• Story: After Mare-Day Gras

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    [Shipping][Random] Hangover time! Some grammar errors but it's entertaining.
    Description: Twilight Sparkle tries alcohol for the first time. Hilarity ensues (I hope).
    After Mare-Day Gras
    esmaspäev, 7. märts 2011 op
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    31 kommentaari:

    1. Windchaser7. märts 2011, kell 22:31

      Magic and booze do not seem to mix.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Filly7. märts 2011, kell 22:32

      This was possibly one of the best storie's i've read. It made me laugh so hard, its amazing.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Fon Shaolin7. märts 2011, kell 22:34

      Giggled like a motherfucker.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne7. märts 2011, kell 22:38

      An entire story about drunken lesbian pony antics, and not a single mention of Rainbow Dash. Writefriend, I am disappoint.

      Nah, just kidding. Really funny story, I enjoyed it alot! You seemed to shift back and forth between present and past tense alot near the beginning, but it didn't make the story unreadable or anything.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Daffodil7. märts 2011, kell 22:45

      WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne7. märts 2011, kell 22:46

      *facehooves and proceeds to die laughing*

      VastaKustuta
    7. RefractedPegasus7. märts 2011, kell 22:55

      HILARIOUS! Absolutely hilarious! I'm sure my neighbors are thinking I'm crazy, laughing out loud at 1am.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Roy G. Biv7. märts 2011, kell 23:21

      If I keep this up, I may get a writer tag someday... Must write better! And not get sucked into IRC so much! And get more proofreaders!

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne7. märts 2011, kell 23:33

      I must admit... I was not expecting Princess Luna to factor into this anywhere!

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne7. märts 2011, kell 23:59

      Confound this ponies, they drive me to drink, I mean make babies with Princess Luna!

      VastaKustuta
    11. Pacce8. märts 2011, kell 01:47

      Now write one for each of the other five!

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 02:02

      @Anonymous

      You mean get drunk, then make babies with princess luna.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 02:11

      Dear Celestia, this is one of the best stories ever.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 06:41

      TwilightxLuna shipping? Did not see that coming...still lol'd though.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 07:08

      Why 5 stars? It's funny but...

      VastaKustuta
    16. CANDYBAG8. märts 2011, kell 09:30

      That was hilarious, will there be a sequel?

      VastaKustuta
    17. Evil Enchanter8. märts 2011, kell 10:29

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    18. SonicBrawler19928. märts 2011, kell 10:31

      @Roy G. Biv I might help proof-reading... As long as someone tells me what exactly I have to do. I guess it means reading and correcting any errors?

      VastaKustuta
    19. BunkieBunny8. märts 2011, kell 11:02

      I just finished reading this twice and I'm still laughing!

      VastaKustuta
    20. Pride8. märts 2011, kell 13:07

      Brilliant. 5 stars

      VastaKustuta
    21. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 13:53

      Great story, but it would be awesome if this was some kind of mini-series. The Hangover, equestrian edition, with each story another pony wakes up post mare-day gras.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 15:35

      Hehehehe, gross

      VastaKustuta
    23. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 17:15

      ... and that's the story of why we now have two mares in the moon!

      VastaKustuta
    24. Anonüümne8. märts 2011, kell 20:42

      I think my face broke from lulzing....

      VastaKustuta
    25. ToonNinja16. aprill 2011, kell 21:24

      @Anonymous
      Pinkie would TOTALLY be Alex! This story must happen!

      VastaKustuta
    26. Doc Steedly2. juuni 2011, kell 11:13

      OMC Pls tell me you plan to do more to this . . . i died laughing at the end. This was just SOOO random. SOrta how i could picture Twilight if she was . . . *clears thraot* well inebriated . . . . . AND LUNA . . . wow!! Somepony's got some BIG plans . . . . .

      VastaKustuta
    27. Kjh2424. juuni 2011, kell 11:54

      Must... Resist... Urge... To LAWL... At someone... Else's house...
      Pfftbhftbh... HA!

      VastaKustuta
    28. Solar Eclipse29. juuni 2011, kell 00:42

      OMG best drunk twilight shipping ever must have squel can't stop laughing hahahahaha

      VastaKustuta
    29. ItsTheWhinyGuys14. juuli 2011, kell 13:45

      Wow, that was crazy. As I said on DA, good read.

      VastaKustuta
    30. Daxter Galaxy17. oktoober 2011, kell 16:03

      Don't drink and magic.

      VastaKustuta
    31. Melodia8. november 2011, kell 21:09

      Sucks that little silly shorts like this would never get accepted now a days (to say nothing of spamfics)

      VastaKustuta

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