Description: Twilight Sparkle tries alcohol for the first time. Hilarity ensues (I hope).After Mare-Day Gras
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[Shipping][Random] Hangover time! Some grammar errors but it's entertaining.
Monday, March 7, 2011 op 10:15 PM
Labels: Author: RoyGBiv, Fanfiction, Luna, Random, Shipping, Star-4, Story, Twilight Sparkle
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31 comments:
Magic and booze do not seem to mix.
ReplyDeleteThis was possibly one of the best storie's i've read. It made me laugh so hard, its amazing.
ReplyDeleteGiggled like a motherfucker.
ReplyDeleteAn entire story about drunken lesbian pony antics, and not a single mention of Rainbow Dash. Writefriend, I am disappoint.
ReplyDeleteNah, just kidding. Really funny story, I enjoyed it alot! You seemed to shift back and forth between present and past tense alot near the beginning, but it didn't make the story unreadable or anything.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!
ReplyDelete*facehooves and proceeds to die laughing*
ReplyDeleteHILARIOUS! Absolutely hilarious! I'm sure my neighbors are thinking I'm crazy, laughing out loud at 1am.
ReplyDeleteIf I keep this up, I may get a writer tag someday... Must write better! And not get sucked into IRC so much! And get more proofreaders!
ReplyDeleteI must admit... I was not expecting Princess Luna to factor into this anywhere!
ReplyDeleteConfound this ponies, they drive me to drink, I mean make babies with Princess Luna!
ReplyDeleteNow write one for each of the other five!
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteYou mean get drunk, then make babies with princess luna.
Dear Celestia, this is one of the best stories ever.
ReplyDeleteTwilightxLuna shipping? Did not see that coming...still lol'd though.
ReplyDeleteWhy 5 stars? It's funny but...
ReplyDeleteThat was hilarious, will there be a sequel?
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ReplyDelete@Roy G. Biv I might help proof-reading... As long as someone tells me what exactly I have to do. I guess it means reading and correcting any errors?
ReplyDeleteI just finished reading this twice and I'm still laughing!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant. 5 stars
ReplyDeleteGreat story, but it would be awesome if this was some kind of mini-series. The Hangover, equestrian edition, with each story another pony wakes up post mare-day gras.
ReplyDeleteHehehehe, gross
ReplyDelete... and that's the story of why we now have two mares in the moon!
ReplyDeleteI think my face broke from lulzing....
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeletePinkie would TOTALLY be Alex! This story must happen!
OMC Pls tell me you plan to do more to this . . . i died laughing at the end. This was just SOOO random. SOrta how i could picture Twilight if she was . . . *clears thraot* well inebriated . . . . . AND LUNA . . . wow!! Somepony's got some BIG plans . . . . .
ReplyDeleteMust... Resist... Urge... To LAWL... At someone... Else's house...
ReplyDeletePfftbhftbh... HA!
OMG best drunk twilight shipping ever must have squel can't stop laughing hahahahaha
ReplyDeleteWow, that was crazy. As I said on DA, good read.
ReplyDeleteDon't drink and magic.
ReplyDeleteSucks that little silly shorts like this would never get accepted now a days (to say nothing of spamfics)
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