• Story: Drink Special

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    [Shipping] Some Rarity/Applejack stuff! Hooray shipping has been revived tonight apparently.
    Description: After a very long and trying day, Rarity tries to find comfort at the bottom of a martini glass.  What she finds, well ...
    Drink Special
    reede, 11. märts 2011 op
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    13 kommentaari:

    1. FightingFire11. märts 2011, kell 02:02

      This was good. Solid writing, great choice of setting, but there was a little something missing. I felt that if the author wanted to go for a lost love attitude, they should have accentuated the sad aspect of it, otherwise it should have had a bit more closure. Either way, still very well written, and fun to read.

      VastaKustuta
    2. locojom11. märts 2011, kell 02:33

      I know my english is not the best.. but this one was the hardest to read for me =S I couldnt understand very good the first part.
      Still I liked the end, I really want to see more like this ^^

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 06:58

      It's a bit rambly. But considering it's depressed Rarity, I suppose that's to be expected, she is a bit rambly too.

      Clearly shipping, but maybe a bit sad too. Or is that just subjective? There's more that the story can do, but it's mostly longing at this point, so that's probably, technically not that sad.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 09:56

      Aw man, ending line just plain broke my heart.
      I always like the rareapple ships. It´s so improbable and yet so right.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 09:57

      Ok that picture is freakin me out. Don't get me wrong I'm all for smooching ponies, I just find something sorta loli-ish about the top pic thats making me cringe.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 09:59

      We haven't had rarity/applejack since Swayback Mountain, and this one is sad.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Hikuro1411. märts 2011, kell 11:05

      Quite a well written story. Kinda sad that nothing really happens. I guess it was meant for a lost love story.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 12:41

      A great little scene into Rarity's life. I think it's perfect like this, no need for a sequel (as the writer said too) Beautiful melancholy

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 13:09

      that pic.....

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne11. märts 2011, kell 21:25

      Classy. Sophisticated. Well-suited for Rarity. I enjoyed this.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Pacce29. märts 2011, kell 10:54

      You have a great gift with words.
      This entire story is:
      Rarity goes to a bar and orders a drink of Applejack to help her forget her longing for Applejack.
      But you make it into a colourful and emotional experience that we drink in.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne11. aprill 2011, kell 06:13

      @Anonymous

      We had What Rarity Needs. That was Rareapple. Eventually.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne22. juuli 2011, kell 05:51

      Short, but sweet. And the little kicker at the end was a bit silly, but it was still pretty fun. Well done!

      VastaKustuta

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