• Story: Overnight Mail

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    [Normal] Luna and Derpy hooves?! What kind of crazy combo is this!?
    Summary: Derpy and Luna swap jobs for a day.
    Overnight Mail
    kolmapäev, 9. veebruar 2011 op
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    16 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne9. veebruar 2011, kell 13:29

      Wow, that was really quite good.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Cereal Velocity9. veebruar 2011, kell 13:52

      This is wonderfully well-written; I enjoyed the hell out of it. You have an exceptional narrative voice. I specifically liked Derpy's characterization (which we don't often get enough of in other stories) and the bit with the dog.

      Keep it up!

      VastaKustuta
    3. Pacce9. veebruar 2011, kell 15:35

      Wow.
      I laughed when Luna commandeered the couch and then was kinda moved by the end.
      Good work!

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne9. veebruar 2011, kell 18:07

      Very, very good!

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne10. veebruar 2011, kell 11:07

      Darn you, anon writer. You made me tear up. That's not supposed to happen.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Reading Brony10. veebruar 2011, kell 17:48

      Good show sir that was very cute.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne10. veebruar 2011, kell 19:20

      The prayers to Luna were very touching. C'mon, I shouldn't be sympathetic towards Diamond friggin-Tiara of all ponies!

      Derpy fics are awesome! Nice work.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Zarkanorf6. märts 2011, kell 13:09

      Now THIS personification of Derpy- Bright Eyes, I can live with. I wish we knew who this mystery author is; they did such a wonderful job with the story-telling and gave us moments to laugh and admire.

      Great job, Anon!

      VastaKustuta
    9. Heavy Weapons Pony2. aprill 2011, kell 17:25

      why is this not one of the most populer stories on this site? Its amazing :O

      I dont know why this had to be Derpy exactly, seeing as how she sounds and acts like any normal pony in this story. But its still good.

      VastaKustuta
    10. ZZZZZXXXXX7777711. aprill 2011, kell 17:09

      I think It's great that you know the difference between autism and astigmatism. It annoys me to no end when derpy is portrayed as retarded. Good writing too. Imagery cold be touched up a little but other than that I thought it was a great story1

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne16. aprill 2011, kell 18:22

      Great story, Moabite, whoever you are.

      VastaKustuta
    12. British Derpy Hooves18. mai 2011, kell 02:27

      I really like this one...mainly for the points other people have brought up in comments above me. I talked about it on Episode 1b of my little podcast because it is the best Luna fic I have read so far.

      http://mylittlepodcast.blogspot.com/2011/05/episode-1b-cute-kick-to-face.html

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne1. juuni 2011, kell 01:01

      This was actually my first pony-fic, and because of it, I have given so many others a chance. Thank you.

      VastaKustuta
    14. DarthVader25. september 2011, kell 11:12

      I wish this fic was more well known. The Luna segment was very fun and enjoyable. But the 2nd half with Derpy was truly inspired. Bravo good sir bravo!

      VastaKustuta
    15. Ergo Cogito15. jaanuar 2012, kell 11:17

      This brought me to tears. Oh Luna.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Lahirien28. november 2021, kell 13:44

      This is also on Fimfiction: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/13772/overnight-mail

      VastaKustuta

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