• Story: Through Simple Eyes

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    [Normal] Calling Big Mac Simple!?  The dude is a mathematics genius if the fans have any say in it! Also Written by PhoenixReece
    Description: A day in the life of Applejack's quiet brother. Everyone's got their own opinions, what does Big Mac think that he doesn't say out loud?
    Through Simple Eyes
    laupäev, 12. märts 2011 op
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    9 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne12. märts 2011, kell 23:28

      Entertaining piece. I'm no writer myself, so I can't say much more than that Big Mac is always fun to read and that having all six main characters was nice, if a little contrived. Needed more Derpy though. Because everything's better with Derpy.

      Also, that ending. Darn near fell out of my chair when I read it. E'yup.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne13. märts 2011, kell 00:11

      Thoroughly enjoyed it. Decent characterization.

      And I really should add another star just for that ending...

      VastaKustuta
    3. Tekaramity13. märts 2011, kell 00:55

      Big Mac! Great choice. I'm drawn more toward 'fics that touch on side characters. Gotta admit, I also felt that half of the main cast felt shoehorned in, but the spontaneous (and welcome) appearance of a Pinkie song made my day. I liked it about as much as I expected to - which is to say, 'twas fairly good.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Desert Rose13. märts 2011, kell 07:46

      That was really good. I hope there's an update.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Pacce14. märts 2011, kell 15:15

      That was a wonderful read.
      I look forward to whatever else you produce.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Naxts14. märts 2011, kell 15:45

      This was great! Its a really good story and I thought that the way you characterized him and the other ponies were really great and I thought that it was a really cute story.
      I love it =)

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne16. märts 2011, kell 01:46

      I liked it. Seemed like it could be Big Mac having these thoughts even though it could also have been Forrest Gump.

      Also even though I laughed at the L4D reference Im still not sure if it has any place in the story.

      Only complaint is that I would like to think that Big Macintosh has friends of his own or at least others who he has a relation to (Not counting Keith), yet we dont see him enteract with noone but the main cast.

      VastaKustuta
    8. ultra818. märts 2011, kell 15:41

      Sweet little story. Definately 5 star worthy.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Jonathan26. oktoober 2011, kell 20:25

      in all honesty i think bigmac and fluttershy are mostlikely to get togather, why do you ask? (and im serious here) flutts has a huge bondage fetish (return of harmony episode 2) and big mac is just as quite and polite, not tomenchion strong... so yea

      VastaKustuta

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