Author: Midnight Shadow
Description: It's Luna's night, the longest night of the year, the Winter Solstice. Celestia wants to sleep, it's almost her only day (night) off. Luna has other plans.Tonight We're Gonna Party Like it's 999
And Part 2 below!
[Shipping][Random] Warning: Very borderline clopfic. No graphic details (which usually is the deciding factor), but still borderline as hell!
Description: Twilight wakes up after a hard night ofWhatever Happened the Morning After? (New!)
partying...and finds herself stuck between two very important ponies.
literally. The sequel to "Tonight we're gonna party"
Additional Tags: Awkward, Drunk Ponies, Romance
67 kommentaari:
Never-ending partyyyyyyy~~
VastaKustutaAlso, I bet Twilight felt like she was wearing nothing at all!
Nothing at all!
NOTHING AT ALL!!
OOOO yea Winter Moon Celebration!!
VastaKustutaso... the reason Twilight is the teachers pet is because the teacher's hot for her? WHAT A TWEEEST!
Somebody track down whoever does the voice of Spike and bribe her to say "Twilight get up you useless fat lump of a lesbian trollop!"
VastaKustutaMayba Celestia should go to the north pole for some weeks, enjoying a loooong and peacefull night.
VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaSeconded.
poor drunk luna
VastaKustutagotta love it
STUPID SEXY TWILIGHT.
VastaKustutaAwesome fic.
VastaKustutaI love unprofessional Celestia.
I'm confused. This feels alot like a drunk fic. Sure after proof reading and all, but still, fairly drunk when written.
VastaKustutaStill enjoyable, will happily read again.
Anything that makes Celestia miserable gets an automatic 6/5.
VastaKustutaAnd another ten for having Luna.
This is incredibly amusing. Definitely the best shipping story Ive seen from the fandom
VastaKustutauns uns uns uns
VastaKustutaDrunk ponies? Check.
VastaKustutaLuna/Twilight shipping? Check.
Celestia partying hard? Check.
All in all I'd call this fic a success.
This was hilarious.
VastaKustutaI love any fic involving Luna, dance party ponies, or drunk ponies. This had all three, and more. Thanks so much for writing this. Haha.
God dammit Midnight.
VastaKustutaYou're pretty damn good.
i'm not a fan of the fillylovers fic but this story was pretty fun
VastaKustutaThis does indeed sound like a drunk fic, but it damn well fits the idea. Poor Twilight, can't hold your booze, I see...
VastaKustutathis was a laugh
VastaKustutaa very silly laugh with out of charecter actions... It was fun actually having the entire scenario act itself out in my head xD
The intro had me a little "meh" but by the end, I was very pleased with it. The ending itself was quite satisfying. I really enjoy this one.
VastaKustuta>whyboner.jpg
VastaKustuta>Tonight We're Gonna Party Like It's 999
VastaKustuta>We been spendin' most our lives livin' in a pony's paradise...
This is hilarious in so many ways =D
VastaKustuta@Display Name
VastaKustutaI actually had that line reverberate in my skull when i was writing it!
@Midnight:
VastaKustutaHooray parodies!
@Story:
Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I learned that sometimes you have to make a tough choice between two good friends, but even if it seems like there's no right answer...
Sex. Fixes. Everything.
Your dearest student,
Twilight Sparkle.
Hmmm.
VastaKustutaQuality humor. SORT OF sexy, or something.
Celestia sucks.
That was...interesting! I really shouldn't like the second half of this fic, but I do. I guess it was so over the top that it managed to be truly humorous...and the notion of Dash being so "talented" was hilarious.
VastaKustutapartyhard.gif
VastaKustuta~Scratch
Mule?
VastaKustuta@Homfrog
VastaKustutait's a reference to another fic somepony else wrote which gave me a giggle, called "rarity and the mule". It's also up here on EqD, search the archives...
wtf did i just read?
VastaKustutaI'm not really sure if I'm comfortable reading more of your fics, midnight. But dear gog do they make me laugh. Wonderful! xD
VastaKustuta@gingerale
VastaKustutaoh don't say that! Most of my fics are squeaky clean, and the ones like this are pretty clear about it!
I loved part 1, but part 2 less so. The first part was simply hilarious, in situation, characterization, and dialogue. The second part...eh...it felt almost TOO on the line between a randomfic and a clopfic. The part about Dash was great, and the mental image of Celestia and Luna getting into a slap fight makes me giggle, I couldn't stand the "mule" thing, and it wasn't really what I would call "random".
VastaKustutaStill though, a fairly enjoyable read.
Awesome, awesome, awesome. Will read the rest later on, Mid.
VastaKustuta@9Nine9 Yes, she does ;), reaaal good.
VastaKustutaHeh, Hamlet reference.
VastaKustutaWelp, Part 2 just killed me.
VastaKustutaThanks for making it so over the top and hilarious. I loved how every single ponies sexuality was amped up to eleven and just kept on going for the sake of humor and exaggeration.
I absolutely loved the writing style in this, most particularly with the excellent mix of descriptions and the hilarious dialogue volleys that describe a scene with descriptive words.
Scenes Specifically, I loved the opening with Trixie. It was absolutely hilarious how Trixie was, for once, praising Twilight and mentioning in hilariously skimpy detail what Twilight did last night.
It was even funnier when Celestia and Luna were being immaturely catty. The bursts of childish violence, and the hilariously perverted observations at inopportune moments was amazing.
The encounter with Rainbow Dash was an excellent part closer. I especially loved how Wing Boner gets its own paragraph for sound effects, and how Luna clarifies that yes, it was that way.
The part back at the Library was incredibly funny. Though the "FOREVER in Hiding" part is overused in my opinion, it's hilarious to imagine Twilight doing such a thing. Thanks for that visual image, by the way.
The letters were funny. I didn't get the sound effect with Luna's letter at first, but when you gave me that horrifyingly funny mental image, I just had to laugh. Also, I just shivered in giddiness when I typed that last sentence.
The Rarity and the Mule reference was outrageous, offensive, and above all, funny. It's just really, really amusing to me when Twilight gets turned into a sex fiend like that, more-so when Rarity is involved.
Luna borrowing Rainbow Dash's home was unexpected, though it would have been funnier if there was a quick cut to how quickly Luna had acquired it from Rainbow Dash.
The Porn Stash was epic, if a little predictable.
Twilight becoming so arrogant with her unshorn fetlocks was pretty bad. It was just too sudden of a switch with not much past behaviour to back it up. Twilight just seems more like the reluctant showpiece rather than a showboat, I guess.
Luna and Twilight's experimenting was too short lived. It felt like someone was about to catch you writing this and you just skimmed right past it. Though in all honestly, I would have skimmed right past an actual exploration scene, but still, the way you just wrapped it up like that was pretty lacking.
Celestia bursting in like an angry spouse was funny only because she managed to slam cloud doors and wreck a cloud house, and because of the "Cow" insults flying in between the two of them.
The Porn Scene after that was just... painful. It's not like Fluffershy wherein the illogicality serves as a hilarious bit; in this case, it just hurts with how illogical it suddenly is.
The trio watching the show with Rainbow Dash was also just painful. Being distracted that easily may be a plus most days, but this is just bad.
Twilight riding both the day train and the midnight train was somehow not a funny way to end it. I don't know why.
Overall, great story. It may have flunked at the end when it stopped being clever and started being dollar-DVD, but the romp was fun.
BAH! Who needs Celestia. Luna FTW.
VastaKustutaMan that was filthy...and epic.
VastaKustuta@ruff1298
VastaKustutathat was one LONG comment :O
I'm glad you liked it overall, it was goofy fun to write.
I request...no...
VastaKustutaI DEMAND an in depth detailed storyline for this...
...and it should most likely be posted on Equestria After Dark...
*clopclopclop*
@Anonymous
VastaKustutaThere is one actually
with about 1000 extra words worth of...stuff
must...not...clop!
VastaKustutaNow it's off the front page, I'll tell you where to find it.
VastaKustutanote, it's an awfully trashy piece I wrote because it was funny as hell to try and is really, really not supposed to be taken seriously.
anyway, extremely 18+ (21+ if applicable!) and you can find it under the twilight section of EQD after dark (google is your friend, I'm still not going to give a direct link).
the phrase "unshorn fetlocks version" has seldom been so apt.
>MFW Rarity and The Mule reference
VastaKustutaThis is the second time I've seen it referenced in another fanfic and it's made me grin ear to ear both times. This fic was incredibly amusing.
Just want to note: "like a conscientious thief pry-barring open a window to return an unwanted gift" is one of the best similes that has ever been written.
VastaKustutaAnd it sounds directly out of a Discworld novel.
@Anonymous
VastaKustutaJust the sort of feel I was going for! Whee!
Its funny, just cuz i read the REAL version of this. SO MUCH IS CENSORED. Its actually quite graphic, but its better,
VastaKustutaWARNING 18+
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RCXB7gl8dj4XqispStRv5zsiVfo5rZm3UQZSgy3DLOk/edit?hl=en&authkey=CImntlA#
It was completely insane and mostly out of character, but hey, it made me laugh, so from that point of view it was great.
VastaKustutaThe uncensored version is like a train wreck. You just can't look away.
VastaKustutaI...I don't even...words can't...AND THEN THAT PINKIE PIE SONG WHAT IS THAT I DON'T EVEN.
The uncensored version....
VastaKustutasweetjesushavemercy.jpeg......
I had to scrape my brains off the wall.
I say again, this site needs reaction images.
VastaKustutaFriendship may be Magic, but ponysex is hilarious!
VastaKustutaOh, clop me gently~~~
VastaKustutaW. T. F. i just read
VastaKustutaOH GOD WAT
VastaKustutaLol, that was hilarious.
VastaKustutaOHGODWHYDIDIREADTHAT?
VastaKustutaLOL this was awesome!
VastaKustutaThat was superb; I've been avoiding 'shipping' so far but thought I'd try one just to see if I was missing anything (it was that Luna wallpaper that pushed me over the edge). I'd be tempted to replace [random] with [comedy] as well - only the comments reveal the true nature of the piece.
VastaKustutalol, Stupid sexy Twilight, Insta-5 Star ^-^
VastaKustutaEh... I don't get the part where rainbow dash's wings shot up. It was a really nice story and I enjoyed it. Keep it up :)
VastaKustutaOkay, the first part I loved, the second part was just weird. Also, in the final act, where did Rainbow Dash come from. Luna said they would be completely alone. Weird.
VastaKustutaPure win.
VastaKustutaNothing but fun :)
It's a good fic to clear the sinuses of Grimdark.
Wow this is... Good in a shipping sense.
VastaKustutaNot to mention the randomness including rainbow dash :P
......man I'm horny now
VastaKustutaclop clop clop clop clop
I loled so hard... I have to say, that in the it turns too much r34... That's the only part I didn't like!
VastaKustuta