Description: Twilight Sparkle was one day given an egg by Princess Celestia. She was told that one day, something great would emerge from it. Tonight was that night.Twilight and Spike: Friends Forever
Twilight and Spike: Friends Forever, Part 2 (New!)
11 comments:
Great! I loved the way you wrote Twilight as a little girl, very believable! Looking forward to more from you Rent5Dogs!
ReplyDeletePrologue eh? I'm curious to see where it will go.
ReplyDeleteCute story! Also, this needs some artwork to accompany it, I imagine Twilight and Spike as little kids would be absolutely adorable :-D
ReplyDelete@Natasha Softpaw That scene from Disney's Hercules where baby Hercules is given Pegasus on his birthday.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see people are enjoying it! I'll put up the next part tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteAwwwr, I liked it!
ReplyDeleteVery simple, extremely cute.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed this short story scraping the surface of Spike and Twilight's relationship. We don't get enough fics with these two.
Guess this is a start eh?
Very nice. Sweet and believeable.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the nice things guys. It means a lot to me.
ReplyDeleteComments and criticism are all welcome.
ReplyDeleteSo how is this going? Did it just die? That'd be a shame, I hate to see a good story die.
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