• Story: After April Foals Day

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    [Shipping] Some early April Foals day stuff! This time with Big Mac/Fluttershy. A Sequel to After Mare Day Gras

    Author: Roy G.Biv
    Description: Fluttershy never has been one for pranking, but THIS year she tries to get into the act!
    After April Foals Day
    Wednesday, March 30, 2011 op
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    17 comments:

    1. D.ShadowsMarch 30, 2011 at 3:03 PM

      Sounds like my idea, except Fluttershy terrorizes the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

      Yes, the worst fan fiction writer in the world is still shadowing Equestria Daily.

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    2. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 3:22 PM

      It was all going well an interesting... and then the ending.

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    3. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 3:25 PM

      Pregnant twilight.... Wut?

      Some parts are just silly

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    4. UnknownMarch 30, 2011 at 3:43 PM

      @Anonymous

      After Mare-Day Gras ended with pregnant Twilight. This is a sequel. First was drunk pony flashback. This is sad pony flashback.

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    5. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 3:58 PM

      @Anonymous
      What's wrong with a FlutterMac ending? Personally, I think that Ponyville's shrinking violet and Sweet Apple Acres' titan make a nice couple.

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    6. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 4:38 PM

      @Anonymous

      I don't have anything against it. It's even tagged shipping up there in the summary... and still, it feels out of place with the rest of the story. There's no leading to it, no hinting, it's just... there. It comes out awkwardly of the blue, and makes it feel like a last-minute addition.

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    7. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 4:48 PM

      Sorry if this is a stupid question, but who's Madame R?

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    8. UnknownMarch 30, 2011 at 5:02 PM

      @Anonymous

      Reference to 'Love of a Mule' a while back.

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    9. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 5:09 PM

      @Roy G. Biv

      Alright. Thanks.

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    10. UnknownMarch 30, 2011 at 5:16 PM

      @Anonymous

      I'm not the only author who gives that shoutouts. A few other have nodded to 'Madame R'.

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    11. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 6:03 PM

      that was adorable. You certainly captured Fluttershy's personality in the prank attempts. reading again

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    12. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 6:47 PM

      Ending was a little weak. What?
      5 Star - Fluttershy pranking failures.
      5 Star - Fluttershy spiraling depression.
      3 Star - Resolution.

      This isn't even about shipping, the end is just too cut and dry. It's like it was finished up in the middle, and a different part happens where everybody hugs and the three's company theme kicks in.

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    13. pollardyMarch 30, 2011 at 7:11 PM

      cute :)

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    14. zorinlynxMarch 30, 2011 at 7:28 PM

      Haven't read the story yet, but wow, that artwork is adorable! Kudos to the artist!

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    15. MarrockMay 10, 2011 at 9:46 AM

      Ok, is it odd that I find the idea of a pregnant Twilight to be mind-numbingly adorable?

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    16. La BarataMay 26, 2011 at 2:11 PM

      Awesome.

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    17. ItsTheWhinyGuysJuly 14, 2011 at 2:31 PM

      Like I said in my DA comment, this was great.

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