Author: Tooney D
Description: We all know of background characters. Their only purpose in live is to fill space. They most of the time have no lines, no back story, and most of the time, not even a name. They're only props, and nothing more. However, when weird things begin happening in Equestria, a band of those unnoticables must band together to save the kingdom from the greatest threat to pony kind: Us. And it all starts with a gangsta Fluttershy.Ponies Vs. The Internet Part 1
Ponies Vs. The Internet Part 2
Additional Tags: Comedy, Gangsta Fluttershy
23 comments:
LOL tags are LOL
ReplyDeleteThat's pretty good. Gangsta Fluttershy is so cute, I can't stand it. Keep working on it.
ReplyDelete5/5
I lol'd so hard at fluttershy!
ReplyDeleteThe story is great so far. I think that you overdid Horte's accent a little too much but it looks great so far and I can't wait to see more!
I think I'm going to like this story. While it seems to be an affectionate satirizing of fanfiction in general, I could see some nice pokes at all the shippers.
ReplyDeleteWait, background ponies? Oh, does that mean Derpy Hooves too?
@Batty Gloom:
ReplyDeleteSeeing how popular Derpy is with the community, I would guess she was affected by the...eh..."phase" or whatever you'd call it I dunno. She's probably sneaking into some British phone booth somewhere with Dr. Whooves.
Then again, we can always hope.
The picture is funny. So many butt shots
ReplyDeleteExcellent parody/satire.
ReplyDeleteI loved how the opening was that Cold Opening with the running away from the scary things; it was a really decent way to open up the story and set up the stony face that was going to be telling the rest of the story.
Nice Journey Into History; I liked how you started with general facts before getting into Cherry's personal life and problems, and the quip about Pinkie Pie having her giant monument and eating it too made me laugh.
The Gangsta Fluttershy scene was so random, offensive, and out of this world that I lol'd. It's just too funny to imagine soft spoken Fluttershy being so aggressive like that. "Dat Cutie Mark" was a real treat, and I thank you for topping the gag with that.
The scene with ColtCuddling was hilarious. I loved how you did the "At least" line. The excuses, however, were so painful, that were just plain painful. It was a real problem for me, so I skipped the excuses.
Your time skip was interesting. It's nice to see you set the Paranoia Fuel and give us an eyebrow raiser with Coke.
Lovely "Dun Dun Dun" moment. It would have been nicer with a line in the darkness instead of that "in the shadow of something bad about to happen", though.
Your body will never be prepared for Gangsta Fluttershy.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you opened the next chapter with a very nice mix of personal and general facts about the Waiter Pony. I usually don't like Character Description Openers, but it was appropriate and rather nice.
ReplyDeleteI'll just go ahead and say that the EverFree Forest memories and scenes were boring. Seriously, I can understand why its necessary, but it was just plain uninteresting. Nice Giggle at the Ghosties and Charlie references, though.
Your cliff hanger with the entrance was rather lacking. It would have been better if we had an initial glimpse of the place rather than the elevator itself.
Anyways, I look forward to seeing how you go with this.
This just might turn out to be the greatest thing ever. Only time will tell if this quest to mock the fandom will succeed!
ReplyDeleteBefore I read this, I must say the asses in the picture are very... "defined." I find humor in this xD
ReplyDeleteVermicious Knids?
ReplyDeleteWhat's next? A chocolate river?
Sauce?
ReplyDeleteI need a higher resolution version of the above mention picture.
“Yo, what up, nigs. Jus’ came by t’grab me summa dem cherries before I head out with mah homies.”
ReplyDelete~Scratch
DAT CUTIE MARK...
ReplyDeleteI lost it at DAT CUTIE MARK.
ReplyDeleteAwesome, 5 stars.
ReplyDeleteI love that story. Also love where it's going (need a continuation of the story here)
ReplyDeleteNiggashy is the most awesome thing to me =) I LMAOed on that moment alot.
Poor ponies, they just lost and they just doesn't know it yet. The Background Ponies Intelligence Bureau doesn't know but he just got affected.At this very moment they attracted the attention of the writers and soon they will be mind whipped to be reused.
ReplyDeleteI don't have the words to describe how much I want this to continue.
ReplyDeleteGangsta Fluttershy is a lot more funny if you can read it in her original voice.
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