• Story: I Need a Freaking Drink

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    Description: An incident in Ponyville ends up getting Twilight and her friends arrested, but one pony is in far more trouble than the others.
    I Need a Freaking Drink

    10 kommentaari:

    1. I always lose interest a little when ponies start swearing...

      VastaKustuta
    2. @Pacce

      forgive my orwellian editorness but I did decide to change that on second thought... Didn't really pay that part much mind until someone mentioned it.

      VastaKustuta
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      VastaKustuta
    4. Fun but too short. Could've been a fun "Rashomon" style story where each pony recounts the event in their own POV. Pinkie Pie's story would have been hilarious.


      Hmmm, I wonder if I can write it...

      VastaKustuta
    5. @Anonymous
      Yeah I wanted to do it rashomon style but I only had 24 hours to write this thing. and I am neither fast nor clever enough to write a story like that in such a short time.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Nice story! Ditzy the lawyer made me laugh quite a bit

      VastaKustuta
    7. This was awesome! Too bad Ditzy is no Phoenix Wright.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Fun indeed but this leaves me craving more. Toothpaste, after all. One thumb, might re-read.

      VastaKustuta