Description: A MLP and Kamen Rider crossover. When the timeline is altered and Equestria becomes filled with monsters and evil-doers, it's gonna take a lot of Rider Kicks to set things in order. And maybe even some abuse of Time Travel.MLP X Kamen Rider: Elements of Justice
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ReplyDeleteWhat...?
So lost...
...The fuck is going on here?
I know what Kamen Rider is, and it is awesome. Just like MLP:FiM. But I still don't know what to make of this.
ReplyDeleteOh my god, this is gonna be so epic, Skull and joker just make it more epic.
ReplyDeleteThe grammar is kind of wonky, and there's some really, really awkward word choices in there, but the characterization is spot the fuck on. Rainbow Dash and Momotaros are especially amazing.
ReplyDeleteEagerly awaiting the appearance of OOO and Real Kuuga (not yuseless).
Okay, I agree now that it's pretty good, but I would have to say that it would be a bit better if the writer would somehow explain what Kamen Rider is in the story. Because, even though fans of Kamen Rider, like myself, already know who these characters are and can understand what's going on. But for those that don't what Kamen Rider is, may get lost and may not fully enjoy the story.
ReplyDeleteDon't worry, there'll be exposition/explanation on Riders right at the start of chapter two.
ReplyDeleteAlso, sorry about the first chapter being a bit on the confusing side. I was trying to capture the "Climax" feel of Den-O, just like how Chapter Two will attempt to capture the "Oh hey, look at that lizard dude with the fangs and claws, and OH DEAR LORD, HE JUST CHOPPED THAT DUDE'S HEAD OFF! But hey, he's a nice guy" feel of Amazon.
Also, just gonna say this now: Not all Rider series will have representation in the story: I.E. No Faiz, Decade, and possibly Blade if I can't think of some interesting interactions.
And not all Rider series being used in this story will have main riders appearing (Otoya/IXA is all the fabulousness this story can take from Kiva.)
Lastly, I am thinking of doing this story in a bit of a Megaman style with reader input. By that, I mean something like this:
SELECT YOUR ADVENTURE FOR CHAPTER 3:
1. Spike and Deneb enjoy a nice stroll through a changed Ponyville, now ruled by monsters and the only source of protection for many of the humans(?!) and ponies are a group of Riders seemingly based around dragons.
2. Momo/Dash try to escape from the Moons, but find that they can only fight against them in order to survive. Thankfully, they get some surprise assistance, and the Moons are quite shocked.
3. Rarity and Urataros try to find information out about what has happened, and wind up in a club filled with classy folks who enjoy the taste of vintage.
4. Twilight awakens, and finds herself in a whole new world. Greeted by two detectives, their super lawyer, and a vexed criminal that seeks revenge against them, Twilight has to stay alive all while trying to ask questions about what has happened.
5. Ryutaros and Pinkie Pie find themselves quite bored without any music while they're fighting to survive. Good thing there's some well trained musicians around.
6. Whatever Derpy is up to.
The only Kamen Rider thing I've ever watched is Black, this makes me kinda dizzy and confused.
ReplyDeleteWill wait and see it with part 2.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteAre the two detectives Kamen Rider Double/W?
One of them (Kamen Rider Joker) is one half of W. It'll be explained later in the story.
ReplyDeleteThe other (Kamen Rider Skull) is the most awesome and manly Rider since those of Showa.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cN02xjAiLcs
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWhere's the other half of W, Philip, in all this?
He'll be showing up later.
ReplyDeleteTrust me, got this stuff all outlined.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteGo for the #4, Twilight plus W sounds really awesome!
My 2 favourite (current) series combined?! Yes!
ReplyDeleteI honestly have no idea how to feel about this... It has the potential to be something truly epic.
ReplyDeleteWhen are we gonna get chapter two?
ReplyDeleteAwesome story. The Taros make a logical choice for a first meeting, either them or Decade.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
I can't choose between 1-5,though I'm tempted to just say 6 to see what would happen. 3,4 and 5 are to most appealing.
You should know that the only reasonable choice is choice 6 !
ReplyDeleteThis is all Decade's fault, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteONORE DICKEDOOOOOO!!!
So where the hell is he? The guy is a shoe-in for crossovers involving Kamen Rider.
@Anonymous Or Kamen Rider Diend, he can travel through the worlds too, and he's a thief too. It's more logical have him as the reason.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I have to go with Number 4.
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