• Story: The Last Treasure

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    [Sad] More spike stuff by Victorian Hellsly
    Description: The tale of a dragon and the last moments of his life.
    The Last Treasure
    pühapäev, 13. veebruar 2011 op
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    18 kommentaari:

    1. Cereal Velocity13. veebruar 2011, kell 12:58

      I have to admit, this was very moving, and very well-paced. Excellent work. I hope more people take note of this piece.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Sethisto13. veebruar 2011, kell 13:09

      It's in download format for some reason, authors gotta change that i think :x

      VastaKustuta
    3. Cottonmouth13. veebruar 2011, kell 13:12

      Victorian Hellsly eh?

      I loved this story, so I'll make sure to remember that name and read your future fics.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Victorian R. Hellsly13. veebruar 2011, kell 13:15

      @Sethisto

      Yeah I think I uploaded this up wrong, anyone know how I can fix it?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Fairy Slayer13. veebruar 2011, kell 13:22

      @Victorian R. Hellsly
      I did the same thing by accident at first, and if I remember correctly I ended up deleting the document and then uploading it again with the "Convert to Google Doc Format" (or whatever) option was enabled. There may be a way to replace or convert it after, but I find the interface too clumsy (and so very slow) to poke around too much.

      Anyway, like I commented on AFFN, I love this poignant story. It's a tearjerker but so worth it.

      Oh, and I see you have another story out now too. :)

      VastaKustuta
    6. Sethisto13. veebruar 2011, kell 13:48

      @Victorian R. Hellsly

      Just do what fairy slayer said and i'll throw the new link up.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Victorian R. Hellsly13. veebruar 2011, kell 13:55

      Thanks Fairy, I love your stories too! : )
      Ok, I think I fixed it, if Sethisto could switch the old file with this I think it should be good then. Sorry, first time using Google Docs. : /

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/172kZqJNZ4E1oiA5oUZJyMtU7osSi_lX3uIHs4PMOd4k/edit?hl=en#

      And thanks for the reviews so far everyone!

      VastaKustuta
    8. Sethisto13. veebruar 2011, kell 14:17

      @Victorian R. Hellsly

      Fixed it

      VastaKustuta
    9. Victorian R. Hellsly13. veebruar 2011, kell 14:21

      Thanks Seth! You rock brony. : )

      VastaKustuta
    10. Ziqh13. veebruar 2011, kell 21:21

      My word, this was a touching story.
      Many thanks, Hellsly.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Zarkanorf11. märts 2011, kell 22:07

      Hellsly, holy fuck.
      I will eat your brain and absorb your creative writing powers, I swear to gog.

      Awesome work! I honestly cannot 5/5 stars hard enough.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne15. märts 2011, kell 23:02

      Good job! Good thing there's the Story Archaeology or I would have missed this.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Cottonmouth16. märts 2011, kell 01:40

      I come back a month later and still find this fic highly enjoyable.

      I'm glad it was dug up. Hopefully more people will read it.

      A worthy addition to be placed under the "Spike" tag.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne16. märts 2011, kell 05:32

      Wonderfully written, deserves more attention with the fic archeology.

      VastaKustuta
    15. HeatWave22. aprill 2011, kell 02:01

      Very well written and moving. It's is hard for us to understand immortality, or even a life beyond our meager century or so, yet you seemed to capture it nicely between the two central characters. Impressively written and succinctly stated, a more than worthy read.

      VastaKustuta
    16. La Barata22. mai 2011, kell 00:07

      Don't fucking cry.........:'(

      VastaKustuta
    17. Colegate5525. juuli 2011, kell 19:05

      Its brevity enhances its emotional punch. The narrator reveal at the end was handled deftly too.

      VastaKustuta
    18. McPoodle13. mai 2012, kell 23:22

      Very powerful.

      VastaKustuta

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