• Story: Sun, Surf, and Friendship

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    [Normal] Ponies at the beach.  Out of 300+ fanfictions, I think this is the first one that covers that 

    Author: Cloudwatcher
    Description: Twilight and friends head to the beach for a well earned holiday, but find a little more than they expected.
    Sun, Surf, and Friendship
    Tuesday, April 5, 2011 op
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    6 comments:

    1. AnonymousApril 5, 2011 at 12:52 PM

      Great story!

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    2. AnonymousApril 5, 2011 at 12:58 PM

      Now I have that sea pony song in my head...damn....

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    3. NinestempestApril 5, 2011 at 1:05 PM

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    4. NinestempestApril 5, 2011 at 1:06 PM

      I'll be briefer here than on dA.

      Fun story, but ended pretty abruptly and seems to purposefully leave the READER (confound my typos) wanting more to happen. Stories like this CAN work well, if you leave a good emotion or idea or image when you end the scene. This was a "LETS GET READY TO GO" and then "WELP IT'S BEEN A WEEK NOW."

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    5. NaxtsApril 5, 2011 at 2:17 PM

      Well I really liked this story. It was interesting to see a hippocampus in a story, though I was honestly expecting a seapony =0.
      And I didn't really like how the story just ended. i would have like to see how the festival was like.

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    6. AnonymousApril 5, 2011 at 6:12 PM

      Nice way of retconning the Sea-Ponies into Hippocampus (which, interestingly, is what Seahorses are called in French).

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