• Story: Drink Special

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    [Shipping] Some Rarity/Applejack stuff! Hooray shipping has been revived tonight apparently.
    Description: After a very long and trying day, Rarity tries to find comfort at the bottom of a martini glass.  What she finds, well ...
    Drink Special
    Friday, March 11, 2011 op
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    13 comments:

    1. FightingFireMarch 11, 2011 at 2:02 AM

      This was good. Solid writing, great choice of setting, but there was a little something missing. I felt that if the author wanted to go for a lost love attitude, they should have accentuated the sad aspect of it, otherwise it should have had a bit more closure. Either way, still very well written, and fun to read.

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    2. locojomMarch 11, 2011 at 2:33 AM

      I know my english is not the best.. but this one was the hardest to read for me =S I couldnt understand very good the first part.
      Still I liked the end, I really want to see more like this ^^

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    3. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 6:58 AM

      It's a bit rambly. But considering it's depressed Rarity, I suppose that's to be expected, she is a bit rambly too.

      Clearly shipping, but maybe a bit sad too. Or is that just subjective? There's more that the story can do, but it's mostly longing at this point, so that's probably, technically not that sad.

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    4. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 9:56 AM

      Aw man, ending line just plain broke my heart.
      I always like the rareapple ships. It´s so improbable and yet so right.

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    5. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 9:57 AM

      Ok that picture is freakin me out. Don't get me wrong I'm all for smooching ponies, I just find something sorta loli-ish about the top pic thats making me cringe.

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    6. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 9:59 AM

      We haven't had rarity/applejack since Swayback Mountain, and this one is sad.

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    7. Hikuro14March 11, 2011 at 11:05 AM

      Quite a well written story. Kinda sad that nothing really happens. I guess it was meant for a lost love story.

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    8. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 12:41 PM

      A great little scene into Rarity's life. I think it's perfect like this, no need for a sequel (as the writer said too) Beautiful melancholy

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    9. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 1:09 PM

      that pic.....

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    10. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 9:25 PM

      Classy. Sophisticated. Well-suited for Rarity. I enjoyed this.

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    11. PacceMarch 29, 2011 at 10:54 AM

      You have a great gift with words.
      This entire story is:
      Rarity goes to a bar and orders a drink of Applejack to help her forget her longing for Applejack.
      But you make it into a colourful and emotional experience that we drink in.

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    12. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 6:13 AM

      @Anonymous

      We had What Rarity Needs. That was Rareapple. Eventually.

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    13. AnonymousJuly 22, 2011 at 5:51 AM

      Short, but sweet. And the little kicker at the end was a bit silly, but it was still pretty fun. Well done!

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