• Story: Fluttering Heart

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    I don't know if I would call this one direct shipping, but it's still some Fluttershy/Dash.
    Description: The day of the Best Young Flier competition, as seen from the eyes of Fluttershy. Can she find the perfect cheer in time to express the feelings in her heart?
    Fluttering Heart
    esmaspäev, 21. veebruar 2011 op
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    22 kommentaari:

    1. Hikuro1421. veebruar 2011, kell 13:23

      dawwwww

      that was a cute story. I thought flutter shys tiny yays were just ADORABLE ^^

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 13:37

      I love the irony at the end where Dash thinks the pony she heard was someone beside Fluttershy. Very sweet story.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 13:49

      yay.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Muffin21. veebruar 2011, kell 14:02

      WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

      VastaKustuta
    5. Malaka21. veebruar 2011, kell 14:23

      D'aaaaaaaaaaw.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 15:52

      Super adorable. <3

      VastaKustuta
    7. Kie21. veebruar 2011, kell 16:21

      Very well written and definitely felt in character there.

      ...Yay.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Phoe21. veebruar 2011, kell 16:29

      Wow, look at all these positive comments. This is a warm fuzzy feeling that will stick with me all day.

      I sometimes worry that if my alma mater realized what I was up to, they would demand the return of my degree. But right this moment, I don't think I care. Thanks, everyone!

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 20:02

      I D'awwwwwed so hard. You are a supurb writer. You interwove your story so well into the original that I felt like it acctualy happened. Also you had no spelling or grammatical mistakes as far as I could find. Keep writing brony, for all of us.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 21:22

      This was great.

      Well written, surprisingly in-sync with the episode's happenings - and, I'll admit, I d'awwwed pretty hard at the ending.

      Great job.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 21:32

      Fluttershy is too adorable.

      I love this fanfic. <3

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne22. veebruar 2011, kell 03:18

      Well, my face just melted completely off. This was beyond adorable.

      VastaKustuta
    13. LawnPygmy22. veebruar 2011, kell 03:30

      Jelloshy made me giggle. :D

      yay~

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne23. veebruar 2011, kell 21:20

      'Aaaaaawwwwww, that was absolutely adorable Phoe, if you keep on writing I may just have to let out a little "Yay." of my own.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne27. veebruar 2011, kell 01:18

      I D'awwwwwwwwed my face off. :)

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne3. märts 2011, kell 23:49

      This story made me promptly vomit puppy dogs and rainbows after reading it due to sheer cuteness overload.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Anonüümne26. aprill 2011, kell 18:25

      yay. :)

      VastaKustuta
    18. J29. aprill 2011, kell 09:41

      The only signficant criticism I ha ve for this is Fluttershy seemed a bit hostile towards the other ponies' presence. However, that could also be chalked up to Having had her expectations subverted and being stressed.

      My favoirte part, though, was her practising and getting worried she was too loud for that hour.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Banana9. juuni 2011, kell 01:19

      Great story.

      I like the idea of what went to through Fluttershy's mind throughout the whole competition.

      My only qualms with this piece is that it was too short!

      I wanted mooore.

      VastaKustuta
    20. Ihaveanamebecause?21. juuli 2011, kell 03:23

      D'aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

      VastaKustuta
    21. Virga Rainboom30. juuli 2011, kell 13:05

      Phoe, this was well done. I remember when I first saw "Sonic Rainboom" thinking that it was unfair and unkind of Rainbow Dash berating Fluttershy so harshly in front of her friends after she was working so hard to cheer for Dashie. The "I wish -you- guys could come to the show" as if Fluttershy is negligable.

      As another pony said in the comments, "You interwove your story so well into the original that I felt like it actually happened". I kept finding my self agreeing with what you had Fluttershy experiencing at each point. I also felt, "Hey, what the hell is Rarity doing upstaging dear Dashie!"
      At the end, I suppose that Dashie at least had the tenderness to lie to Fluttershy instead of hurt her feelings, which is of course ironic since she didn't have to lie, and sad because Fluttershy soooooo wanted Dashie to hear her loving enthusiasm for Dashie's accomplishment.
      I also wish this was longer, which shows how much I enjoyed it!
      Thanks!

      VastaKustuta
    22. Anonüümne29. detsember 2011, kell 12:02

      there is a sequel called chasing rainbows
      btw i didnt make this or chasing rainbows

      VastaKustuta

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