• Story: Tech Support

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    [Normal] Ponies and technology!?  Madness!

    Author: Cereal Velocity
    Description: The ponies find several mysterious objects in Twilight's library. Whatever could they be?
    Tech Support

    Additional Tags: iphone, laptop, soda, trollestia, cluelessness
    esmaspäev, 14. märts 2011 op
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    25 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 12:41

      "This isn't that kind of fanfiction" priceless!

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 12:46

      Noooo! Y u change banner?!

      VastaKustuta
    3. hawkysu14. märts 2011, kell 12:48

      Cereal Velocity:

      You are amazing. I love you :D

      VastaKustuta
    4. Grrxmaster14. märts 2011, kell 12:52

      Why exactly did Princess Celestia have these things? Souvenirs from a trip with Dr. Whooves?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 12:54

      Dat ending.

      VastaKustuta
    6. 014. märts 2011, kell 13:11

      The swearing threw me off a little, but aside from that I think this is probably the most enjoyable fanfic I've read so far. <3 This in combination with the image is a great pair.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Midnight Shadow14. märts 2011, kell 13:23

      I liked this! short and simple with good imagery...and now I want to know more! WHY was Celestia in the library with the strange boxes that glowed and the tin of happy drink?

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 13:26

      I didn't think it was that great tbh. It was short and sweet, but the idea felt kinda boring.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 13:53

      you could have done better with this concept imo

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 14:29

      'It isn't that kind of fan fiction'

      OH IT IS, IT TOTALLY IS

      VastaKustuta
    11. Hikuro1414. märts 2011, kell 14:52

      I giggled. 10/10

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 17:29

      It says there are six ponies, but what was Rarity doing during all this?

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne14. märts 2011, kell 18:21

      Some ponies are too critical with fanfics. I enjoyed this.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Cereal Velocity14. märts 2011, kell 19:56

      @Anonymous

      Oh, Rarity was being ponynapped. She secretly enjoys that sort of thing.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Ninestempest14. märts 2011, kell 23:08

      Oh god that was the best fourth wall break I've read in a while.

      Was laughing loudly the whole time, five stars.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Pacce15. märts 2011, kell 15:31

      It gave me a smile and a giggle.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Zarkanorf16. märts 2011, kell 07:03

      "What's a 'Cereal Velocity'?"
      A GIGGLING PILE OF FRIENDSHIP. BUT ENOUGH OF THAT, HAVE AT YOU.

      nice fic, would read again!

      VastaKustuta
    18. Mads17. märts 2011, kell 14:56

      A fun little piece that feels too short to properly use the potential of its idea. The author also gets a negative mark for self-referencing (mustn't allow it to be overused, hmm?) however this is balanced out by using a godly troll as the story's climactic deus ex fenestra. I do have to complain about using both indentation and blank rows to separate paragraphs, however. Use one or the other, please! Anyway, this gets a solid thumb and I will share this with a fellow pony lover at some point.

      VastaKustuta
    19. ultra817. märts 2011, kell 16:28

      A little too short but a very fun read.

      VastaKustuta
    20. rmsaun9872217. märts 2011, kell 21:24

      @Cereal Velocity

      I actually completely forgot about Rarity when I drew the pic, so I gave her a debacle all of her own.

      I still can't believe that you wanted to use my picture for the Draw/Writeoff. Compared to yours, my short stories are feeble twigs. Bravo, friend!

      VastaKustuta
    21. Cereal Velocity17. märts 2011, kell 21:27

      @rmsaun98722

      Oh, you're the one who drew this? I would have given you credit in the story, but I had no idea.

      I've been wanting to write a story based on this image for a while and I'm glad I got a chance to. It's adorable. Thank you for drawing it, and I'm glad you liked the story!

      VastaKustuta
    22. Wierdplatformer6. september 2011, kell 13:34

      Cute meta story is cute.

      Also, Hi, Cereal! I know you can see this.

      VastaKustuta
    23. Dogman1528. veebruar 2012, kell 23:16

      So Applejack really tries an iPhone in this story?

      VastaKustuta
    24. Zyrin Kain28. veebruar 2012, kell 23:27

      lol that was pretty good. I give you props. I laughed at the ending, though. Dash breaking the 4th wall AND getting a slightly (ok, it's one hell of a stretch to say) shippy moment? Win.

      VastaKustuta
    25. Ace15621229. veebruar 2012, kell 17:00

      i had an unopened can of soda next to me and I tried opening it with my teeth after reading this

      VastaKustuta

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