff like this, but . . . OK and Cupcakes didn't help either but . . . OH GOD! I wrote some stuff like this myself! What the hell is wrong with all of us?! I mean, can't they just be fun happy ponies? Is there something wrong with that? Is it a fundamental flaw in the human psyche that makes us believe things can't be TOO perfect?

      You remember the movie "the Matrix" where Agent Smith said that initially the matrix was built as a Utopia, but humans couldn't accept it, and the whole thing had to be restructured into the mess it is today? Yeah, that is what this reminds me of. Tonberry was right. We are all to blame, and this is Everyone's Grudge.

      VastaKustuta
    38. Anonüümne8. mai 2011, kell 01:57

      @Anonymous

      *Brohoof*

      VastaKustuta
    39. Aquaman528. mai 2011, kell 07:59

      @Anonymous

      I blame both canon Fluttershy and myself for being crazy enough to inspire this.

      So you're probably right. Or something.

      VastaKustuta
    40. Anonüümne8. mai 2011, kell 19:25

      That was actually pretty awesome O.O
      Enthralling, really... :D I LOVE IT.

      VastaKustuta
    41. Unknown8. mai 2011, kell 21:03

      It was... odd.

      I kinda lean toward this being grimdark, but, since it's never actually -stated- that anyone dies in the fire (maybe he's not in there and Fluttershy is just doing property damage to make a point - I mean, if he were in there, you'd expect to hear screams as he was roasted alive or whatnot) maybe random fits... Maybe we need a "grim" tag that's "softer" than grimdark?

      I dunno...

      VastaKustuta
    42. supervanman6410. mai 2011, kell 00:01

      I don't think he was in the house when she set it ablaze. I mean, it wouldn't make sense to kill someone if you're trying to make them love you.

      I think she was doing this to scare him back into her crazy arms. X3

      VastaKustuta
    43. Aquaman5210. mai 2011, kell 14:11

      Oh, intentional ambiguity...how I adore thee.

      :D

      VastaKustuta
    44. La Barata20. mai 2011, kell 23:21

      Oh GOD I laughed xD. Seriously, I have not laughed this hard in a LONG TIME. Absolutely hilarious, and brilliantly written.

      VastaKustuta
    45. Anonüümne1. juuli 2011, kell 13:19

      Flutterage is awesome, but I think this story would be better suited fo pinkie. After all, she is BATSHIT INSANE, so I guess thing would come naturally to her.

      VastaKustuta

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