• Story: Scooting Along

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    [Normal] Something Madmax requested and Squeek did, so you know it going to be good right?!
    Description: Scootaloo show's up at Rainbow Dash's door in the middle of a storm. She claims eveything's fine, but is it really?
    Scooting Along
    teisipäev, 15. veebruar 2011 op
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    17 kommentaari:

    1. Unknown15. veebruar 2011, kell 07:41

      This is a great one and could easily win the ship-off. I D'awwww'd hardcore.

      VastaKustuta
    2. madmax15. veebruar 2011, kell 08:39

      OH MY GODDESS!!!! I can't believe squeak finished this already :)
      now I have to bake him 41 cakes :D
      thanks squeak!

      VastaKustuta
    3. Malaka15. veebruar 2011, kell 08:47

      @madmax

      That's as many as 4 10s and then 1.

      And that's wonderful.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Scherzo15. veebruar 2011, kell 09:29

      sokyoote

      VastaKustuta
    5. uSea15. veebruar 2011, kell 11:28

      That was adorable, in character and well thought out.
      Loved it.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Cereal Velocity15. veebruar 2011, kell 13:30

      A few mistakes here and there, but overall very enjoyable! Extremely cute.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Pacce15. veebruar 2011, kell 23:48

      I really really liked that...
      I got a little heart warmified when Rainbow was looking for Scoot in the woods.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Pecan16. veebruar 2011, kell 01:09

      Two words:
      Kawaii. Desu.
      *Hugs Scootaloo*

      VastaKustuta
    9. Regal16. veebruar 2011, kell 11:08

      Great story. I think you did very well writing for Rainbow Dash.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne16. veebruar 2011, kell 12:19

      yeah i really liked this story and its a nice break from all the lesbian shipping ive read in the last few days

      VastaKustuta
    11. SlyWit17. veebruar 2011, kell 22:10

      Hmm . . . there are sections of the prose that make me want to take it in as a little peer review and give you feedback on. Just small things, a mistake or two that newer writers are bound to make.

      But the reason I feel that way is because I enjoyed the story. It's interesting to me to see your talent creep up in everything you've written. You've got this natural way of leading everything to a heartfelt and satisfying climax.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Midnight Shadow6. märts 2011, kell 05:59

      There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and the structure could do with some work, but it's an adorable story, please write more :)

      VastaKustuta
    13. Doctor What9. aprill 2011, kell 20:32

      Good story. It made me feel quite happy! I believe that you captured RD's character pretty well and the ending was heart-warming. :)

      VastaKustuta
    14. ThisHomeBoy2417. aprill 2011, kell 01:24

      Very nicely done, i wish they would make this into an episode.

      VastaKustuta
    15. La Barata21. mai 2011, kell 23:54

      Brilliantly written. The only thing I find strange is pony parents trying to guide colts and fillies into a certain career. With the whole existance of cutie marks thing, it seems rather pointless, as they're each born with their own special destiny, which nobody can really have any effect on, as good as their intentions might be. Regardless, spectacularly done. Five stars for you.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Wierdplatformer14. juuni 2011, kell 04:28

      Mentor Dash wins! Scootamazing!

      VastaKustuta
    17. Roxor26. juuni 2011, kell 01:02

      This was a nice take on the little pegasus.

      Maybe I should have a shot at writing something about her?

      VastaKustuta

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