• Story: Garden Party (Updated Chapter 4+5!)

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    [Normal] For some reason, I like normal Luna more than shipping now days.  I think something is wrong with me.

    Author: Ninja Tales
    Description:  When Luna finds a stranger in the castle garden, she is unsure of how to act around another pony. But as the relationship between the two ponies grows, Luna hints about secrets in her past. There are some nightmare's that you can't wake up from.
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    laupäev, 18. juuni 2011 op
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    29 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 14:38

      I guess someone was being a vandal against the document..

      Or the blog brony's computer has been taken by a trolling relative.

      VastaKustuta
    2. SonicBrawler199219. märts 2011, kell 14:40

      WHYY!?

      D8>

      VastaKustuta
    3. Iggy19. märts 2011, kell 14:41

      WHO DUNNIT?!

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 14:42

      Looks like the author accidentally let the story be editable by everyone.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Victorian R. Hellsly19. märts 2011, kell 14:42

      This looks like a job for inspector Pinkie Pie!

      VastaKustuta
    6. Roy G. Biv19. märts 2011, kell 14:44

      Poor story...

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 14:50

      D:

      VastaKustuta
    8. Nova2519. märts 2011, kell 14:50

      @Roy G. Biv

      Hopefully, the autor will repair the story and disable the Edit-thing.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 14:54

      It was fun trough turning the stuff into a small chat when we waited for the paste,

      The document is still open trough, Better lock it before another "Creative Revision"

      VastaKustuta
    10. Night Flight19. märts 2011, kell 15:10

      Good job! I cant wait for the next part. Luna fics are the best. Next time don't forget the permissions (although i did use it to fix a spelling error)

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 15:29

      I'd like to read it, but when I got to a random insertion of the word "dicks" I realized it was still editable. Then I saw two Anonymouses editing it further down... So I give up for now. I don't want to find that two paragraphs are missing or the whole ending is gone or something. D:

      VastaKustuta
    12. Mikel E. Crawford19. märts 2011, kell 15:56

      Fixed the damn editing problem. Now we wait for the author to repost it.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 18:12

      It's dead jim.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 18:16

      Author: DOUBLE FACEHOOF NUTS AND SHOES APPLESAUCE
      This is what I get for submitting things at 4am.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne20. märts 2011, kell 00:05

      NEW LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-ml_haBR3AoS0DowuF1ZUP4rS2UKYj_35dM7mte0Gbw/edit?authkey=CKTcqtsM#

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne21. märts 2011, kell 18:21

      "Part 1"? So it will be continued?

      VastaKustuta
    17. Immaneuel Kanter31. märts 2011, kell 16:06

      Well, I'm glad all that was sorted out, but did something happen to part 2? The end seemed so abrupt.

      VastaKustuta
    18. Sam31. märts 2011, kell 16:51

      @Immaneuel Kanter

      I believe it was a cliffhanger.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Escher31. märts 2011, kell 22:09

      Oof. Part 1 was promising. Part 2, not so much.

      I expect a certain amount of angst in any Luna story, but that last line... not a good sign, there.

      VastaKustuta
    20. Anonüümne6. aprill 2011, kell 17:28

      Am I the only one who d'awwed at Socially Awkward Luna?

      VastaKustuta
    21. DuskWolf6. aprill 2011, kell 20:21

      That was an absolutely adorable and talented bit of writing. Normally I don't go in for fanfics, but this one I really did enjoy. A rare thing. A rare thing indeed.

      Well done, NP!

      @Display Name

      Noap!

      VastaKustuta
    22. Anonüümne6. aprill 2011, kell 21:30

      Hmmmm...not bad, but it fell a little flat, we aren't given a whole lot of insight as to what the characters were feeling.
      Perhaps some more FEHLING DAHLING!
      .................I GO!

      VastaKustuta
    23. DuskWolf7. aprill 2011, kell 03:50

      @Anonymous

      We are given subtle hints, but remember, we're dealing with a pair of characters here who're entirely introverted. Possibly both of them are INFP personality types.

      I worry that just cheesing emotion in there too early on and rushing it would actually ruin the story. Luna deserves time to blossom, rather than it just being forced. She does seem the kind of pony who's good at hiding her feelings. But given time, that can change. I just wouldn't want it to change overnight.

      VastaKustuta
    24. Anonüümne18. juuni 2011, kell 16:10

      This is good, I anon humbly approve of this story!

      VastaKustuta
    25. La Barata18. juuni 2011, kell 18:38

      MOAR. Also, Seth, fix this plz. It should be ranked 6, not 4. Review box must be broken.

      VastaKustuta
    26. Nova2520. juuni 2011, kell 18:26

      The story seems to be taking a... strange turn...

      VastaKustuta
    27. La Barata1. september 2011, kell 23:40

      Yeah, dude? I've got brain damage and have managed to get more chapters out in the last month than you have in total. There's something wrong here.

      VastaKustuta
    28. a0142117. oktoober 2011, kell 00:13

      good so far, just taking aaaages to update...

      VastaKustuta
    29. Klice31. detsember 2011, kell 07:14

      Yeah.. Too much ages to update ! Come on Tales, bring those updates on !

      VastaKustuta

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