Author: Tanner
Description: Spikes dragon friend drops into town one day to hang out with him, but when his brash attitude starts conflicting with the other ponies will he be sticking around?Ol' Buddy Ol' Pal
Additional Tags: One-shot, Diamond Dogs, dragon, OC
3 comments:
I must say I quiet enjoyed it and it almost read like an episode. Still I had a couple of problems.
ReplyDelete1. I didn't really understand why there were tensions between the unicorns and the dragons. Flarehook says it was because of another 1000 years of not eating ponies? But later you made it sound like dragons rarely ever ate ponies.
2. Rainbow Dash bugs the hell out of Flarehook for a race, which he constantly and rather kindly says "no" to. Finally, he tells her to fuck off after she pushes him too far. Twilight then proceeds to verbally rape him. What? Just earlier she was like 'yeah Rainbow Dash cant keep her mouth shut blah blah blah' and now when she is OBVIOUSLY harassing this guy she agrees with her?
Otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. It was pretty unique and original especially after the curveball near the end. I thought it was going to be Gila 2.0, but I got a pleasant surprise.
Thank you for the read.
I liked it! We need more stories with dragons.
ReplyDeletelol, my ipod borked the document. Now it says "he End" at the end.
ReplyDelete-elite guy 94