• Story: Aftermath (Trixie)

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    [Normal] This has nothing to do with the other story with "Aftermath" as a title, just a heads up.
    Description: Trixie pulls it together after the encounter with the Ursa and faces some demons from her past.
    Aftermath
    Thursday, March 10, 2011 op
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    4 comments:

    1. CottonmouthMarch 10, 2011 at 2:03 AM

      First of all you stole the name of my short crack-ship fic. What the fuck.

      Just kidding.

      Second of all, THIS is how I want to see Trixie portrayed.

      "I want to show the marks their dreams, make them beg me to take their money and pine for the day I'll be back."

      "I want them to whisper that Celestia herself couldn't be more amazing than The Great and Powerful Trixie!"

      These two lines really impacted me, and look at Trixie as a badass instead of some poor little girl who just wants friends.

      Although I normally don't like first person, I believe it makes this fic better in the end. You did it quite well.

      Once again thank you for displaying Trixie as awesome, and I look forward to more by you.

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    2. PodoTepworthMarch 10, 2011 at 9:36 AM

      @Cottonmouth

      Sorry about the name collision! I'd read and enjoyed your story, too. This had been sitting out on DA since December without a usable title, and I finally just slapped one on yesterday to submit it here, without thinking about it. I won't do it again. (In fact, I can re-title it if you want...)

      I wanted to try the 1st person voice because Trixie struck me as pretty hard boiled. Everything she owns gets wrecked, she nearly gets killed, and she still pulls it together enough to flip her tormentors the bird and scoot? She's tough.

      I'm glad it worked for you, and thanks very much for your comment!

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    3. ZarkanorfMarch 10, 2011 at 10:59 AM

      The best Trixie written here. I really enjoyed this story! Good job, Podo~

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    4. PodoTepworthMarch 10, 2011 at 3:56 PM

      @Zarkanorf

      I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

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