• Story: Tech Support

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    [Normal] Ponies and technology!?  Madness!

    Author: Cereal Velocity
    Description: The ponies find several mysterious objects in Twilight's library. Whatever could they be?
    Tech Support

    Additional Tags: iphone, laptop, soda, trollestia, cluelessness
    Monday, March 14, 2011 op
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    25 comments:

    1. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 12:41 PM

      "This isn't that kind of fanfiction" priceless!

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    2. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 12:46 PM

      Noooo! Y u change banner?!

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    3. hawkysuMarch 14, 2011 at 12:48 PM

      Cereal Velocity:

      You are amazing. I love you :D

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    4. GrrxmasterMarch 14, 2011 at 12:52 PM

      Why exactly did Princess Celestia have these things? Souvenirs from a trip with Dr. Whooves?

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    5. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 12:54 PM

      Dat ending.

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    6. 0March 14, 2011 at 1:11 PM

      The swearing threw me off a little, but aside from that I think this is probably the most enjoyable fanfic I've read so far. <3 This in combination with the image is a great pair.

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    7. Midnight ShadowMarch 14, 2011 at 1:23 PM

      I liked this! short and simple with good imagery...and now I want to know more! WHY was Celestia in the library with the strange boxes that glowed and the tin of happy drink?

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    8. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 1:26 PM

      I didn't think it was that great tbh. It was short and sweet, but the idea felt kinda boring.

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    9. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 1:53 PM

      you could have done better with this concept imo

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    10. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 2:29 PM

      'It isn't that kind of fan fiction'

      OH IT IS, IT TOTALLY IS

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    11. Hikuro14March 14, 2011 at 2:52 PM

      I giggled. 10/10

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    12. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 5:29 PM

      It says there are six ponies, but what was Rarity doing during all this?

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    13. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 6:21 PM

      Some ponies are too critical with fanfics. I enjoyed this.

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    14. Cereal VelocityMarch 14, 2011 at 7:56 PM

      @Anonymous

      Oh, Rarity was being ponynapped. She secretly enjoys that sort of thing.

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    15. NinestempestMarch 14, 2011 at 11:08 PM

      Oh god that was the best fourth wall break I've read in a while.

      Was laughing loudly the whole time, five stars.

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    16. PacceMarch 15, 2011 at 3:31 PM

      It gave me a smile and a giggle.

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    17. ZarkanorfMarch 16, 2011 at 7:03 AM

      "What's a 'Cereal Velocity'?"
      A GIGGLING PILE OF FRIENDSHIP. BUT ENOUGH OF THAT, HAVE AT YOU.

      nice fic, would read again!

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    18. MadsMarch 17, 2011 at 2:56 PM

      A fun little piece that feels too short to properly use the potential of its idea. The author also gets a negative mark for self-referencing (mustn't allow it to be overused, hmm?) however this is balanced out by using a godly troll as the story's climactic deus ex fenestra. I do have to complain about using both indentation and blank rows to separate paragraphs, however. Use one or the other, please! Anyway, this gets a solid thumb and I will share this with a fellow pony lover at some point.

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    19. ultra8March 17, 2011 at 4:28 PM

      A little too short but a very fun read.

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    20. rmsaun98722March 17, 2011 at 9:24 PM

      @Cereal Velocity

      I actually completely forgot about Rarity when I drew the pic, so I gave her a debacle all of her own.

      I still can't believe that you wanted to use my picture for the Draw/Writeoff. Compared to yours, my short stories are feeble twigs. Bravo, friend!

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    21. Cereal VelocityMarch 17, 2011 at 9:27 PM

      @rmsaun98722

      Oh, you're the one who drew this? I would have given you credit in the story, but I had no idea.

      I've been wanting to write a story based on this image for a while and I'm glad I got a chance to. It's adorable. Thank you for drawing it, and I'm glad you liked the story!

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    22. WierdplatformerSeptember 6, 2011 at 1:34 PM

      Cute meta story is cute.

      Also, Hi, Cereal! I know you can see this.

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    23. Dogman15February 28, 2012 at 11:16 PM

      So Applejack really tries an iPhone in this story?

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    24. Zyrin KainFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:27 PM

      lol that was pretty good. I give you props. I laughed at the ending, though. Dash breaking the 4th wall AND getting a slightly (ok, it's one hell of a stretch to say) shippy moment? Win.

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    25. Ace156212February 29, 2012 at 5:00 PM

      i had an unopened can of soda next to me and I tried opening it with my teeth after reading this

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