• Story: Love is Abloom

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    [Shipping] Spike and Applebloom?! That's not how you spell Rarity!

    Author: DarkJester
    Description: A romantic tale of a love-struck pony and her attempts to impress the dragon of her dreams.
    Love is Abloom
    teisipäev, 29. märts 2011 op
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    36 kommentaari:

    1. Zarkanorf29. märts 2011, kell 13:31

      Rarity and Applebloom! SETHISTO, APPLEBLOOM IS A MINOR.

      HOW COULD YOU!

      VastaKustuta
    2. pollardy29. märts 2011, kell 13:32

      spike and rarity is the one true ship. or tsundere twilight forcing him to clean everything in a maid outfit.

      also zark technicly a baby dragon could be same age as the pony's he is alot smarter then cutie crusaders.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Zarkanorf29. märts 2011, kell 13:38

      @pollardy
      I was saying that "Rarity X Applebloom" was unacceptable, my fine sir. Sorry fo the confusion.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 13:43

      D'awww that was cute and pretty believable that it could be an actual episode. It wasn't overly romance novel-y, which I appreciate. I never read these slash fics but I enjoyed that.

      Keep up the good work!

      VastaKustuta
    5. pollardy29. märts 2011, kell 13:47

      @Zarkanorf

      indeed, now that just wierd

      VastaKustuta
    6. Naxts29. märts 2011, kell 15:13

      Aww! That was a really cute story.
      It kindda reminded me of something similar that happened to me when i was younger, although it wasen't dramatic as this was. It still brought some good memories.

      Thanks for the story, made me smile =)

      VastaKustuta
    7. Desert Rose29. märts 2011, kell 15:30

      What the hay?! My story isn't posted yet?

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 15:32

      That is the cutest picture I have ever seen on ED.
      Well, maybe tied with that Baby AJ & Bloomberg drawing.
      And the story was nice too :D

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 16:14

      This makes total sense for some reason.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 16:33

      "Spike and Applebloom?! That's not how you spell Rarity and Applejack!"


      Fixed that for you

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 16:58

      Short and sweet and incredibly adorable. I loved this. Great job.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Twinkletail29. märts 2011, kell 17:16

      i friggen' love applebloom/spike fics. they make such an adorable couple, even when they don't end up an actual couple. great job, very much enjoyed this

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 17:49

      I enjoyed it, but this story really could have benefited from proofreading. There were quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. Aside from that, good job.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 18:43

      Loved it, esp the end. EEEeeeeeyup!

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 19:56

      I liked it, but there was just one line that really bugged me.

      "Applebloom sweat-dropped."

      Really? Sweat-dropped? Are we in an anime all of a sudden?

      VastaKustuta
    16. DarkJester29. märts 2011, kell 20:04

      @Anonymous
      All my stories go through a three-step proofreading process. First me, then my friend, then me again. So errors are bound to slip through.

      If you want to help me out, please point them out for me and I will fix them post-haste. Thanks!

      VastaKustuta
    17. DarkJester29. märts 2011, kell 20:11

      @Anonymous
      Embarrassing that slipped through the cracks. >.>; Thanks for catching it!

      VastaKustuta
    18. DarkJester29. märts 2011, kell 21:11

      @Anonymous
      It was actually proofread twice. Once by me and then by a friend.

      If you or anyone else could make a note of the errors you found, I will fix them post-haste. Thanks!

      VastaKustuta
    19. Anonüümne29. märts 2011, kell 21:44

      Eh, what's wrong with sweatdrops? I love 'em. Anime has such cleverly effective ways of conveying emotions! Anyway, adorably adorable and believable story! :3

      VastaKustuta
    20. DarkJester29. märts 2011, kell 22:31

      @Anonymous
      Well I've been taught that anime expressions don't do so well when described with physical words. Besides that, FiM isn't even an anime. :P It's just a old habit of mine I'm still trying to break!

      VastaKustuta
    21. Poooony!30. märts 2011, kell 00:30

      eeeh, Spike is a baby dragon. He isn't that mature...

      VastaKustuta
    22. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 10:40

      Eh by dragon standards a baby could still be 35.

      VastaKustuta
    23. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 12:44

      That story made me d'aaawwww

      lol spike too young for a relationship but still loves rarity as much as apple bloom loved him.

      VastaKustuta
    24. Ewyndall2. aprill 2011, kell 15:14

      In regards of Spike I think it's a bit off how mature and respnsibple he is acting and handling the situation in cortrast to his personality in the show (especially thinking about his feelings and acting for Rarity).

      Apart from that, it's nice, well written, and definitly earned my [D'aaawww] seal :)

      VastaKustuta
    25. Anonüümne28. aprill 2011, kell 12:07

      Lots of beneficial reading here, thanks! I was checking on yahoo when I observed your submit, I’m going to add your feed to Google Reader, I look forward to more from you.

      VastaKustuta
    26. Brett Turner1. mai 2011, kell 22:26

      awww what a great story! i gave you a 5 star because you earned it for that cute little applebloom/spike fic, i love that match :)

      VastaKustuta
    27. Anonüümne3. mai 2011, kell 22:48

      I D'AAAWWWWWWWed all over my screen. I couldn't help but smile at the end with the "a-yup."

      VastaKustuta
    28. America17. mai 2011, kell 18:04

      I still can't get over how pretty applebloom looks XD

      VastaKustuta
    29. Anonüümne19. mai 2011, kell 04:59

      My head exploded from how cute she looks. Luckily i had an extra lying around for things like this. Good story. It was sooooooooooo adorable.

      VastaKustuta
    30. Anonüümne2. juuni 2011, kell 22:33

      That picture...

      D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

      VastaKustuta
    31. Anonüümne17. august 2011, kell 15:47

      rarityxapplebloom? who thought of that so I can give them a lesson on impossible ships? just kidding. applebloom looks beautiful and adorable in the picture. the story is very well written and adorable as well.

      VastaKustuta
    32. BroneyofNoel16. oktoober 2011, kell 08:01

      Ayup , that was an awesome story

      VastaKustuta
    33. IloveTwiSp16. oktoober 2011, kell 13:14

      Cute.

      VastaKustuta
    34. zorua57024. veebruar 2012, kell 03:59

      SOOOOO CUTE!!!!!
      And the sotry was so ADORABLE!!!!

      VastaKustuta
    35. CornParade15. aprill 2012, kell 19:05

      @Anonymous

      Spike hatched when Twilight was quite young. So he's only a few years old.

      VastaKustuta
    36. Unknown1. veebruar 2013, kell 00:48

      amazing story had me smiling all the way, very well done

      VastaKustuta

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