• Story: Sick Day

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    Summary: Rainbow Dash has a cold! The rest of the gang take it upon themselves to brighten her day, by any means necessary. 
    Sick Day

    Plus the comic version after the break. 
    kolmapäev, 2. veebruar 2011 op
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    8 kommentaari:

    1. Cereal Velocity7. veebruar 2011, kell 08:28

      The comic had me laughing at the first panel.

      Well done, Knigh/tg/uy.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne10. veebruar 2011, kell 20:32

      Nice one. I am almost sure that if Fluttershy flew here get in here first she could have done a great job. In fact, almost every friend of Rainbow Dash could have done a good job if she was alone. I have a slight doubt about Pinkie Pie but she always tend to surprise everyone with her odd idea.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne16. märts 2011, kell 02:29

      I've got to say, that comic is awesome.. Really awesome.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Wierdplatformer14. juuni 2011, kell 04:35

      This story does not have enough comments! Poor Rainbow Dash, she just wanted some sleep.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Cereal Velocity14. juuni 2011, kell 10:19

      Good lord, this story is old. What brings you here?

      VastaKustuta
    6. ItsTheWhinyGuys13. juuli 2011, kell 19:42

      I liked this one. Everyone was done well, and it was a nice, fun read. This indeed needs more love, as has been mentioned.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Aidinthel6. august 2011, kell 20:09

      @Cereal VelocityAn increasingly desperate search for fresh pony content.

      What's here is good, but it feels unfinished; as though you wrote the intro to an episode and never bothered with the rest of it.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Cereal Velocity6. august 2011, kell 20:14

      I'll agree with you, there. When this was written, longer fiction was... I'm not gonna say frowned upon, because it wasn't, but it was rare.

      Not that that's an excuse, but I'm happy to let this one sit and gather dust where it belongs. It's not my best.

      VastaKustuta

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