• Story: The Offer

    [Normal] Alright enough 4chan garbage.  Here is a Fluttershy story to cheer everyone up.
    Description: Fluttershy has a secret -- something very special that she thought nopony else knew about. But she was wrong, and now she will have to make a choice that will affect both her life, and the future of one of her friends.
    The Offer

    9 comments:

    1. short and sweet, lovely

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    2. Single tear, brony. But a single tear that contained every dream that's ever died.
      You just want to tell her that it's always, ALWAYS going to be okay to be her.

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    3. Nice story. I don't see Fluttershy really happy with the wonderbolts. Worst, I see her sad if Rainbow Dash didn't manage to become one and see Fluttershy become one and not appreciate it. She did the right thing.

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    4. Awesome needs prt 2

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    5. Some ponies are fast and some are graceful.

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    6. @Muffin

      No Part 2. There's too much emotionally riding on this single moment, too much of an air of finality and resignation. The full effect and climax has already happened; anything that follows this will by definition be Falling Action.

      Sometimes it's best to just let something be beautiful.

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    7. And beautiful it was. *sniff*

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    8. This has made me sadder than any other fic on this site, barring one.

      It's incredible what you managed to do with so little text.

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