• Story: Fluttermac

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    [Shipping]  Some Fluttershy and Big Mac Shipping, by Roy G. Biv
    Description: Fluttershy and Big Macintosh fall in love. Roy's first serious story!
    Fluttermac
    neljapäev, 10. märts 2011 op
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    21 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 02:29

      Holy fuck i nearly baw'd at the end.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 02:40

      Great work, loved the small details like "nurse macintosh." The ending was a bit odd though, you kind of implied they knew the exact timing of their deaths, which would suggest they killed themselves which...well doesn't fit with tone of the rest of the story. I'll just assume I misunderstood that bit, great work regardless.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 03:53

      @Anonymous
      I think it leans towards them hanging on to life almost from sheer willpower and mutually deciding to "let go" while watching one last sunset together.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Twinkletail11. märts 2011, kell 07:34

      oh god, i nearly cried at the end. this was so fantastically done, it had me hooked throughout the entire thing. excellent, excellent job :-D

      VastaKustuta
    5. Myke Greywolf11. märts 2011, kell 10:09

      Shit. Now you've gone and made me cry.

      Excellent work. An easy-going and serene atmosphere, perfect to go with the characters of this unlikely, but logical pairing.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Stahi11. märts 2011, kell 11:19

      HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGH

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 11:47

      I'm not usually one for straight fics,but this was great. :)

      VastaKustuta
    8. bubsAKAvermin17. märts 2011, kell 12:27

      Riveting story, 5/5
      OP gets 400 internets, congratulations good sir.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Truthseeker12. aprill 2011, kell 15:34

      Truly a work of art. Well done, well done indeed.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne17. aprill 2011, kell 23:25

      5/5

      Regarding them passing at the same time. Well, I dont how many of you own horses but lets just say that they dont age well. At some point every horse should wish to be put down rather than go down naturally... because that natural part *usually* is very unpleasant (Look up colic, lamenitis which get most of them). So one imagines perhaps in a culture of horses that they all keep 'the black pill' in the back saddle bag, and it is just seen as a part of life. After all, these ponies have medical expertise and know whats up.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Unknown20. aprill 2011, kell 09:34

      This one pressed all the right buttons and made me shed many manly tears. Great story!

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne20. aprill 2011, kell 11:25

      Reading a shipping where two ponies actually get to know and love each other was a nice change from the usual "I love you! - Likewise! *BOOM* MAKEOUT!". I'd love to read more of those as well as more serious stuff from this author.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Marrock10. mai 2011, kell 09:28

      Confound these ponies...

      ...making me cry all the time.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Magnus Darkly13. juuli 2011, kell 08:19

      Out of all the creepy, sexuality-destroying and logic-defying shippings that this site has to offer, I've only ever liked the idea of Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.

      VastaKustuta
    15. 20percentcooler21. juuli 2011, kell 01:19

      Randomly found this, It just made my day, that was amazing.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne3. august 2011, kell 22:58

      This was a rather terrible story. Zero conflict makes it utterly dull.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Anonüümne9. august 2011, kell 15:47

      That was a rather lovely story. Zero conflict fits the characters, and it has fluttershy in it.

      VastaKustuta
    18. mylittletzimisce20. september 2011, kell 16:34

      Several grammatical and spelling error. I really would have liked the dating period fleshed out more. The story is super sweet without being saccharin, but there's no conflict in the story. Sort of no valleys to make the peaks higher. But that end.....

      HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGH

      4/5

      VastaKustuta
    19. BroneyofNoel17. oktoober 2011, kell 19:07

      i cried, I am a man, but i cried at the end

      VastaKustuta
    20. Anonüümne17. jaanuar 2012, kell 15:27

      The ending wasnt fair D:
      I was so happy when they go married and then, far too soon after, they died :'(
      At the sunset where they died i was almost crying.

      Wow, i wanna marry big mac <3

      VastaKustuta
    21. Patches19. jaanuar 2012, kell 14:00

      I was going to read this but then I saw all of the crying comments. I've already read My Little Dashie this morning, I don't think I can handle any more sadness like that.

      VastaKustuta

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