• Story: Fowl Play

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    [Random] A story that makes fun of all this god damn shipping!
    Description: Follow Fluttershy in her descent in to perversion. A satire.
    Fowl Play
    neljapäev, 17. märts 2011 op
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    36 kommentaari:

    1. FightingFire17. märts 2011, kell 00:43

      I need to read this aloud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      VastaKustuta
    2. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 00:44

      ^ Yes.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 00:45

      Oh god I skimmed through it and read the last line.
      why.mp4.iso.rar.png

      VastaKustuta
    4. FightingFire17. märts 2011, kell 00:46

      BUT I CAN'T READ THAT!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 00:48

      My favourite word was spelunking. Speluuunking.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 00:48

      I am literally laughing out loud at 2:48 a.m.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 00:53

      so I take it I should give my shipping fic a little shelf time before releasing it?

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 00:56

      Anonymous, in my submission I stated that I did not mean this as a personal attack on anyone or their tastes. But just look at the friend off, there were like 4 non shipping fics lol

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 00:58

      So Gilda broke into her house and drank her wine? That's the only thing that concerned me all fic, she needs an intervention.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 00:59

      AND THEN THEY ALL FUCKED.

      Greatest ending ever.

      ~Scratch

      VastaKustuta
    11. FightingFire17. märts 2011, kell 01:00

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Phoe17. märts 2011, kell 01:02

      It's all in good fun. Easy to appreciate since it's a legitimate piece of satire and not a quickie "shippers should be set on fire" joke. Especially when a pun on sinking them would be far more delicious. *ahem*

      No, what surprised me was Sethisto's "all the god damn shipping" line. I can't figure you out, Blogpony.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 01:03

      @FightingFire yeah...

      VastaKustuta
    14. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 01:05

      Don't let us down voicebrony!

      VastaKustuta
    15. FightingFire17. märts 2011, kell 01:21

      @Cray0n
      i have recorded it twice already, each time vocaroo shooting down my attempts at greatness with a quick "error connecting to server" message. I feel, betrayed. Like an old friend had suddenly gone and stabbed me in the back. It was horrible.

      i will try and record it again tomorrow, but for now, it is 3:19 in the morning, and I need to sleep.


      SIDE NOTE:
      inb4 1 million hits.

      Since I won't be awake for that, give Sethisto and all the blogger ponies my congratulations when that counter finally hits 7 digits.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 01:27

      So, I've been sitting in the google doc and I've noticed a lot of people open it and then instantly close it... why? :S Is it too long? Too late at night? yeah, thats why!

      VastaKustuta
    17. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 01:28

      @FightingFire :'(
      I don't we'll hit 1mil until early morning maybe. I have to go to work at nine, so hopefully I'll see it. When you record tomorrow, record in audacity or something as you record so you won't lose it. Sleep tight.

      VastaKustuta
    18. Cray0n17. märts 2011, kell 01:36

      @Anonymous
      >last line

      VastaKustuta
    19. Hikuro1417. märts 2011, kell 01:39

      w-.....what?

      "what is this I dont even"

      VastaKustuta
    20. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 01:51

      This... is one of the greatest works of satire in this fandom.

      Skipping to the end would ruin the punchline, missing tons of plot relevant, slightly creepy sexually obsessive Fluttershy.

      VastaKustuta
    21. Pecan17. märts 2011, kell 02:15

      You mean it doesn't anyway?

      Nah, I kid. But, seriously. I was reading through this story, trying my hardest to hold a giggle in (since it was one in the morning.) Then boom, last line. Forget the giggle, I laughed hard.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Auta Mane17. märts 2011, kell 04:11

      @Anonymous I save them for off-line reading in places that don't have internets.
      Because, sadly, there are still places like that.

      VastaKustuta
    23. 017. märts 2011, kell 04:56

      @Anonymous
      I used to worry I was bugging people with that. When I open it and immediately close it, it's usually because I'm doing a length check, or because I'm about to print it. (I print most of the fanfics I know I want to read at some point, but don't think I'll ever get to online since there's a huge amount of things I take care of online.)

      But the fact that people have described a character as obsessive already has me interested. And the Random tag pretty much guarantees I'm going to make an effort to check it out.

      Printiiiiing. I think I'll love this one too.

      VastaKustuta
    24. Pacce17. märts 2011, kell 05:30

      I now ship that one beetle with that other beetle.
      They're so in love, why can't THEY see it?

      VastaKustuta
    25. Zarkanorf17. märts 2011, kell 09:27

      I couldn't keep it straight after chicken fducking

      VastaKustuta
    26. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 10:02

      i lol'd so hard at the end, great job peter. your writing is superb. make sure to keep bringing your stories by the /b/ threads, eh?
      -cupcake-

      VastaKustuta
    27. SirLeandrea17. märts 2011, kell 13:20

      Satire is so much more fun to write then blatantly saying something.

      VastaKustuta
    28. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 14:13

      Flutters lusting after Snails? I mad!

      VastaKustuta
    29. 017. märts 2011, kell 15:45

      Whatever the satire part was, it went over my head.
      Regardless, I found this story quite enjoyable and rather human in feel. I found myself relating to it a great deal more than I have most of the other fanfics I've read so far (Fluttershy's clean-to-most-but-not-for-her photos for example. The description of how she felt when taking them is very close to experience I've had).


      Though, I don't usually read fanfics to reflect on myself. I read them to smile/laugh. I got a good bit of that from this one too. I don't LOVE the fic, but I certainly wouldn't mind rereading it now and then. Quite nice.

      VastaKustuta
    30. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 16:28

      And with this fic, Pedoshy is born.

      VastaKustuta
    31. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 19:24

      That was the best way I think someone could've mocked shippers. I loved it. Good job author :D

      VastaKustuta
    32. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 20:32

      What is this I don't even...

      VastaKustuta
    33. Anonüümne17. märts 2011, kell 20:37

      I've got to say... wouldn't this image work better than the Gilda one:

      http://tommysimms.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d357pi2

      VastaKustuta
    34. Anonüümne28. juuni 2011, kell 01:20

      ummmm...what

      VastaKustuta
    35. Anonüümne27. juuli 2011, kell 11:29

      As a -I guess- shipper (but not a serious one - could you imagine people actually believing ponyships?), this is possibily the most hilarious thing I've read all day (pervert Fluttershy is always funny), and the satire was spot on.

      That ending made me shoot Coke out my nose... thanks for that.

      VastaKustuta
    36. Roxor28. august 2011, kell 23:54

      Ouch. That was painful. I'm only giving it two stars because it wasn't riddled with spelling errors.

      VastaKustuta

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