• Story: Forever

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    [Sad] I think this is the first story on here with Photo Finish in a lead roll, how does that work?

    Author: Bobcat
    Description: Pinkie Pie has lunch with Photo Finish.  Why?  Read to find out. 
    Forever
    Beyond Forever (Second Part, New Post!)

    Additional Tags: Ze magic requires sacrifice.
    teisipäev, 26. aprill 2011 op
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    35 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 08:14

      (*Cries*)

      VastaKustuta
    2. Batty Gloom26. aprill 2011, kell 08:15

      I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on the link but...it wasn't that.

      E-excuse me, I got something in my eyes...

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 08:19

      Wunderbar

      VastaKustuta
    4. Alice26. aprill 2011, kell 08:22

      This was so nicely conceptualized and written, although it was certainly heart-wrenching.

      VastaKustuta
    5. DeviousPsychopath26. aprill 2011, kell 08:28

      I wish this was canon! Very well done

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 08:50

      Never expected that. I AM NOT CRYING AT ALL ;__;

      VastaKustuta
    7. Sparton Hoplite26. aprill 2011, kell 08:53

      BOBCAT!! Please wont any pony listen! All Coffee is not bitter!!! Some Coffee is quite sweet!!! Americans! Expresso! Turkish Coffee! EVEN SOME DRIPS ARE REALLY GOOD WITHOUT SUGAR/CREAM!

      I must write or get someone to write a coffee fan fiction!

      Now to comment this direct to bobcat somehow!

      VastaKustuta
    8. Baree26. aprill 2011, kell 08:59

      Very intriguing notion. Yet it seems definitely possible. Very well written too. I approve.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Bobcat26. aprill 2011, kell 10:10

      @Sparton Hoplite

      I've never come across this non-bitter coffee, personally.

      Though, you can just assume that this is Pinkie's taste buds talking here.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:11

      Masterful.

      Short and oh-so bittersweet.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:19

      She said she wouldn't tell anyone. But doesn't that imply that someone could find out?

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:22

      It's funny how you never see Rainbow Dash and Photo Finish in the same scene. She's hiding her wings under a dress and she's wearing a wig and dying her tail white!

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:25

      "And losing a friend's trust is the fastest way to lose a friend forever.."

      VastaKustuta
    14. Batty Gloom26. aprill 2011, kell 10:31

      @Anonymous

      You son of a mare! You just gave me an idea for a (non-shipping)crack fan fic! This will be your fault when it's finished. I hope you're happy!

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:42

      I certainly am if I inspired it Batty Gloom.

      And of course I'm the son of a mare, being a son of a colt is rather hard to do without magic. People would make fun of me for being said son and call me Colt Born.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:42

      This probably could have used a less generic title.

      Because it's a TERRIFIC story, and deserves to be noticed.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:44

      The new title should be "Not, FOREVER".

      VastaKustuta
    18. Chopper's Top Hat26. aprill 2011, kell 10:47

      Holy crap. I had to go back and check, but Purple Pie really DOES look a lot like Photo Finish.

      This was a really clever story. I love the names you gave Pinkie's sisters (Achromatic Pie is a great gag) and they're my favored fanon names from now on. Pinkie's behavior is perfectly spot-on as well. She was bouncy and Pinkie-like without going overboard into full-blown randomness or airheadiness.

      The part at the end, where Pinkie says she wants Purple Pie to come back someday, got me a little choked up. Great work.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 10:50

      At first i was like o_o
      But then i baww'd

      VastaKustuta
    20. Lurks-no-More26. aprill 2011, kell 10:53

      Avvvvv!

      Ze story, et ees wunderbar!

      VastaKustuta
    21. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 11:02

      awwww, i so sad now...

      great story, well written and an interesting take on photo finish.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 11:03

      I disagree about the title "Not Forever" would be a good sequel title. I had a lot of thoughts from this fic. What if Photo Finish just cracked, tired of pretending to be a German fashionista pony? What if a rival found out who she really was and outed her? Why somehow do I image filly Purple Pie and filly Rarity being rivals? At the same time I imagine her and Hotie Totie being friends, arguing about Rarity and Photo Finish breaking character over it?

      VastaKustuta
    23. Ninestempest26. aprill 2011, kell 11:25

      That was a good read. Can't really say I was emotionally pushed at all but I can see it there, attempting to work.

      I think it's a good exploration of why Pinkie Pie suddenly was so concerted with keeping friend secrets, even if it wasn't the best idea for her friends. I don't mean to say Pinkie Pie isn't trusting, but the level of obsession with keeping trust that episode WAS always weird, and this is quite a fun explanation here. And something I could see as reasonable.

      Bravo.

      VastaKustuta
    24. Hikuro1426. aprill 2011, kell 11:29

      Quite a well done story. It pushed some of my sad buttons, but it wasn't too much.

      VastaKustuta
    25. Zarkanorf26. aprill 2011, kell 12:02

      A little on the [Sad], but very well written nonetheless. Grats on keeping Photo Finish's accent in check; that made the story more authentic.

      All and all, great job! 4 stars; you brught my mood down pretty bad, but I wasn't on the verge of tears.

      VastaKustuta
    26. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 13:18

      It is just fanon... It is just fanon...
      I will repeat that to myself to feel better. All Pinkie Pie sisters are fine and they love her a lot... Just like I do.

      VastaKustuta
    27. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 13:27

      Totally not what I was expecting, great story!

      VastaKustuta
    28. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 15:10

      @Anonymous
      Well the story implied that Purple did love Pinkie and her family a lot, she was just convinced that if anyone found out she grew up on a rock farm he career would be over. Which could mean she didn't have confidence in her career being sustained by her talents alone.
      I think the idea that Rarity and Purple where rivals would explain Photo Finish dismissing Rarity's designs and focusing on Fluttershy, if Rarity had been her rival then she wouldn't even bother looking at Rarity's work. Looking at Rarity's work seriously would mean she might have to admit Rarity was the better designer.

      VastaKustuta
    29. Nova2526. aprill 2011, kell 21:59

      It was interestingly made.

      A happy sad-not-forever mix with professionalism and formalities.

      And, somehow, it seems a good idea for ''Photo Finish'' to be related to Pinky Pie... FOREVER!

      VastaKustuta
    30. supervanman641. mai 2011, kell 10:20

      Holy crap, why does this make so much sense even though it's just fanon? 0:

      Great story, it's exceptionally written. :3

      VastaKustuta
    31. Anonüümne5. mai 2011, kell 22:53

      Well written with great depth. I love the characterization, and it fits with canon. Job well done.

      VastaKustuta
    32. BronyMike10. mai 2011, kell 00:04

      Very nice, very nice. Ending got me snifflin'. I was NOT expecting the premise as I was going into this one.

      And I could totally see Purple Pie growing into Photo Finish as well.

      VastaKustuta
    33. Anonüümne23. juuni 2011, kell 19:19

      Ahhh... the bitterness of coffee... wait, what?! I thought this was a Photo Finish MLP fic, what does Godot have to do with this?!

      Mmmph... despite that immersion-breaker, it wasn't a bad fic... though I didn't find it terribly sad. Dunno. I guess my heart's been made iron-clad from reading Grimdark...

      VastaKustuta
    34. Thesyn26. juuli 2011, kell 01:25

      And then I was teary eyed an sad yet happy to find such a good fic..

      VastaKustuta
    35. DarkApostleMatt12. jaanuar 2012, kell 20:58

      I'm glad I finally found time to read this, it was a very good read.

      VastaKustuta

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