A Life of Confinement
Description: Angel Bunny is living a life of utter perfection. But when he learns of an unexpected truth, he plans to take drastic action against his newly found enemies.
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[Normal] I have a whipping 3 images of Angel I think, all used multiple times, but this is primarily his story if the description is any indiciation.
laupäev, 19. märts 2011 op 14:36
Sildid: Fanfiction, Fluttershy, Normal, Other, Star-4, Story, Twilight Sparkle
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VastaKustutaInteresting to say the least.
VastaKustutaThe Twilight/Fluttershy was a little out of the blue, but it did serve as some nice conflict for Angel. You also maybe repeated his feelings for Fluttershy a little TOO much. (Almost) Started to feel like I was reading the same thing over and over again, but then you stopped and went on with the story.
I also liked that you kept Angel confined to his thoughts. Good stuff.
Curiously waiting for the next part. Keep up the good work.
Angel turns gets Trixie to turn him into a pony
VastaKustutaCalling it now
I'm not entirely sure I understand Angel Bunny's motivation in this. he thinks that he's going to get Fluttershy to like him more by acting like an asshole to her? Was he abused as a baby rabbit?
VastaKustutaCurious to see where this is going, though.
Is this ever going to get updated again?
VastaKustutaplease update soon!
VastaKustutaUpdate quickly!
VastaKustutaWell this is intresting....
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