Author: Lawrence Gander
Description:After vanquishing a cruel tyrant, a group of seasoned adventurers find themselves within the world of My Little Pony. Can they find their way back home? Have they brought danger to Equestria with them? Read on to find out in this action/adventure tale.
Dungeons, Dragons, and a Little Friendship (All Chapters) (New Part 15!)
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Additional Tags: 4th edition, Rated T, Action, Adventure, light Comedy
89 comments:
This story... fascinates me. I'll keep reading, to be sure.
ReplyDelete>4th ed
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While I'm not a fan of 4e, I do suppose it could be worse. (Essentials, anyone?)
ReplyDeleteOh wow, its up.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous 4:29, well at least i tell you beforehand, to each his own.
I know nothing about D&D, but this story is gripping all the same. I must read it all!
ReplyDeleteGood so far.
ReplyDeleteI just want to see a fanfic where the mane six gets together to play DnD.
ReplyDeleteHell, screw fan-fic, I want that as an episode. There is a friendship lesson in there somewhere!
Either Twilight learns to DM better by listening and trying out friend's ideas (not doing so is a common mistake of a noobish "by the book" DM, and Twilight would SO be a By-the-book DM)
Or nopony likes the campaign and has a hard time telling her.
@Anonymous That fanfic already exists!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-ponies-play-d.html
Just want to add, though, there's a lot of grammar mix-ups in this story. Like, a LOT.
ReplyDeleteI keep reading "HAT! HEEL!!" in the voice of the archeologist from the beginning of the fith element movie. (AZIZ!! LIGHT!!)
ReplyDeleteI really love it!I need more of this story!
ReplyDeleteKeep it up!
Thanks for all the attention, all you bronies managed to take my two weeks of a FanFiction only release and beat those statistics to a pulp in Twenty-Four hours. (you actually doubled them)
ReplyDeleteMy name leads to my profile page on FanFiction (if you have not already checked it), i don't have any other fics, but i try to update it daily with stuff and ETA's on the next chapter drop.
As always feedback is appreciated, i'll try to get my grammar together. FanFiction.com is awesome for allowing me to re-upload chapters with changes.
@ToonNinja
ReplyDeleteOK, after some digging and also some common sense that returned to me a while ago. I figured out why my grammar was poo
1. I have an accent, i mix up of and have all the dang time.
2. Libreoffice, while great for FanFiction.net document submissions, has a horrible spell-checker.
3.so i copy-pasta'd each chapter into a word document and manually went through the spellcheck to fix grammar and such as it appeared, before re-copying the fixed stuff into another libreoffice document.
TLDR: my story should have 50% less junk in it, and therefore be 20% cooler. so i challenge you to read it again and see if you find it more appealing to your eyes.
A proper DnD story with endearing characters and (mostly)in-role ponies (although Twilight could use less "OK" and more "Well," I think)
ReplyDeleteDo we get to see more of this? :D
I'm having way too much fun reading this. There are a few spelling/grammar errors, but other than that I have to commend you. It makes me want to reinstall NWN and get playing. Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
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ReplyDeleteJust thought i would say that Chapter eight is all ready to go, not sure when it will pop up on Fanfiction.net though it always says it could take up to thirty minutes to post.
ReplyDeleteso... enjoy!
This is a great story. I hope you don't mind if I nick a few elements of this for my campaign :3
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteGo ahead, if your friends ask how you thought it up just say you read a good story. :D
Speaking of DnD, I need to get back to finishing up my own campaign so my friends are not let down tomorrow when I am DM-ing
I'm really enjoying the story so far, but I do need to mention that you constantly use phrases like "must of" and "should of".
ReplyDeleteThat's a mistake. The word you want is "must've" (and so on), contraction of "must have". It sounds the same but is spelled differently. :)
The writing in this is absolutely fantastic, no doubts.
ReplyDeleteSimply a fantastic read! Faster paced than most stories, sure, but suitably so to match well with the events occurring
ReplyDeleteI'm really enjoying the hints of the underlying threat as well as the place the elements of harmony are playing into it all, and seeing where the plot leads.
It's also nice seeing the mane cast finally getting assigned their 'classes' in chapter 10!
Finally, the length of each chapter is a satisfying chunk to read in each update - unlike quite a few other fics, which can be all to brief at times.
Suffice to say, I'm eagerly looking forward to future chapters as they come...
That was very enjoyable I can't wait until the next chapters.
ReplyDelete@Masked
ReplyDeleteThanks Masked, I myself do not enjoy short chapters that end in a climax. They have their place, but when I can't immediately read the next chapter I am kind of left going DURNIT! curse you author and your sense of dramatic tension.
Now this got me thinking that DM of the rings / Darths & Droids -like webcomic made based on the first season could be awesome
ReplyDelete@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteYEA GODS, MAN!! My only complaint is that I can not stop thinking what would of happened if Pinkie had become a sorceress like Cartanis feared.
This is amazing, please please finish this.
ReplyDeleteYou're the first author to get me to feel for their OC's. I typically enjoy OC's but yours are the first that I've taken a definite liking to.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
I'm not dead yet.
ReplyDeleteChapter eleven is up and I hope you like it.
Chapter 11 seems like a big departure from the previous 10 with its' Asimovian plot. Is this a side story or will it tie in to the main plot and where we left off in 10 with the prelude to the final battle?
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteJust trust me, by the end of chapter 12 it will wrap in.
I have a plan, i knew that chapter 11 would be out of left field and test my readers, but just bare with me.
I promise we will be back to the main group by the time 13 rolls around. It all has a purpose.
If I would hazard a guess, I thing Four is something akin to a warforged warrior or barbarian.
ReplyDeleteA nice story, non the less.
Sure, chapter 11 was out of the blue, but was quickly hooked and only left curious as to how it'll tie into things.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm guessing Selena is a bit of a nod to Selene from the Luna Vs series, causing me to chuckle at the appearance regardless of intent.
The story is still engaging as ever. I'm honestly waiting to see where you go with it relating to rest of the plot, because of the picture you've painted in my mind.
ReplyDeleteSorry, I simply could not get read all the way through Chapter 11. I got about half way through then gave up. While technically good, its plot held absolutely no interest to me and seem utterly unconnected to the previous story. I simply couldn't read it all.
ReplyDelete@Shanaar
ReplyDeleteWHO TOLD YOU... i mean... maybe... He hasn't had a power pairing yet, and i can tell you his 'class' will be out of the blue yet make sense. Muahaha
@maskedmustelid
Yes it is a nod to that series in a way, but don't take it the wrong way, i find the series cute and enjoyable.
@RLM
And here I was thinking I would lose readers because of this chapter. Hope 12 doesn't disappoint, when i get around to writing it.
Hey Lawrence, glad to see you posting here. I don't have a FF.net account so I haven't been able to leave any feedback for you there, but I just wanted to say that your story is great and I eagerly await each chapter. I have to say 11 surprised me at the start, but I quickly was able to piece things together and now have a general idea of where you're going with it and just how it ties in to the main story. As an author it can be kind of intimidating to take a risk like that, but I think you did well considering my interest in Ree and Four's story quickly overcame my confusion over the sudden change in direction.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work my friend.
Really really loved Four.
ReplyDeleteUmm.... Four is not Abigail, right? This is pretty far-fetched but Abigail does seem to think like a robot. That would be a really sad transformation so I hope that's not true :(
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteIf you ever want to speak with me i usually hang out in #EquestrianStudy in the chat below.
Sorry for double post BUT
ReplyDeleteAdded a scene tot he very start of Eleven, it should now make a little more sense as to what is going on. I am sorry, i am stupid, i should've had this at the start.
We all roll ones every once in a while, i guess i was just due.
my guess is that Four is gonna travel through time and join as an Iron-Forged and/or Ree is gonna time-travel/dimensional warp in and join as an Artificer...
ReplyDeleteOR, Ree will finally die and Four will assimilate Ree's mind into himself and they time shift/dimensional warp to the group...
and these all make sense because Luna tells them to XD
I can already see the ending to all of this...
ReplyDelete"And then, the lich raises his mighty hoof and—"
"Carl?"
"What?" Carl looked up from his game book.
Todd scratched his head. "This has been a pretty cool campaign and all, but it's getting a little old."
"What?" Carl was aghast. "Guys, you were just getting to the best part!"
"We promised we'd watch the damn show. This is getting a little excessive, man." Juan grimaced.
"But you can't just end a game just like that! I put way too much work into this!"
"Sorry, Carl."
Carl looked at the fourth player. "Et tu, Oliva?"
Olivia shrugged. "I like FiM too, but as the sole female representative here, I have to draw the line at some point."
"Your characters are doomed the moment you quit," Carl threatened. As the others filed out of the living room, he yelled, "I'm serious!"
The door slammed, and Carl was all alone.
He sighed. "I need new friends."
I love this story so much.
ReplyDelete@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteI must admit, I was wondering for a while when reading the original version if I was just mis-linked to another fic you wrote, but it still hooked me and kept me reading. I hope you continue with this part of the story, as it really is a great addition (it also works well as a stand-alone story even outside of the overall fic).
I just want to say how amazing it was that you developed 3-4 completely new characters this far into the story and made them so memorable (I think Four and Ree are now some of my favorite OC ponies).
Keep up the good work!
PS: I eagerly await someone in the community to make some Ree and Four artwork!
I just finished reading chapters 1-10 this weekend. First of all, it was over 400 pages on microsoft word, at least the way i had it formatted anyways. and your characters are engaging, and you interpret the cannon characters really well. Even the bit characters gave me an emotional reaction... I must admit manly tears were shed when Andur went around giving the bad news to the families of the ponies who were goulified. Epic, man.
ReplyDeleteAnd Applejack as a monk works so well.
Five stars, without a doubt. Imagine how pleased I was to see that chapt 11 was up when I logged on :D will continue reading it for certian. Cant wait for it to be done, keep it up!
Last Chapter was... interesting.
ReplyDeleteI must say that I'm quite... that I'm -very- confused by Chapter 11.
I mean... what now ? What's happening really ?
Robots/automatons, computers, high-tech laboratories ?
When did we switched from Sword&Magic to Steam Punk ?
Even considering cities like Manehattan, and the trains from the series... Robots with AI ? That's one hell of a leap in technology... especially while, so far, ponies had armors and swords and bows...
All right...Well
ReplyDeleteLittle confused by chapter 11 as everyone else is by the looks of it. I going to go out on a limb here and say this is in the future? Possibly?
Or could it just be that Poneyville doesn't have all this stuff because it was started by Earth ponies? It's all really confusing and I really hope the next chapter will clear things up.
Whether through some sort of 'Temporal Timewarp' or some other explanation.
Really great series, You did a really great job! I was a little disappointed that Pinkie Pie's 'surprise' wasn't a 4e D&D book... Although if i had I probably would have gotten up and threw my headset at the wall... Yes, I did react audibly to the fractures in the fourth wall. I also really like how you put Derpy in the series.
GG you win.
@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteIs Four gonna be a Berserker? I'm not even sure if that's possible in 4e do that might not be true. It would make since though.
@Srake
ReplyDeleteFrankly... right now I think that the *Time Portal* theory seems like the most probable one...
Even If I consider other stories... giving ponies microwaves and TVs and such... Again -->Robots with AI (...yeah?) ...Future portal time warp thingy it is...
I guess it is my bad for getting you guys to think this is the future, ah well.
ReplyDeleteI thought i dropped enough hints as to what is actually going on but then again, my bad.
Might have to do some rewriting, or just get a little more blunt.
@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure it's the EXTREME difference in level of technology, that mostly confuse people...
You know... Robots and advanced Artificial Intelligence (AI) aren't a 'medieval' or even a 'modern-present' technology... more futuristic-like, see ?
Hence the confusion, I believe.
@Nova25
ReplyDeleteThe confusion does make sense when put that way, but i hoped some of the hints i dropped in chapter ten would've made the blow a little less severe.
I just hope you guys will stick with me, you loved my first ten chapters, this is a rocky portion sure, but i'll get all your love back.
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ReplyDeleteChapter 11 was fantastic, really liked how you characterized Four. Just a little confusing though.
ReplyDeleteI'm assuming Four is supposed to be a parody on the autonomous race from D&D?
Either way, fantastic job and I look forward to the next chapter.
Like the anonymous guy above me, I liked the chapter, it's just I have no idea how it's going to tie in, though I have my conspiracies.
ReplyDelete>Chapter 11
ReplyDeleteCONSPIRACYTHEORYCONSPIRACYTHEORYCONSPIRACYTHEORY
In all seriousness, enough hints have been dropped to place the events of this chapter – namely, Luna talking about technology from before her imprisonment having to be rediscovered. Also, with all the talk of "Lunarians", society at the time likely had a much different structure. Thus, we can conclude Four was created back before Nightmare Moon's banishment. How he ties into the current story remains to be seen, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Regarding the story overall, I'd have to say that the only irk I had was the spontaneous, undeveloped, and pointless reappearance of Trixie and Gilda. The only thing that scene accomplished was burning up Cartanis's library, which easily could've been accomplished without that clutter. But that's the only criticism I have for you. Kudos to you, good fellow, and congratulations on a fantastic story.
Hope you update this soon! This is an unusual crossover, but you've made it work really well.
ReplyDeletecan we get a part 12 please ive been dying to find out what happens next. its been a month or two since i finished part 11.please please PLEASE UPDATE.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWorkin on it, just stay with me.
@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteim the anon from above and i will be vigilantly waiting. oh and btw i have seen a pic in the Drawfriend Stuff #152 that i am supposing is based off of this fan fic. ^ ^
Was reading 11 and it took me awhile to realize that it wasn't the main story. It was just so good though...
ReplyDeleteAck, I want more...!
ReplyDelete@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteWhy is Chapter 11 there? It's a separate story entirely! It's really good, but it's not D&D...
Alright, been a while, here to announce eleven is going to be removed. But not forgotten, long story short I am taking Four's backstory into its own fic (not a separate universe, just simply removed for sake of the horrible continuity it enforces on my fic) A side story basically... this just feels like a better idea than simply shoving the dang thing into your faces.
ReplyDeleteOnce again thanks for reading/criticizing. I think i finally got me mojo back.
@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteAfter rereading the first scene in 11 I can see how you tie it over, but admittedly, it's downright confusing and may be best separated into its own story arc. It's a great beginning, though. I like it. Just for this fic I want more D&D.
Can't wait for chapter 12. I'm also curious to find out how Four will sync up with the DM arc.
ReplyDeleteI wait patiently for 12 good sir; you've done a terrific job capturing my attention with your storytelling.
ReplyDeleteI will not give up! I shall endure the harsh winter and see the dawn of a new update!
ReplyDeleteShall not fail...ugh!
ReplyDeleteI expect to update BY tuesday (maybe earlier if i roll a twenty for not-procrastinating), i have like 5-6 more pages to write then proof them.
ReplyDeletean update by Thursday OMG you better not be lieing. I have been waiting patiently for 6 MONTHS ! That's right I am that anon from august who you told “just stay with me” and I have been. I've been opening every single story update to date just hoping to see "Dungeons ,Dragons, and a Little Friendship" part 12. now i can not wait till thursday.
ReplyDeleteoh crap "Tuesday "wow i read that wrong wait . . . that's today isn't it ? yes yes yes yes yes
ReplyDelete/)^3^(\
It's updated, Sent email about update, enjoy.
ReplyDeleteWrote a 'new' Chapter eleven, because of how stupid i was about forcing that other crap on you. I was also wondering if it would be worth it to try and transcribe all this to FimFiction, would like anybrony's opinion on that.
Now if you can excuse me, skycrack is calling!
wait you changed chapter 11! but i loved that chapter and i liked were you were going with it and wanted to know how it was going to fit in with the original story but I guess the people have spoken . i for one did not think it was crap since afterwords i went and played D&D and crated a warforged named Four but oh well i guess i will have to find out what happened to Four some other time and way.
ReplyDeletep.s. blind bag ponies work very well to represent characters on D&D dungeon maps
@coldshoulder
ReplyDeleteI read your comments in Pinkie's voice, and it fit so well...
finally
ReplyDelete@coldshoulder
ReplyDeleteI still have the 'old' chapter eleven hanging out in my hard drive, and a kind of finished version of Four's story, but there are too many spoilers within for this time in the main plot, so i'm withholding it until it is relevant/not spoilerific.
Its also nice to know that i have some faithful readers, you guys are awesome.
@DrahcirAloer
ReplyDeletelol that's awesome ^ ^ since pinkie pie is my all time favorite pink party pony of pure perfection.
@Lawrence Gander
that makes sense. as much as i want to read it i would hate for it to ruin the hole story. but i am sure when the time is right you will put it up and i will bask in its awesomeness.
>(New Part 11!)
ReplyDelete-Wait... wasn't there already a Ch.11 ? : @Nova25
...or was it remade ? Or maybe it was CH.11 part 1, and it's CH.11 part 2 that is new ?
CH.11 ...again ? : (Part 1)
ReplyDelete>that little outburst ah his than
-ah his than ? What ? I really can’t ‘’decipher’’ what she ‘’tried’’ to say there.
... In the scene with Applejack, and her running ‘away?’ of/on a conveyer belt, of a ‘furnace?’ monster ?, and something about coal, I have to say that I was somewhat confused ...
>"Ah, applesauce!"
>"What?" Ted said to Applejack's outburst.
>"Just my food, some of it got... ugh, everywhere. Now all my rations are gonna taste like apples."
-.......huh ?? It’s APPLEJACK we are talking about ! Her + Apple = Well, the most obvious thing ever... She likes apples, so there no reason for her to make that odd statement, as if she was especially displeased that her food will taste like apples.
It’s like having Pinky Pie say : ‘’Ugh, my food is gonna taste all sugary’’. Doesn’t make sense.
>I'll find you, ya sick madmare freak.
-I thought Dragh-something (the Bad Guy) was, well, a guy ? Wouldn’t that be ‘madcolt’ ?
>Applejack did the same, but promptly let loose an unsatisfied groan, "Ehhh, applesauce."
-Again. Illogical that Applejack, of all ponies, reacts like ‘that’ about something or anything apple-related.
@Nova25
ReplyDeleteThank you for your post, i need more like these. I look forward to your Pt.2 review.
And yes this is a 'redo' from the old chapter eleven, i decded to get back to the main plot because it was rather silly of me to pull... well what i tried to pull with the old chapter eleven.
@Lawrence Gander
ReplyDeleteI somewhat remember the previous, old CH.11... I remember that I was confused by the sudden change, passing from Renaissance/Modern tech. and known Characters, to Futuristic techno-science and unknown characters.
But!, I also remember that it was relatively interesting, by itself.
Also, what I do are more like 'commentaries', than reviews really.
*Read, think, write thoughts and theories about what I'm reading, Repeat.*
So far, it's a good story, quite interesting too. I like adventure and/or RPG stuff, D&d and the likes.
Speaking of adventure... You could request Sethisto to add the [Adventure] tag (it's an old 'new tag').
@Nova25
ReplyDeleteYeah I'm going to have Seth add new tags when i get twelve rolled out (not anytime soon, i'm barely started with it and i'm also playing house cleaner as i try to make th eolder chapters better)
It's also nice to know that people liked the old chapter eleven, but as youc an read a few comments up i have reservations about releasing that work at this time.
Also Nova i have to thank you for your input, by this point your practically an unofficial proofer for me.
CH.11 - Part 2 : (darn big chapter, it was... Took me longer to read than a Ch. of Fallout.Eq.)
ReplyDelete>what are those things we was fightin'?
-‘were’ (small error)
...also, as long as I’m thinking about it... I may have forgotten how Applejack’s accent was in previous chapters (it has been a while), but you ‘might’ want to check her accent (maybe look a few stories for examples).
(later) It seems to get better after the 1/2 - 2/3 mark.
>"Please, Rainbow Dash has had tougher clouds that she had to deal with." She flaunted back.
-Just a quick note... RD isn’t Trixie. RD actually rather rarely talks of herself at the 3rd person, in the series.
... the short scene done from the Animated Pony-Skeleton‘s point of view was pretty interesting. A soul stolen from its rightful rest, who finally returns to it. Simple, but well done ...
>Destroyed old barns tougher than that.
-Heh, new episode reference, I see.
>With her cargo firmly grasped with herself latched onto the things back she looped (...)
-Missing a few of commas in the sentence, maybe ? Or a dot, I’m not sure. Maybe the format of the sentence ?
>then she remembered the two ton beast that was still on her tail.
-The ‘’ghouls’’ weight as much as a baby elephant, or just this one ?
>two feathery appendages tightly grasped in her hooves.
-RD is holding... Ted ? Wasn’t he shooting (green things) at the ‘ghoul’ a moment ago ?
>the behemoth was still aimlessly swatting about
-Ah... so, it’s a ‘behemoth’ and not a ‘ghoul’, or is it a ‘ghoul’ that somehow became super-sized for some reasons ? (Morphing undeads ?)
>She watched as Ted erupted into a furious storm, charging into the beast with lightning arced between his blades
-Ahh, some real combat, with clear attacks and direct results :). Not that I mind the occasional game of ‘Cat chasing the mouse’ (and vice-versa), but it’s good to see some clear display of their power(s) and weapon(s).
Ted (and the other 2) are veteran adventurers, with weapons and sets of abilities after all.
>"Well in that time did you ever make a sword that would 'un-cut' somepony?"
>"Then... I don't know what to do." He quickly stuffed it away
-I... don’t quite get it ? Because AJ asked if he ever made a weapon ‘not being a weapon’ (which is just some pseudo-wisdom talk), he... huh... that somehow makes him stop or realize that he can’t *reverse-engineer* the artifact ?
@Nova25
ReplyDelete>Ted poked and shook Dash slightly, "Still out like the tarrasque"
-Not sure about the comparison there, but bonus point for the *Almighty* Tarrasque reference.
>"Because I am not, I repeat, I will not pull a fairy tale wake up kiss with a HORSE!"
>"I'd rather die."
-*Raise an eyebrow* ..mmh ? Might want to ‘’rethink’’ the sentence. Just a thought.
>"That was for my mom."
-Wait ? ...huh, oh right, AJ’s parents (or maybe just her mother) are alive in ‘this’ story. I ‘’think’’ I remember that detail. She had been ‘infected’, but was cured, right ?
>'my son' >dome shaped building thing with the key next to it >you have to stop it, you have to destroy what's left of my research.
-I will take a wild guess there, and go with the ‘’RPG classic’’ : Ancient and very advanced civilization that collapsed, a long-long time ago, for whatever reason/cataclysm/rogue (super-)AI ...and the previous version of ‘’Ch.11’’ ?
(just a wild guess, as I said... this theory might introduce a hell lot of problems and questions, if it was true)
>as he gazed down upon the little potentially thermonuclear device
-...Ted knows about ‘thermonuclear’ stuff ? Or is it just there as a ‘funny’ comparison, for the reader ?
>A great bolt of light which shot into the very reaches of the cities sky, arcing and tearing apart at all it touched.
-A hidden underground city belonging to an ancient and very advanced (and dead) civilization... with some sort of generator that has gone haywire ?
My wild guess of earlier is starting to not look so ‘wild’ anymore. Still... a dead, highly advanced civilization would introduce quite a LOT of interrogations (some related to Celestia and Luna).
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Well, it was another rather interesting chapter... thought, I have to say, the first scenes of ‘’combat’’ (the behemoth ghoul scenes, mostly) seemed a little confusing for me, trying to keep track of what was happening, and who was doing what to who... It got (quite) better later, in the following fights though.
That ‘dead-ancient-advanced civilization’ thing might be a good thing, or a really bad one, depending on how well it will ‘’tie’’ with the various points and details (like : actual level of tech. VS the ancient civ. tech., or Celestia and Luna VS where were they in those days?, etc...)
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ReplyDeleteThank you again Nova25, now i got some more work to do.
ReplyDeletetotally confused with the eleven chapter, not that I didn't like it
ReplyDeleteI had an old ereader version and had to come back to check if it was right, I thought maybe the compiler got confused with two different stories
To save people searching time:
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