• Story: Not Quite the Best Flyer in Equestria

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    [Normal] More Derpy Hooves by Pacce! Enjoy!
    Description: How did Ponyville's lovable wall eyed mail mare find herself in the Best Young Flyer's competition?  And more importantly, how did she place?
    Not Quite the Best Flyer in Equestria
    Saturday, February 19, 2011 op
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    17 comments:

    1. PacceFebruary 19, 2011 at 3:02 AM

      Also, do you chaps prefer stories posted as images or as word documents?

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 3:36 AM

      I prefer images, but a lot of people don't like them because it's difficult to open and read on, say, an iPhone or the sort.

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    3. PacceFebruary 19, 2011 at 4:01 AM

      Alternate Document link!
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/186QgQGu5BTrmgg5ST1wqFm4GyB3GWNn0RUHyVsayYHs/edit?hl=en

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 8:15 AM

      Holy shit, is Ditzy Doo just a figment of Derpy's imagination?

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    5. LazarusFebruary 19, 2011 at 9:28 AM

      @Anonymous

      Ummm... What?

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 9:52 AM

      I enjoyed the constant shifts between D'awww, haha, and oooohhhh poor thing.

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    7. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 10:22 AM

      Awesome story, especially considering that the episode that inspired it has been out for less than a day!

      I kinda like stories being posted as images.

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    8. PacceFebruary 19, 2011 at 11:32 AM

      @Anonymous
      Nah, Ditzy's a pony I made up using one of the possible names for Derpy. I like her, she's horrible.

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    9. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:56 PM

      I liked how you tied in the from Sonic Rainboom, good work!

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    10. SqueakFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:57 PM

      Awww, that was cute. I liked it! Seems quite Derpy-ish if that makes sense. If I had to point out anything to work on, you can be a bit over descriptive or redundant in places, but never so much that it ruins the fic. All in all this is an adorable little story about everyone's favorite Mail Mare!

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    11. SethistoFebruary 19, 2011 at 3:58 PM

      I liked this one! At least derpy got something out of it!

      But wasn't she the #7 pegasus that did 15 somersaults or whatever after dash swapped numbers?

      anyway 4/5!

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    12. PacceFebruary 19, 2011 at 4:43 PM

      @Sethisto
      Nope, 7 was the one who shouted LET'S DO THIS.
      And then it showed Rainbow look at her 6 and then go to Derpy's 15.

      Glad you liked it!

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    13. yrthakFebruary 20, 2011 at 1:41 AM

      Poor thing! Even Celestia didn't get her name right!

      Great stuff. Thanks for writing!

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    14. PacceFebruary 20, 2011 at 9:23 PM

      If you wanna see what Ditzy looks like:
      http://dizzypacce.deviantart.com/#/d3a0k9r

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    15. SlyWitFebruary 21, 2011 at 3:40 PM

      Ha, ha! I enjoyed this one. Probably my favorite work from you, Pacce. The writing seemed a bit tighter than it did in Jr. Speedsters, and it achieved it's goal well. A delightful short narrative that got me to laugh when I didn't expect to.

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    16. ZarkanorfFebruary 26, 2011 at 11:04 AM

      Ohmygosh, how did I forget to comment on this thing a week ago, hnnnnnnnnnnng!!!

      A very cute short narrative you have here, Pacce! I remember reading this story and how it brightened up my day a bit. Keep on trucking!!

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    17. BronyatheartJune 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM

      the google docs page refuses to allow access due to an excess of redirects. could you fix that?

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