• Story: Night of the Pinkie Pie

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    [Normal] Pinkie Pie...you so crazy.  Yah I got nothin.  Back to bed!
    Description: Ponies are disappearing on suspicious holidays. Pinkie Pie has a new cupcake range... and a cleaver.
    Night of the Pinkie Pie
    pühapäev, 27. märts 2011 op
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    23 kommentaari:

    1. Zarkanorf27. märts 2011, kell 09:15

      Woah, where's the title with this post?

      VastaKustuta
    2. JbanJboy27. märts 2011, kell 09:19

      Yeah, this post seems a tab bit title-less, but, I enjoyed the story none-the-less. Seems like a fun little take on "that" story, seems to have started like it was going to be Grim-dark, but I thought that it had a neat little clever twist at the end.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Cray0n27. märts 2011, kell 09:26

      Damn, he didn't use my cleaned up version...
      I am now a sad.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Ebon Mane27. märts 2011, kell 09:28

      Oh Pinkie, you so crazy.

      I was actually eating a cupcake when I read this and was uncomfortably reminded of certain infamous works on this site. What does it say that my appetite did not disappear at the reminder?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Zarkanorf27. märts 2011, kell 09:38

      That story went from scary to incredibly silly.

      And now the three fillies are scarred for life.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Cups27. märts 2011, kell 09:51

      I'm glad you submitted this here! It's a quick little chunk of comedic joy. It's just... fun. I love fun things. :D

      My favorite memory from this will always be Pinkie's quote from inside the bush, when I still wasn't sure if this was grimdark or not, because either way it was just epic.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Daffodil27. märts 2011, kell 09:53

      If MlP was aimed at a slightly older age group, I could see this being an episode. It's adorable.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Ridley27. märts 2011, kell 09:57

      I was so worried before I read the flashback, and I haven't even FINISHED that other fic. Great job, everypony was in character and it was fun to read. :)

      VastaKustuta
    9. Star Whistle27. märts 2011, kell 10:05

      Oh, Pinkie... don't you know it's creepy to make a life-size sculpture of your friend?

      @Ebon Mane
      That's because you're an omnivore!

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne27. märts 2011, kell 10:23

      Some quotations and stuff were kind of odd

      VastaKustuta
    11. Cray0n27. märts 2011, kell 10:39

      @Anonymous Yeah, I noticed too. Some of the wording and the misuse of quotations marks made it kind hard to read. I edited it up a bit to make it easier on the reader, but I guess he decided to use his original instead. It was a really fun story nonetheless.

      VastaKustuta
    12. SirLeandrea27. märts 2011, kell 11:59

      That really was good. I so wanted to scream cupcakes but this is so much better. Definatly a good link to throw at people who just read the original.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne27. märts 2011, kell 12:18

      Highly enjoyable story. I noticed some awesome references to "Bittersweet" as well as "Cupcakes".

      VastaKustuta
    14. Nova2527. märts 2011, kell 13:29

      Well... sure seems an incalculable amount of times better than a certain ''story'' (as far as one could DARE call ''that'' grimdark thing, a story...), which name shall not even be thought.

      For a second I feared it might have been a Replica of ''that'' story.

      But, raspberry jam! So, it's all good. (I might sound confusing, but just a bit)

      VastaKustuta
    15. Sandman27. märts 2011, kell 13:51

      Nice story, but the quotations are weird.
      The story seems familiar though.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne27. märts 2011, kell 14:04

      @Sandman You might be thinking about the story where "Cupcakes" was a hallucination suffered by Rainbow Dash, who then went to Pinkie Pie to sample cupcakes that she accidentally mistook for being made from ponies. (They were actually made from rainbows.)

      VastaKustuta
    17. Blueshift27. märts 2011, kell 14:33

      Which quotations are coming up weird for people, I can't spot anything wrong D:

      VastaKustuta
    18. Anonüümne27. märts 2011, kell 14:39

      @nova_25

      >post comment on da
      >copy
      >paste
      >profit?

      VastaKustuta
    19. Anonüümne27. märts 2011, kell 14:44

      @Blueshift You didn't use them properly. Each time a character speaks, you should begin a new paragraph. You also didn't make it very clear who was saying what. It's understandable, but you could have used an editor.

      VastaKustuta
    20. Sandman27. märts 2011, kell 14:52

      @Anonymous No, I've read that and wasn't that fun.

      It was more that the plot is familiar, and not to any pony fic.
      I think it was a short story about a boy thinking a women was killing and cooking dogs, he saw dog heads in her oven and her wearing what looked like a blood-stained apron. In fact she was a sculptor and was making clay replicas of the dogs.

      VastaKustuta
    21. Cray0n27. märts 2011, kell 15:08

      @Anonymous

      *ahem*

      VastaKustuta
    22. Lurks-no-More28. märts 2011, kell 03:58

      Pinkie is someone I could easily see making life-size edible versions of her friends. Especially Rainbow Dash. (Subtext, what subtext?)

      VastaKustuta
    23. Rainbowfinchbird28. märts 2011, kell 13:18

      me:Night mare moon????????
      Nightmare: WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
      Me: fights to death
      nightmaremoon dies
      R.I.N.P Nightmare Moon
      RINP means
      Rest
      In
      No
      Peace

      VastaKustuta

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