• Story: Applejack is a Silly Pony

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    [Shipping] Can't go a day without AJ/Dash shipping!
    Description: Because there can never be too much generic Appledash!
    Applejack is a Silly Pony
    esmaspäev, 28. märts 2011 op
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    19 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 07:58

      Wow, that was just increibly generic. Nothing really wrong with it, just...generic.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 08:06

      Yeah, generic is a good word for it. It doesn't have much that really sets it apart from other ship fics.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Emil Björnfot28. märts 2011, kell 09:05

      Well, I just wanted to try to write some normal shipping. Just to see how it went. Lost inspiration about halfway through, so I figured I'd just throw together something really generic.

      TL;DR it was practice, will make next one better :3

      VastaKustuta
    4. Zarkanorf28. märts 2011, kell 09:48

      Not a fan of generic; honestly was expecting something like "Not Another Appledash Story".

      VastaKustuta
    5. Spark28. märts 2011, kell 09:59

      That pic always make me lol and baww at the same time...

      Also, the story wasn't bad. But generic fits it really good.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 11:23

      That pic makes no sense. Without a penis, it wouldn't matter how fast Dash got off...

      VastaKustuta
    7. Star Whistle28. märts 2011, kell 12:31

      @Anonymous
      A male or female who orgasms early (and has an inconvenient refractory period) can continue to stimulate their partner via hands/mouth. It's only a problem if that individual is unwilling to continue sexual participation after they orgasm... which is possible for anypony.

      You should probably relay this information to Princess Celestia now.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 12:45

      3 stars...
      I've got nothing else to say...

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 13:12

      This comment thread got really awkward, really fast.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Peaches n' Cream28. märts 2011, kell 13:29

      @MyLittleBrony
      I totally understand that, happens all the time to me. At least you finished it. I enjoyed it even if it was generic. Some of the imagery was very good!

      VastaKustuta
    11. Naxts28. märts 2011, kell 13:54

      Generic? Yes.
      Cute? Definitely.

      It might be a bit plain and over done, but that doesn't mean that it aint good.
      I actually liked it =)

      VastaKustuta
    12. nukeiffum28. märts 2011, kell 14:02

      It was... nice.

      VastaKustuta
    13. 5t3v028. märts 2011, kell 14:44

      Didn't we go several days without any shipping AT ALL?

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 15:12

      @5t3v0
      Maybe in the horrible, dark past.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne28. märts 2011, kell 19:16

      cute, simple, and loving. good job! :)

      VastaKustuta
    16. ultra828. märts 2011, kell 20:48

      I thought it was pretty good. A little plain in some areas but with an Awwww ending.

      VastaKustuta
    17. BenX28. märts 2011, kell 21:19

      I liked it.

      It's exactly what I wanted out of an Apple Dash story, and had me d'awwing.

      VastaKustuta
    18. Escher28. märts 2011, kell 23:08

      The only thing that bugged me a little was Dash's long paragraph right near the end. It's a little awkward and not really in character for Dash. I can't read that bit (starts with "Actually, it doesn’t necessarily have to be...") and hear Dash saying it.

      If you're looking for suggestions for next time, I'll throw out one of my pet peeves. It's almost universal in shipfic to eventually wind up with a big "I've always loved you!" from whichever character has been the more reluctant (Dash in this case). I've always thought it would be more realistic and satisfying for the second character to basically accept the first one's declaration of love and let the story wind up with "I like you a lot, and we can give this thing a try."

      VastaKustuta
    19. patroison9. juuli 2011, kell 22:05

      Generic but still cute.

      VastaKustuta

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