• Story: Pretty Fillies

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    [Shipping] A few late entries for the Valentines shipping thing coming up.
    Description: Spike and Big Macintosh share their thoughts about the ideal mare.
     Pretty Fillies
    Monday, February 14, 2011 op
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    19 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 11:54 PM

      Poor Spike... Rarity is really messed up in this fic, not even considering Spike a legit person to ask her out.

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    2. PacceFebruary 15, 2011 at 12:02 AM

      You are a terrible person!
      But the story is alright!

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    3. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2011 at 12:12 AM

      d'awww, so cu-
      >dat ending
      WHY

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    4. Anon WriteponyFebruary 15, 2011 at 1:14 AM

      @Anonymous

      Because.

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    5. Reading BronyFebruary 15, 2011 at 10:17 AM

      You are quite the card. Was not expecting that ending. Still cute though leading up to it.

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    6. PecanFebruary 16, 2011 at 12:57 AM

      Now, hold on. We're assuming Spike asked first! It's possible that Big Mac asked first, and we don't need to get violent, right? RIGHT?

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    7. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2011 at 12:09 AM

      Or Rarity just thinks that Spike's way too young to consider like that. He is described as a "baby" dragon, after all.

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    8. Anon WriteponyFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:29 AM

      @Pecan

      Next time: Spike gets his revenge.

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    9. KMarch 5, 2011 at 5:46 AM

      Awwww, now that just makes me sad. Poor Spike. He never gets any tail.

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    10. AnonymousMarch 25, 2011 at 4:44 PM

      am i the only one that got the sweeny todd reference. i love that song and now it's stuck in my head thanks alot

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    11. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 1:26 PM

      The link seems to be broken :(

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    12. La BarataMay 26, 2011 at 12:49 PM

      D'OH!
      Oh, Spike...

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    13. AnonymousMay 27, 2011 at 5:26 PM

      @Pecan

      We know he asked: "Having been denied by the love of his life hurt him more this time than others."

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    14. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 10:59 PM

      Oh, wow...

      I just want to hug Spike now...

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    15. AnonymousJune 6, 2011 at 2:09 AM

      ♫ SWING YOUR HAMMER HIGH, SPIKEY; SWING IT TO THE SKY... ♫
      ♫ RING THE SKULLS OF ALL OF THOSE WHO WOMANIZE... ♫

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    16. AnonymousJune 24, 2011 at 1:22 AM

      I absolutely loved that ending.

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    17. AnonymousJuly 23, 2011 at 8:27 PM

      Pretty fillies
      Fascinating
      Sipping coffee
      Dancing
      Pretty fillies
      Are a wonder
      Pretty fillies

      Sitting in the window or
      Standing on the stair
      Something in them chills the air

      Pretty fillies
      Silhouetted
      Stay within you
      Glancing
      Stay forever
      Breathing lightly
      Pretty fillies

      Pretty fillies
      Blowing out their candles or
      Combing out their hair
      Even when they leave
      They still are there
      They're there

      Pretty fillies
      At their mirrors
      In their gardens
      Letter-writing
      Flower-picking
      Weather-watching

      How they make a colt sing
      Proof of heaven as you're living
      Pretty fillies! Sir, pretty fillies
      Yes, pretty fillies
      Pretty fillies
      Pretty fillies
      Pretty fillies

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    18. 7October 12, 2011 at 6:45 PM

      Wow amazing poem.you should definitely register! I'm ATM am just waiting for spike to take his revenge.... Ah shipping,one of the great joys of a bronys life...
      My best friend told me about it,he intro'd me to bronyness.
      A teacher of mine knows tho,she tells all her classes=I get pissed.wait.wait just a second.why the heck am I typing this. Oh screw it why do i care. My thumbs hurt. I can bet that I have the 2nd longest post that actually has something to do with Mlp.

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    19. ExtraSoapDecember 24, 2011 at 6:23 PM

      I think spike just recieved a slap to the face from pony cupid. I know the feeling :'(

      Great Story! Sequel? Maybe? Please?

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