Author: Silent Magi
Description: Alternate-timeline of the MLP: FiM verse. One young mage’s quest for peace during a time of war leads her to seek out a mythical set of items known only as the Elements of Harmony in order to bring back the Goddesses: Princess Luna and Princess Celestia.Knights of Harmony Chapters
Chapter 1: Long, Dark Nightmare
Chapter 2: One Hoof in Front of the Other
Chapter 3: On a Wing and Prayer
Chapter 4: Riding With the Shadows of the Night
Chapter 5: Oatmeal of Destiny
Chapter 6: Saddled With The Future (New!)
Additional Tags: Alternate Timeline Longfic Quest Journey
31 comments:
@Anonymous Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to say that I'm am deeply infatuated with this story. The idea of this alternate timeline seems most original and the concept of the war seems believable as well. I do particularly enjoy the relationship with all the characters now that they are situated in these different situations and how it plays out. Hope to see more of this soon!
ReplyDeleteI like this story too. All we need now is for the Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Apple Bloom to show up.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I have this feeling that Nightmare Moon and Celestia are going to show up on their own... and pick up THEIR conflict right where they left off. Twilight just might need the Elements to knock some sense into the God Princesses.
Wow, thanks for the support bronies. I'm glad that people are enjoying this potentially long story. I don't have much planned out for the future chapters, however, I do have plans for Nightmare moon and Celestia. I do hope that the story lives up to expectations.
ReplyDeleteI see why this is such an epic story! My gosh, I'm quite happy with how this is looking.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see the interaction between the other ponies!
"HOW TO FLIRT, AN EGGHEADS GUIDE" hehehehe.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to read this fic later, but I just had to comment on the giggles in that picture.
Really enjoyed this story. It's one of the most unique "alternate timeline" reimaginings that I've seen! I can't wait to see what Pinkie Pie's place in this world is going to be.
ReplyDeleteJust try to proofread it a little better next time; there were a few sentences that had weird structure or seemed to be missing a word. 5 stars!
Very much enjoyed this story, can't wait to see more!
ReplyDeleteI love it! Loved the interaction between Fluttershy and the group. Definitly looking forward to where this is going!
ReplyDeleteHopefully there is some Nightmare Moon-Celestia epic magic battle, these fics need more battles!
I'm really loving this fic. Please continue.
ReplyDeleteVery enjoyable so far, I hope to see it continued!
ReplyDeleteI literally was thinking about how much I'd like to see this updated just earlier this morning. Nice to see it still is going on.
ReplyDeleteYay! Chapter 5! FINALLY. I was beginning to think this was never going to get posted.
ReplyDeleteNot much here alas except more setup and hints of the plot. Celestia and Luna make contact with Twilight under the guise of pseudonyms and the Party is apparently going to drop by the Apple farm and presumably pick up Applejack and Pinkie Pie. And maybe even the Doctor too!
But is it going to be more than the OTL 6 Ponies that reach the Princesses' castle? I can't wait to find out.
I'm really glad this fic is back, but...why so short? ;-;
ReplyDeleteAnyways, there was a bit of comma abuse at the start of part 5, but otherwise, it's all good. ^_^ I'm enjoying it so far.
Still as good and interesting as I remember it. :)
ReplyDeleteIt has been a long time, but that's ok... Time isn't always proper for writting.
@Nova25
ReplyDeleteWell, comedy equals tragedy plus time. Regarding the setting of this story, this fic will become awesome... That is, even more awesome than it already is!
But why only 18 ratings? This story needs much more popularity!
Maybe Seth can change the image to something more adventurous and relevant to the plot to attract more readers...
WANT MORE!
ReplyDeleteThis story is great. Went right through it in a single sitting. I can't wait for the next part!
ReplyDeleteI can't believe this doesn't have more comments. It's amazing, and definitely the best 'war' alternate history story I've read.
ReplyDeleteWhen Sweetie Bell was talking about Rarity having "friends" over... do I just have a dirty mind? o.0; Screams of joy, indeed.
ReplyDeleteI'm already a fan of stories that are made...well, not necessarily darker and edgier, but explore darker elements not present in the original. This story definitely manages to keep the ponies relatively close to their original characterization while also putting them in a different scenario.
ReplyDeleteI'll certainly be waiting for the next update -- confound my fast reading skills!
@Anonymous
If you have a dirty mind, then I do too as I read it as exactly the same thing.
This is damn epic...
ReplyDeleteLove the reference to Lyra's unnatural seating position... Good lulz despite the grimdarkish vibe.
This is one of my favorite stories that I've seen here on EqD, and it hasn't disappointed yet. I love the very premise of the story and parts of your mythos have found their way into the RPG setting that I'm writing for, if that's all right with you.
ReplyDeleteI really hope this continues for a long time, and that inspiration finds you quickly. Carry on good sir.
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ReplyDelete>Dash was too cool to be a mom, instead she was like an awesome older sister.
ReplyDelete-Yeah... yeah, she kinda is. :) (Some good Scootalove around that part)
>On second thought, both of those two were of value as potential breeding stock.
-...falbagasta whaaa ?? The hell ?
Can't wrap my head around that one. Nope.
I doubt, through History, that even humans ever considered other humans as ''breeding stock'' (harem and forced mariage don't count, since their ''goal'' isn't **(forced or not)mass-reproduction**)...
Seriously. Weird line there.
I'm starting to wonder if perhaps this could have made a better pilot than what we did get.
ReplyDeleteNooooooooo thou shalt not put the Twilight into the breeding pens! :(
ReplyDeleteIs this story dead? I remember it being one of the first fanfics I read and it's premature end would be greatly disappointing.
ReplyDeleteFinally get on to reading this and now I find out it's dead...I am morose...
ReplyDelete@Gunstar X
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's why I only read completed fics these days. Fan authors are just too unreliable.
Y U NO UPDATE. Why do all the best authors abandon us? T-T
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