Image by Madmax.
Author: Lucid
Description: A /co/mrade finds himself in the world of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Will he ever get back home, or will he be stuck in a fantasy forever?Stuck Chapter 1
Stuck Chapter 2
Stuck Chapter 3
Stuck Chapter 4
Stuck Chapter 5
Stuck Chapter 6
Stuck Chapter 7
Stuck Chapter 8
Stuck Chapter 9
Stuck Chapter 10 (New!)
Also check out the Comic Interpretation.
140 kommentaari:
cccd, I must say I do miss your presence on lulz. But if this blog is what's been occupying all of your time, I support you whole-heartedly. The content you've collected on here is amazing.
VastaKustutaPlease continue this!
VastaKustutaSethisto you can delete the image I'm gonna update the google doc.
VastaKustutaummm.. it broken
VastaKustutaTHERE MUST BE MORE TO THIS. D:
VastaKustutaBack the fuck up, Sethisto = cccd?
VastaKustutaIf this is true... Good job, cccd. You're redeemed in my eyes.
@Anonymous
VastaKustutaIt's only a matter of time before I say something that scares everyone away :3
I am well known for not thinking before I speak! Or type in this case. I'm sure I already pissed some people off without realizing it.
Please continue to alert us of further developments. This was good, but there are a couple of things like "his thoughts were reeling with thoughts." But overall quite good!
VastaKustutaAha! Here this story is.
VastaKustutaLucid! Keep it up. Every chapter you write makes me interested in the next.
@SlyWit
VastaKustutaI don't know SlyWit. This routine of making an ass of myself has become distasteful, even to me. I think I've become unbalanced. I'm not going to be in the threads for a while, have fun.
@Lucid
VastaKustutasorry you are temporarily removing yourself from our threads for the time being, but YGTBKM here, once again...
I want to do basically the applecart scene maybe during it happening or after it happens. maybe the split second before it happens.
but as far as i know, you just want a picture correct?
i mean, clarification-wise you know...
@YGTBKM !EgjySd..5w
VastaKustutaWell, the way everyone's responding to my predicament is quite ridiculous despite the friendship vibe we're supposed to uphold. I know none of them will read this, most of them hate me already for this bloody fic.
The applecart scene was pretty epic, because he's pretty much approached by the entire town. Maybe right after, Mike's all shell shocked and scared half to death as a bunch of ponies are staring at him. Dude if you can only draw the back of pony heads looking at him with his face towards you, that'd be perfect. Whatever you're capable of. 2 weeks of asking for ANYTHING... you're a fricken godsend man. The link to madmax's comic on here is a good reference.
Thx, bro. Oh, BTW, I have a vanilla Minecraft account if you ever want to drop the server in a thread.
@lucid
VastaKustuta:D id love to stop by any servers you play anytime
this show about friendship,caring,sharing,and hapiness, aparently turns people OFF...
PIC: i love your idea, i was thinking something like 'mid-mad-dash' to the library, but i took a liking onto your idea :D have him backed against the door to the library, everypony looking at him.
(also, yfw, i just added everypony to Opera's dictionary lol)
@YGTBKM !EgjySd..5w
VastaKustutaDude, that sounds perfect. Take your time, man. Thanks.
I read this because I couldn't stand waiting for the new episodes. Now I'm stuck waiting for the updates for this. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. Well, you did a great job with this. Can't wait for the updates.
VastaKustutai love this story! i cant wait to read about luna.
VastaKustuta>The castle itself has, for a lack of a better word, humongous.
VastaKustutaI do believe I gave an audible "Yay!" when I saw this updated, I can't wait to see more fantastic work from you, dude!
VastaKustutaGood to see you're still writing, I really enjoy your work.
VastaKustutasometimes i wish i was mike
VastaKustutaIn a cartoon world, cartoon physics are your best friend. Unless you're the walking gag character instead of the hero.
VastaKustutaMOAR LUNA PLEASE!!!
VastaKustutaFINALLY new chapter!
VastaKustutaThanks Lucid!
"I hope you guys had your Wheaties this morning."
VastaKustutaBest line ever!
Hey Seth, you finally updated it. Thanks. I thought you forgot about it when I updated chapter 6.
VastaKustutaGreat work on chapter seven, Lucid. Can't wait to hear more. :)
VastaKustutaSorry I never got to reply much about the "predicament" on /co/. Personally, I felt it was a few more parasprite-like members who jumped at the chance to troll the heck out of a tripcode-member. I tried to ignore it and let it pass, but still wanted to say to you to just ignore those guys. I think there are far more looking forward to your updates than trying to spread anti-Lucid feelings.
VastaKustutaBut that's all in the past, and on to a brighter subject!
Chapter 7, keep it up. I'm still quite entertained when reading it, and I admit to being curious how you'll portray Luna when taking into account your "secret" deleted scene of her AND I'm also curious how you'll portrayel will end up different than the one I have planned for her.
Minor editing note, be careful of repeating words too close together (like "castle"). If they occur too frequently in too short a time, it gets a little distracting (however, people like Ernest Hemmingway used this to great effect, so you know that any rule in writing can be broken if you know why you're breaking it).
This is so good!
VastaKustutaI need moar!
Ah, the chapter headings make this a lot easier to jump to the new sections, thanks for adding them man.
VastaKustutaLol, I was actually working on something that's slightly similar to this for weeks now. Different take on it though, and I wasn't sure if it would work out well, but now that I saw well this worked I'm pretty excited to finish! Really well done by the way!
VastaKustutaThis story is awesome, it had me laughing all the time and the story is really captivating. Lucid, you are an awesome writer and I look forward to the story's continuation and conclusion. Don't leave us hanging now!
VastaKustutaI am reading this for the umpteenth time and it still is kind of funny to me how it leads in to the story.
VastaKustutaWith how the narration is, I expect something a little darker (might be wrong word for what I mean) in content but instead I get PONIES! YAY!
Good story, looking forward to updates.
@Anonymous
VastaKustutaYou're more than welcome to write your own. It's not like I copyrighted the idea... or should I... mwahahaha.
When do you update?
VastaKustutaThis stuff is super awesome :D
@Dawnlight
VastaKustutaPretty much whenever I'm not trying to write several papers for school as well.
:D
VastaKustutaUpdate moar! Because I asked nicely and you're really good =3
Also - I will actually buy you some cake.
VastaKustutaFuck yes. I'm going to look forward to this. Keep up the friendship, bronies.
VastaKustuta@SlyWit
VastaKustutaSecret deleted Luna scene? Do want.
@SlyWit
VastaKustutaYeah, sometimes I can't help but feed them. Unintentionally, of course.
You'll have to wait and see how I portray Luna. She's practically a blank slate of personality, which I like.
And regarding that "extra" thing with Luna? Maybe I'll let it emerge once I'm done with Stuck.
Need MORRRRRRE!!!
VastaKustutaThis is one of those time's im just Laughing all the way while reading it, This was exellent Just with the FUUUU I burst into laughter on the ground and that has only happend twice
VastaKustutaI applaude you good sir.
Yes Lucid, you updated finally, and with separate chapters too! I was getting tired of CTRL-F'ing all the time.
VastaKustutaI know it's kinda out of the ordinary, but this story is definitely one of the top 5 premier stories on ED, among all the shipping and grimdark. This and Paradise are my fav so far!
Don't take so long to update!
Well.
VastaKustutaThis is surprisingly, greatly more interesting to read than I first thought. A lot !
Exceptionnal writting, it feels very natural and the progression is going nicely, so far. (Part 8).
I wonder if the physique of the human will be used for a specific occasion ? He's twice the size of a normal pony and vertical instead of horizontal, after all.
@nova_25
VastaKustutaLol, was that supposed to be a fat joke? I know for a fact everyone on the Internet isn't a 300lb neckbeard.
From what I've seen ponies scaled to us would be to around 3'5", so it makes sense an average human would be giant to them. I figured a human of average build/fitness would be able to keep up with them better than a basement dweller, not that I'm implying anything.
@Lucid!0oSwOEGDel
VastaKustutaChapter 8 read. Oooooh! A promise of adventure, and the main cast working together for the first time all at once. I am interested.
Also, if you want to hear some more specific stuff sometime, we should arrange a time on google chat.
Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.
VastaKustuta@SlyWit
VastaKustutaSure SlyWit. I actually wanted to bounce some 'ideas' off of you anyways. You seem like anyone who would know a good plot line.
Anytime I see you in the threads?
has he broken the news to them about 4chan and their popularity yet? XD
VastaKustuta@Lucid!0oSwOEGDel
VastaKustutaThat sounds good.
If you see me in the thread, let me know you're waiting. I'll head to the newest Stuck doc when I see you post.
Please, keep up the good work, this is one of my favorite fanfics I've ever read so far.
VastaKustutaConfound these ponies they drive me to read fanfiction!
VastaKustutaSeriously, I haven't read fanfics in YEARS, and here I am reading yours. It's very entertaining. Like a comment above, it just feels very natural and everypony's portrayal is spot-on. And I guess we ALL want to be Mike. Can't wait to read more!
wow... i was amazed by this fanfic. best i ever read.
VastaKustutap.s. for some reason i have a weird feeling to Celestia is hiding something and will happen to be a bad guy or Luna will try to dethrone her sister (i hope it ain't what you planned for us, i like the whole accuracy to the real series and it would make it all... cheesy). i like where this story is heading, expanding the ponyverse and it's history.
@Anonymous
VastaKustutaI have a plan for expanding on one of the more confusing lores in the series (if you can guess it), which will also introduce and then slay a villain of sorts as well as explain how Mike got there in the first place.
Everyone will either love it or hate it, but that's what writing's all about.
I'm not used to anticipating the continuation of a story... And I'm anticipating this one oh so much.
VastaKustutaAny time is good......soon perhaps?
VastaKustutagood story LIKE
VastaKustutaGreat story, very nicely written. Very fluid and natural so to speak. I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work.
VastaKustutaupdate anytime this year please!
VastaKustutaThis is good, far better then I expected a 'human in Equestria' to play out, lots of laughs too, awesome stuff, looking forward to more.
VastaKustutathe story is starting to turn to shit why would anyone want to leave equestria. add more pinkie and fluttershy you homo
VastaKustutaHa! The author fit in a "Cupcakes" reference! I laughed at that bit. I can't wait for more of this.
VastaKustutaHe sticks his hand up to pre-emptively guess pinkies explosion of words. You can almost hear his mind going " LOL. NO!"
VastaKustutaI know I'm not the only one who thought the "FFFUUUUUUUUUUU"-to-theme song trade-off was hilarious.
VastaKustutaOh, boy...an almost subtle mention of THAT story...but of course, this is Pinkie after all.
VastaKustuta@Display Name
VastaKustutaThat was quite good.
I really like where this story is going, yet somehow I really want to see the ponies discover that he's aware of their world on Earth. Just to see reactions.
>cupcakes reference
VastaKustuta>"no, that's what the brownies are for!"
>mfw
I see you added a little element of mystery and suspense to the story now. If people weren't asking questions about why Mike is there, they are at least now wondering about Celestia and this crystal.
VastaKustutaAlso, I wonder if Rarity always sews to montage. And I'm quite curious if you'll make any sort of a joke with the fact Rarity doesn't know human fashion customs, and has never designed a suit for someone bipedal. I laugh at the idea of her adding a fake tail to the back because Rarity finds this will make him more like a handsome stallion (how STRANGE it is to not have a tail in the back!). Though, that might be taking it a little too far.
"I'm NOT wearing a tail!" Mike said. "I'd feel like a furry!"
"What's a furry?"
". . . best you don't ask that. Celestia might kill me outright."
Mike finds Pinkie annoying? >:(
VastaKustuta@SlyWit
VastaKustutaI'm pretty sure you're the only on that noticed that Sly, since I told you the entire plot now.
Also you're implying you don't come up with the best inside jokes. I'm thinking of using this, dude!
These are absolutely fantastic. Well written, funny and an interesting plot that puts jelly into most bronies heart.
VastaKustutaMake more stories please! :D
VastaKustutaThis culture-clash story is way better than others! keep it up! until I get to see new episodes rolling up every friday! :D
VastaKustutaThis is delicious!
VastaKustutaMore Please!
VastaKustutaThis is a deliciously well-written fanfic. (My favorite scene so far was "lying" to Luna.) Heart-warming and fun. Can't wait to read more.
VastaKustutaSo, This dead?
VastaKustuta... chapter 10, anypony?
VastaKustutaI have done similar story like this one, but he didn't show up for a long time now, if you can please do so :)
VastaKustutaHave faith in Lucid, everypony.
VastaKustutaI'm sure he'll be back with part 10 any day now.
Sorry I haven't updated in a while. I've been a royal jackhole to everyone that's been following this story. I've been dealing with a lot of personal issues lately. I'll have 10 up in a few days, when I get time.
VastaKustutahow do i read this shit it says private
VastaKustutaFantastic! I don't usually read fanfic but I just tore through all 10 chapters. Hope the next update comes soon!
VastaKustutaScrew going home, I'd just tell the ponies that there was no way to send me home.
VastaKustutaGreat story.
i hate the new chapters. i prefer the older.
VastaKustuta@Lucid!0oSwOEGDel
VastaKustutawell done dude. I'm now hooked onto this, to me sounds like you nailed each character and the brownie part made me lol :D + comic part made me lol hard to
an update, woot! finally!
VastaKustutaWow. I've just gotten into fanfics a bit, and I have to say, this one surpassed most of them already! I'm looking forward to the continuation. Nice work, brony.
VastaKustutai intend to read this one day
VastaKustutabut before i do
is it worth the time?
this is actually really really good please continue it
VastaKustutaThis is simply excellent! :D
VastaKustutaYEEEY ...he's back :D
VastaKustutai love this story...i was kinda sad thinking it was a dead topic :D
can't wait for the next one :D
...This is the best thing. Ever
VastaKustutaThank you Lucid! I was almost starting to get a little bit afraid that my favorite fic wasn't going to be finished. I'm glad you're back.
VastaKustutaGreat story, can't wait to read some more of it.
VastaKustutaAlso, I was thinking about writing something similar to this one, maybe an indirect sequel of sorts, like some nods to this one but otherwise completely different.
Is it scary that I left my room after reading this, only to realize I wasn't in Ponyville???
VastaKustutaIt's been a while so I had to reread all the previous chapters again before I read 10.
VastaKustutaI love this story so much, but I've gotta say, I'm seeing a lot of sentences with words dropped from them. They're still readable enough to know what the missing word was, but there are quite a few of them.
Other than that, keep up the great work!
I'm liking this so far, and I'm curious to see where all this goes. Aside from a few sentence structure nitpicks, I think this is just fine. Keep up the good work!
VastaKustuta@Mischief
VastaKustutaGo right ahead, Mischief. Enough people have written these stories already. I think mine was the first one on Equestria Daily before the fanfiction explosion, but that doesn't trademark the plot. Go for it!
I love the idea of a human in MLP and I love the idea of it being one of us even more! I beg of you to continue this!
VastaKustutaI lost it at:
VastaKustuta“No, silly, that’s what the brownies are for!”
ROFL, this is alot more entertaining than I thought it would be. Kinda like reading a comic strip.
W-Wait...N-NO That can't be the last chapter! D':
VastaKustutaThere needs to be much more...if this was a book I would buy it!
Please! Please continue this.
Every chapter I read makes me want to see what happenes in the next Chapter.
I question I have is,
(1.)When will the next chapter be here? if there is another...How long will it take?
I don't mean to sound inpatient but I simply must read more!
I really enjoyed it and I crave for there to be more to this story...
thanks for the fun story, was both fun to read, And it has inspired me to write my own story.
~Your awaiting reader, Anonymous
ps.I will also have this face till the next chapter...
www.youtube.com/watch?v=80jXvWjFe9s
This was a lot of fun to read.
VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaSorry anonymous. Summer for me usually means staying inside as little at possible. I'm still working on this, just at a slower pace.
Will there be anymore of this?
VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaYou bet your sweet flank there will be. Lucid always delivers.
Oh in the name of Trollestia, please update soon. I love these so much.
VastaKustutaI'd hope by now you're done with Chapter 25. I'm getting antsy for the next update.
VastaKustutaso this i'm guessing the author has been killed because its been months without an update
VastaKustuta@Muppetz
VastaKustutaGood Lord lets hope that isn't the case...
Please update brony, we're counting on you
VastaKustutaLucid Y U NO UPDATE. For reals bro, this is my favorite story only next to The Ponies Meet /CO/.
VastaKustutaHoly Crap Lucid, you were NOT kidding when you said "Summer for me usually means staying inside as little at possible."
VastaKustutawhat are the names of all the fanfiction mentioned in this story
VastaKustutaLucid, please update.
VastaKustutaThat is all.
I beg you man, this is my favorite fanfic. You have to update this, please! xD
VastaKustutawhat are the names of all the fanfiction mentioned in this story
VastaKustutaHa, I got some good laughs out of this.
VastaKustutaLucid.
VastaKustutaQuit sitting around and take my money!
^what he said
VastaKustutaThis is so much fun to read ^^
VastaKustutaAlso am I the only one that realized that nopony noticed that he told them he was from Earth that they have 3 kinds of ponies Pegasus, Unicorn and Earth?
Will there be an update anytime soon? :O
VastaKustutaSorry I've been a ghost guys. I've pretty much been working for the summer. I'll get going again once the new season starts. I PROMISE.
VastaKustutaGreat, can't wait for an update :D
VastaKustuta♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
VastaKustutaWell the new season started, time to start writing.
VastaKustutaAlso my names Mike! (just needed to get that out)
It's October...
VastaKustutaSeason 2 Episode 3 plays this Saturday.
Why do the good ones update Tri-Annually?
I really hope you continue this storym it's really good! :)
VastaKustutaAaaaany day now.....
VastaKustutaBut seriously Lucid, any estimate when you'll update?
Something a bit more specific than the implied "Somewhere between any day now and some time in April".
just wanted to say that i love your story so far.
VastaKustutaIt's been practically four months now, times up, you gotta deliver.
VastaKustutaI guess this story is dead.
VastaKustutaAwww, no more, I was hoping for some epic adventures
VastaKustutaAww. That's too bad, this was one of the earliest fics I read (and my first "human-in-Equestria"-type story too), and I was quite interested to see how it goes on. :/
VastaKustutaMore of this, por favor! This fic is what turned me into a brony in the first place!
VastaKustutaWhat happened to this story? It was a great story, and it made me a Brony. Please finish this story.
VastaKustuta@Lucid I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it takes so no rush and please never stop with your incredible story xD
VastaKustutaA few more months and we can celebrate the first anniversary of this fic being dead! WOO!
VastaKustutaOH WAIT, it will be the SECOND anniversary, my bad!
VastaKustutaLucid... You promised us more!!!!!
VastaKustuta