• Story: Not Quite the Best Flyer in Equestria

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    [Normal] More Derpy Hooves by Pacce! Enjoy!
    Description: How did Ponyville's lovable wall eyed mail mare find herself in the Best Young Flyer's competition?  And more importantly, how did she place?
    Not Quite the Best Flyer in Equestria
    laupäev, 19. veebruar 2011 op
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    17 kommentaari:

    1. Pacce19. veebruar 2011, kell 03:02

      Also, do you chaps prefer stories posted as images or as word documents?

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne19. veebruar 2011, kell 03:36

      I prefer images, but a lot of people don't like them because it's difficult to open and read on, say, an iPhone or the sort.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Pacce19. veebruar 2011, kell 04:01

      Alternate Document link!
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/186QgQGu5BTrmgg5ST1wqFm4GyB3GWNn0RUHyVsayYHs/edit?hl=en

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne19. veebruar 2011, kell 08:15

      Holy shit, is Ditzy Doo just a figment of Derpy's imagination?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Lazarus19. veebruar 2011, kell 09:28

      @Anonymous

      Ummm... What?

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne19. veebruar 2011, kell 09:52

      I enjoyed the constant shifts between D'awww, haha, and oooohhhh poor thing.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne19. veebruar 2011, kell 10:22

      Awesome story, especially considering that the episode that inspired it has been out for less than a day!

      I kinda like stories being posted as images.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Pacce19. veebruar 2011, kell 11:32

      @Anonymous
      Nah, Ditzy's a pony I made up using one of the possible names for Derpy. I like her, she's horrible.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne19. veebruar 2011, kell 13:56

      I liked how you tied in the from Sonic Rainboom, good work!

      VastaKustuta
    10. Squeak19. veebruar 2011, kell 13:57

      Awww, that was cute. I liked it! Seems quite Derpy-ish if that makes sense. If I had to point out anything to work on, you can be a bit over descriptive or redundant in places, but never so much that it ruins the fic. All in all this is an adorable little story about everyone's favorite Mail Mare!

      VastaKustuta
    11. Sethisto19. veebruar 2011, kell 15:58

      I liked this one! At least derpy got something out of it!

      But wasn't she the #7 pegasus that did 15 somersaults or whatever after dash swapped numbers?

      anyway 4/5!

      VastaKustuta
    12. Pacce19. veebruar 2011, kell 16:43

      @Sethisto
      Nope, 7 was the one who shouted LET'S DO THIS.
      And then it showed Rainbow look at her 6 and then go to Derpy's 15.

      Glad you liked it!

      VastaKustuta
    13. yrthak20. veebruar 2011, kell 01:41

      Poor thing! Even Celestia didn't get her name right!

      Great stuff. Thanks for writing!

      VastaKustuta
    14. Pacce20. veebruar 2011, kell 21:23

      If you wanna see what Ditzy looks like:
      http://dizzypacce.deviantart.com/#/d3a0k9r

      VastaKustuta
    15. SlyWit21. veebruar 2011, kell 15:40

      Ha, ha! I enjoyed this one. Probably my favorite work from you, Pacce. The writing seemed a bit tighter than it did in Jr. Speedsters, and it achieved it's goal well. A delightful short narrative that got me to laugh when I didn't expect to.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Zarkanorf26. veebruar 2011, kell 11:04

      Ohmygosh, how did I forget to comment on this thing a week ago, hnnnnnnnnnnng!!!

      A very cute short narrative you have here, Pacce! I remember reading this story and how it brightened up my day a bit. Keep on trucking!!

      VastaKustuta
    17. Bronyatheart16. juuni 2011, kell 00:00

      the google docs page refuses to allow access due to an excess of redirects. could you fix that?

      VastaKustuta

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