• Story: Bedtime Story (Update 2 more!)

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    [Normal] Fairy Tale time!  It doesn't have anything to do with Rainbow Dash, I just thought the image kind of fit (Doesn't have any specific pony)  This counters that horror story from earlier hopefully!

    Author: BillyColt
    Description: Taken from a thread on ponychan where the TC asked for a bedtime story. Done in the style of a simple fairytale, about a filly looking for her father.
    Bedtime Story (All Links)

    Additional Tags: Normal, fairy tale, short story.

    Sunday, May 8, 2011 op
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    20 comments:

    1. FluttershyMay 4, 2011 at 12:59 AM

      wow, that was such an awesome story.

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    2. BobcatMay 4, 2011 at 1:03 AM

      Very cute. The fairy tale quality worked well.

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    3. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 1:30 AM

      Owl pellets?? As in poo?? And she had to carry them in her mouth?? That's pretty nasty.

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    4. Onnane GarronMay 4, 2011 at 1:38 AM

      Well done!

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    5. Rainbow BriskMay 4, 2011 at 4:02 AM

      much more of an old Grimm-style fable than a bedtime story (sans the creepy moral to scare kids straight). I couldn't help but see the owl as Owlowicious (or however you spell it).

      Goddamn that owl.

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    6. Krass McWriterMay 4, 2011 at 6:02 AM

      Hey, OP of that. Topic here. Really glad it got posted. Nice to see it here.

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    7. PernasMay 4, 2011 at 8:19 AM

      @AnonymousRegurgitations, actually, not poo.

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    8. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 8:53 AM

      happy end "yay"

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    9. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 9:25 AM

      @Anonymousits a kids story what did you expect

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    10. BobcatMay 4, 2011 at 12:27 PM

      @Anonymous

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    11. Onnane GarronMay 4, 2011 at 2:51 PM

      @Rainbow Brisk

      That's the best kind of story, the kids are too scared to get out of bed till morning! ;-)

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    12. Krass McWriterMay 4, 2011 at 3:58 PM

      Hells yes, something I wrote got published on EqD.

      I'm so happy I can't take it.

      Im gonna party till I drop.

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    13. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 4:03 PM

      @AnonymousRegurgitations, actually, not droppings. Common in birds of prey. Can't digest everything, so they regurgitate some of it.

      Still pretty gross, yeah.

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    14. AnonymousMay 5, 2011 at 6:06 PM

      clever story. loved the last riddle.

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    15. AnonymousMay 5, 2011 at 6:08 PM

      Krass McWriter... Do you have any more?

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    16. Krass McWriterMay 5, 2011 at 9:29 PM

      @Anonymous
      Like stories or bed time stories?

      For the first one I got a fic on why theres so many time lords.

      For the second, I COULD make more, its a bit tricky since I like to throw big words, but there for kids so... Yeah.

      I liked that last riddle too

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    17. Krass McWriterMay 6, 2011 at 7:31 PM

      Oh, it did get posted. It just didn't get bumped.

      Who can find my story when its 5 pages deep?

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    18. AnonymousMay 9, 2011 at 10:48 AM

      I enjoyed the lessons learned in Krass's stories, but the errors in grammar and spelling distracted me a little too much. I'd recommend that Krass seek a beta reader/editor when writing future stories, just to add that professional polish.

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    19. IgnaesiaMay 10, 2011 at 5:06 PM

      Loved the one about the spoiled filly, really touching

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    20. daniellaprice30July 27, 2012 at 12:36 AM

      Bedtime stories is one of our bonding activities with our daughter. I remember we used to tell her quotes about sleep too so that she'll remember the importance of getting enough sleep.

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