• Story: After Mare-Day Gras

    [Shipping][Random] Hangover time! Some grammar errors but it's entertaining.
    Description: Twilight Sparkle tries alcohol for the first time. Hilarity ensues (I hope).
    After Mare-Day Gras

    31 comments:

    1. Magic and booze do not seem to mix.

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    2. This was possibly one of the best storie's i've read. It made me laugh so hard, its amazing.

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    3. An entire story about drunken lesbian pony antics, and not a single mention of Rainbow Dash. Writefriend, I am disappoint.

      Nah, just kidding. Really funny story, I enjoyed it alot! You seemed to shift back and forth between present and past tense alot near the beginning, but it didn't make the story unreadable or anything.

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    4. WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

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    5. *facehooves and proceeds to die laughing*

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    6. HILARIOUS! Absolutely hilarious! I'm sure my neighbors are thinking I'm crazy, laughing out loud at 1am.

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    7. If I keep this up, I may get a writer tag someday... Must write better! And not get sucked into IRC so much! And get more proofreaders!

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    8. I must admit... I was not expecting Princess Luna to factor into this anywhere!

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    9. Confound this ponies, they drive me to drink, I mean make babies with Princess Luna!

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    10. Now write one for each of the other five!

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    11. @Anonymous

      You mean get drunk, then make babies with princess luna.

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    12. Dear Celestia, this is one of the best stories ever.

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    13. TwilightxLuna shipping? Did not see that coming...still lol'd though.

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    14. Why 5 stars? It's funny but...

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    15. That was hilarious, will there be a sequel?

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    17. @Roy G. Biv I might help proof-reading... As long as someone tells me what exactly I have to do. I guess it means reading and correcting any errors?

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    18. I just finished reading this twice and I'm still laughing!

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    19. Great story, but it would be awesome if this was some kind of mini-series. The Hangover, equestrian edition, with each story another pony wakes up post mare-day gras.

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    20. ... and that's the story of why we now have two mares in the moon!

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    21. I think my face broke from lulzing....

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    22. @Anonymous
      Pinkie would TOTALLY be Alex! This story must happen!

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    23. OMC Pls tell me you plan to do more to this . . . i died laughing at the end. This was just SOOO random. SOrta how i could picture Twilight if she was . . . *clears thraot* well inebriated . . . . . AND LUNA . . . wow!! Somepony's got some BIG plans . . . . .

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    24. Must... Resist... Urge... To LAWL... At someone... Else's house...
      Pfftbhftbh... HA!

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    25. OMG best drunk twilight shipping ever must have squel can't stop laughing hahahahaha

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    26. Wow, that was crazy. As I said on DA, good read.

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    27. Sucks that little silly shorts like this would never get accepted now a days (to say nothing of spamfics)

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