• Story: After April Foals Day

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    [Shipping] Some early April Foals day stuff! This time with Big Mac/Fluttershy. A Sequel to After Mare Day Gras

    Author: Roy G.Biv
    Description: Fluttershy never has been one for pranking, but THIS year she tries to get into the act!
    After April Foals Day
    kolmapäev, 30. märts 2011 op
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    17 kommentaari:

    1. D.Shadows30. märts 2011, kell 15:03

      Sounds like my idea, except Fluttershy terrorizes the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

      Yes, the worst fan fiction writer in the world is still shadowing Equestria Daily.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 15:22

      It was all going well an interesting... and then the ending.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 15:25

      Pregnant twilight.... Wut?

      Some parts are just silly

      VastaKustuta
    4. Unknown30. märts 2011, kell 15:43

      @Anonymous

      After Mare-Day Gras ended with pregnant Twilight. This is a sequel. First was drunk pony flashback. This is sad pony flashback.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 15:58

      @Anonymous
      What's wrong with a FlutterMac ending? Personally, I think that Ponyville's shrinking violet and Sweet Apple Acres' titan make a nice couple.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 16:38

      @Anonymous

      I don't have anything against it. It's even tagged shipping up there in the summary... and still, it feels out of place with the rest of the story. There's no leading to it, no hinting, it's just... there. It comes out awkwardly of the blue, and makes it feel like a last-minute addition.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 16:48

      Sorry if this is a stupid question, but who's Madame R?

      VastaKustuta
    8. Unknown30. märts 2011, kell 17:02

      @Anonymous

      Reference to 'Love of a Mule' a while back.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 17:09

      @Roy G. Biv

      Alright. Thanks.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Unknown30. märts 2011, kell 17:16

      @Anonymous

      I'm not the only author who gives that shoutouts. A few other have nodded to 'Madame R'.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 18:03

      that was adorable. You certainly captured Fluttershy's personality in the prank attempts. reading again

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 18:47

      Ending was a little weak. What?
      5 Star - Fluttershy pranking failures.
      5 Star - Fluttershy spiraling depression.
      3 Star - Resolution.

      This isn't even about shipping, the end is just too cut and dry. It's like it was finished up in the middle, and a different part happens where everybody hugs and the three's company theme kicks in.

      VastaKustuta
    13. pollardy30. märts 2011, kell 19:11

      cute :)

      VastaKustuta
    14. zorinlynx30. märts 2011, kell 19:28

      Haven't read the story yet, but wow, that artwork is adorable! Kudos to the artist!

      VastaKustuta
    15. Marrock10. mai 2011, kell 09:46

      Ok, is it odd that I find the idea of a pregnant Twilight to be mind-numbingly adorable?

      VastaKustuta
    16. La Barata26. mai 2011, kell 14:11

      Awesome.

      VastaKustuta
    17. ItsTheWhinyGuys14. juuli 2011, kell 14:31

      Like I said in my DA comment, this was great.

      VastaKustuta

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