Author: Flashgen
Description: When Twilight Sparkle and her friends awaken in the Everfree Forest following a spell cast by Twilight, they attempt to find their way home. However, what they stumble on to is more than they could have expected, or imagined, in their wildest Nightmares.A Future Worth Saving Part 1
A Future Worth Saving Part 2
A Future Worth Saving Part 3
A Future Worth Saving Part 4
A Future Worth Saving Part 5
A Future Worth Saving Part 6
A Future Worth Saving Part 7
A Future Worth Saving Part 8
A Future Worth Saving Part 9 (New!)
A Future Worth Saving Part 10 (New!)
A Future Worth Saving Part 11 (New!)
Additional Tags: Long, Epic, Rebellion, Confusion, Eclipse
40 comments:
Uh oh...
ReplyDeleteLooks like its a creepy fic...
Creepy plus an eclipse? Sounds like my idea for a comic.
ReplyDeleteThis should be a fun read.
flashgen wrote a fic?
ReplyDeletehmm, intriguing
I am interested in where this is going
ReplyDelete> btw we are at 6906095 views at the moment. Prepare for 7000000 soon!
Pretty damn interesting actually.
ReplyDeleteGood job, though evil Luna makes me a sad pony.
I know Luna, she's not evil, she just "Thought you wanted eviillllll!"
ReplyDeleteIf it pays my thousand-year-old debt, I'll do the job. A pony's gotta eat, ya know.
ReplyDeleteGasp. Again, GASP! Evil Luna has returned? What does this foretell, I wonder?
ReplyDeleteAlso, I like how the library was still there, just rotted. I was wondering what a tree would be doing, being hollow naturally.
@JeanSplice
ReplyDeleteSomepony mentioned me by name like I was important? whaaaa? :P
To everyone reading who might be confused, the Grimdark tag is there because eventually there will be quite a bit that falls under its jurisdiction. For now, it's mostly going to be a normal fic (with maybe a bit of implied stuff, such as what was in the first chapter), and I will mark the first chapter that is clearly Grimdark (violence, etc) appropriately in the document.
@JeanSplice
ReplyDeleteSomeone remembered me by name like I'm important, what? :P
As an explanation for the Grimdark tag, I am planning on having themes fitting it directly later on in the story. For now though, it will mostly be a normal fic, and I will label it as Grimdark in the Chapter when the time comes. So if you don't like gory, feel free to read for the plot for now.
So yeah, my comments went haywire last night, sorry about that.
ReplyDeleteI'm liking this so far keep up the good work.
ReplyDelete@Springtime Blues
ReplyDeleteI'll do my best. If anyone happens to have comments on improvements I could make so far, feel free to let me know. I'm always open to advice.
Randomly self bumping own fic for the win.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to try and keep updates weekly, assuming I don't get bogged down with work. You know, to anyone that's actually reading it, which is like 2 people.
No forgiveness? No remorse?
ReplyDeleteThat would certainly improve upon the Grimdark :)
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ReplyDeleteI think there is a small problem with Chapther 4s end.
ReplyDeleteNightmare Moon wouldn´t do stuff like that if she didn´t think it was right to do so in the first place. And considering her position it is obvious that she does have the Right to do so.
For me that last part in chapter 4 simply doesn´t make a lot of sense.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWould you mind clarifying that comment? If you don't want to spoil or something you can e-mail me, but I'd like to get some more details on that part.
Hit the 5th chapter, and I'm really liking how the ponies are each finding their place in the new village/era. This is a really long, really good story =)
ReplyDeleteOh my god, this story is awesome! Really dark, but that's how I like 'em.
ReplyDeleteDragons are said to live for hundreds to thousands of years, I wonder if Spike would be around or if he got killed or died of old age. I havent seen mention of him yet
ReplyDelete@John
ReplyDeleteIt's not completely dark yet, but it'll get there, I promise.
On a side note, I'm about halfway done with my next chapter, so expect something in a day or two (I like good updates, and fast ones, when that's possible)
HOLY SHIT
ReplyDeleteI had a feeling Spike would show up in this chapter, glad to see I was right
ReplyDelete@zero2212
ReplyDeleteI hope that's directed to what I think it's directed to, and that it's positive shock.
Keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteJust finished speed-reading the whole thing. Beautiful. Looking forward to the next update.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing that has me confused is what spell Twilight was attempting to cast in the first place.
@Dave
ReplyDeleteAll truths come to light in time.
Well well well, I'm actually rather enjoying this one.
ReplyDeleteDo update again soon. I"m curious as to where this is heading and aha, I figured that the only one with enough magic, within the canon cast, to be Nightmare Moon's apprentice would be Trixie. Good job. This is well written, I cannot wait to see more.
Anon
Your pacing gets atrocious in later chapters, but this has a giant potential to become something legendary. I'll be watching.
ReplyDeleteHoly geez it updated! I've been wondering what happened to this one. I even forgot the title after a while so I couldn't check up on it. *reads chapter 8*
ReplyDelete@Fifth Alicorn
ReplyDeleteYeah, decided to take a bit to correct a few errors in earlier chapters and carefully consider my future path. On that side note, thank you again for the reviews Vimbert.
Anyone who's getting back into this story, I recommend you check out some of the earlier chapters again. With some gentle (and not-so-gentle) nudging from me, Flashgen really cleaned this story up and made it shine. Chapter 7, in particular, has been drastically improved.
ReplyDeleteIt was good before, and now it's great.
finished Chapter 6, and i must admit, this is one of the best adventures i've ever read
ReplyDelete@MaSc
ReplyDeleteIt's funny you say that considering it's before any real... adventuring happens. Regardless, comments are nice, and I do appreciate that you're enjoying it.
yeah the start of such storys is very important ;) End i like the wohle concept of this fiction.
ReplyDeleteWell, and after finishing Chapter 11 right now, i can say, that i can keep at my statement "one of the best adventures i've ever read"
@MaSc
ReplyDeleteWell, I'll hopefully have a 4-chapter update out soon for EqD, but I update chapter-by-chapter on FiMFiction, so you can look for the story there.
i'm never on this site. link please?
ReplyDeleteok, found it myself
ReplyDeleteWhy must this story be so entertaining?!? Please keep working and updating this. It's premise is too good for it to fall to the wayside incomplete.
ReplyDeleteNeed Moar Nowwwwww!