• Story: Scooting Along

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    [Normal] Something Madmax requested and Squeek did, so you know it going to be good right?!
    Description: Scootaloo show's up at Rainbow Dash's door in the middle of a storm. She claims eveything's fine, but is it really?
    Scooting Along
    Tuesday, February 15, 2011 op
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    17 comments:

    1. UnknownFebruary 15, 2011 at 7:41 AM

      This is a great one and could easily win the ship-off. I D'awwww'd hardcore.

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    2. madmaxFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:39 AM

      OH MY GODDESS!!!! I can't believe squeak finished this already :)
      now I have to bake him 41 cakes :D
      thanks squeak!

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    3. MalakaFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:47 AM

      @madmax

      That's as many as 4 10s and then 1.

      And that's wonderful.

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    4. ScherzoFebruary 15, 2011 at 9:29 AM

      sokyoote

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    5. uSeaFebruary 15, 2011 at 11:28 AM

      That was adorable, in character and well thought out.
      Loved it.

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    6. Cereal VelocityFebruary 15, 2011 at 1:30 PM

      A few mistakes here and there, but overall very enjoyable! Extremely cute.

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    7. PacceFebruary 15, 2011 at 11:48 PM

      I really really liked that...
      I got a little heart warmified when Rainbow was looking for Scoot in the woods.

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    8. PecanFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:09 AM

      Two words:
      Kawaii. Desu.
      *Hugs Scootaloo*

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    9. RegalFebruary 16, 2011 at 11:08 AM

      Great story. I think you did very well writing for Rainbow Dash.

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    10. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2011 at 12:19 PM

      yeah i really liked this story and its a nice break from all the lesbian shipping ive read in the last few days

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    11. SlyWitFebruary 17, 2011 at 10:10 PM

      Hmm . . . there are sections of the prose that make me want to take it in as a little peer review and give you feedback on. Just small things, a mistake or two that newer writers are bound to make.

      But the reason I feel that way is because I enjoyed the story. It's interesting to me to see your talent creep up in everything you've written. You've got this natural way of leading everything to a heartfelt and satisfying climax.

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    12. Midnight ShadowMarch 6, 2011 at 5:59 AM

      There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and the structure could do with some work, but it's an adorable story, please write more :)

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    13. Doctor WhatApril 9, 2011 at 8:32 PM

      Good story. It made me feel quite happy! I believe that you captured RD's character pretty well and the ending was heart-warming. :)

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    14. ThisHomeBoy24April 17, 2011 at 1:24 AM

      Very nicely done, i wish they would make this into an episode.

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    15. La BarataMay 21, 2011 at 11:54 PM

      Brilliantly written. The only thing I find strange is pony parents trying to guide colts and fillies into a certain career. With the whole existance of cutie marks thing, it seems rather pointless, as they're each born with their own special destiny, which nobody can really have any effect on, as good as their intentions might be. Regardless, spectacularly done. Five stars for you.

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    16. WierdplatformerJune 14, 2011 at 4:28 AM

      Mentor Dash wins! Scootamazing!

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    17. RoxorJune 26, 2011 at 1:02 AM

      This was a nice take on the little pegasus.

      Maybe I should have a shot at writing something about her?

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